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 Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 3:15 pm
fine i'll take the class yay im first in here smile
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:23 am
Ok class #1 rules of RP.
1. the rule of equivilent exchange = if someone gives you three paragraphs try to give the same Word count or paragraph number. It makes for better posts and longer Rps ^_^
If you are given 2 paragraphs try to give 2 paragraphs back, writers block is a way of life and no one is exempt from that evil. When you get Writers block take a little longer to reply.
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Lunar magican Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:28 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:32 am
2a. Details: Write like your actually in the situation, if your character would have water running over their toes then describe how it feels some and let the other person know through facial expressions how the character feels about it
2b. Details: Describe how the character feels about the enviorment is it hot? is it cold? what do they see when looking around, tunnel vision is not such a good thing, like your character only sees the other character(s) in the rps
2c. Details: Describe what your character is thinking, are they happy sad depressed anxtious? Let thoughts be seen by the other Rper even though they can't act on thoughts. It adds depth to your posts.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:33 am
ok can you do as i asked tho plz????????
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:41 am
Now i will start a One on one dealing with Fantasy.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:27 pm
But before we start we shall do a few writing prompts.
First writting prompt describe a scene around your character. Use the rules i have given you and i will grade accordingly.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:34 pm
It's sunset...her favorite time of day. She is a vampire, and sunset means she can come out to hunt. She is a sadistic vampire who loves the hunt. Especially when they put up a fight, or try to run. Her name is Nora, a 1000-year-old vampire, though she looks 21, and she is wearing a silk top and jeans with thigh-length boots. She has gold eyes and silver hair, and loves weapons, though her nails are sharp enough to cut diamonds.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:42 pm
Ok this is a better way of writting that same paragraph:
It was sunset, her favorite time of the day. Nora, a female vampire smiled as she came out from her lair. She walked out she was a century old. Her golden eyes held the love of pain and misery. She was walking down the street her mid-drift silk top and black jeans hugged her body closely as she listened to the Click clack of her thigh high boots. She paused at a cross street and pushed her silver hair out of her gold colored eyes.
She smiled as she thought about what her night would be filled with, hunting toying with her meal, possibly taking her meal home and torturing them with her assortment of weapons. She smirked as she walked scanning the street for the one person that would entertain her tonight.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:01 pm
Prompt:
Describe a wounded person after a fight on the verge of passing out. Include thoughts, how things feel weight wise, what's around them(streets, rocks, grass hills what?), how they hit the ground and their final thoughts before blacking out, how the blacking out takes them.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:08 pm
*that could have gone better.* he thought, lying there face down with blood pooling from his leg and shoulder wounds. His sword is upside down in his hand and feels like it weighs a million tons. The grass tickles his nose, and the rock under his right side feels like a fist driving through him. He thinks about what tactics he could have used to better success, and when he could have retreated to drive forward later. He feels like the world is crushing his back, and he sees red. Then the red spreads over his eyes like a film. He blinks, rubs his eyes, but it's still there. Then black spreads over the red, giving it a blood-like hue, and then he passes out.
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