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 Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:24 pm
Welcome, this is my own mini contest for all you poets and romantics.
Rules:The only rule is to make it good, cheesey, romantic, and maybe funny, all key to a great poem.
Prize: 10k gold
Basicly, send in your best valentines poem to be evaluated by me, and if i like it, you may just win! biggrin
Give it a go? it cant hurt to try, entrance is free, post your poems here.
Competition is from 8th february -- 15th february.
Short and sweet huh? Good luck, and happy valentines! biggrin heart
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:01 pm
Ugh, I'm no romantic but I did write a fairly cheesy poem a while back. *rummages through her past* Ah, here it is... Quote: "Flowers" The seed was planted with a kiss, Wondering what will grow out of it. Soil will help it to grow. So, the movies and the park are all you know. A plant is revealing And with it, your secret dating. It is rising beyond the dirty floor. Your feelings are so much more. You're hoping this lasts for eternity. The sprout has a new leaf. Everything is perfect. No bugs have yet to hurt it. Finally said the words, "I love you." Symbolizes a flower's first bloom. *An Original poem by Naomi-Jane Eh, not my best but that one would have been too long. xp
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:08 pm
sorry but i do not support valentines day : 3 But here is a poem my friend sent me.. Quote: "If the heart could speak what would it say We try and tell of the feelings that are deep within us from day to day Love is a vast emotion it can fill you up inside it can rip you apart and leave you questioning Why? But Love was given to us as a gift so precious and devine So that we can share it with others so that the light may through us shine Some of us look from day to day deperately to just feel it Some of us sort through our thoughts just trying to figure out how to reveal it One does not know the key to it's mystery that runs deep It exists always even while we sleep Love was given for a reason It is truly just to share An emotion to show someone else how deep down we really care"
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 1:58 am
Well, congratulations Naomi, your the winner, only 2 to choose from unfortunatly, but good poem none the less. Your 10k will be sent today~
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:11 am
Woot! Thanks even though I personally like Lohkee's poem more...but you are the judge. I saw the trade before this so it threw me off a little. Thank you again, Moppy! ♥ -Jesus is my Lord-
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:16 pm
Huh? But I saw that poem online. I was looking through poems and saw this one. It was written by a girl named Olivia in an elementary school. But it's a good choice.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:21 pm
♥ I love saying this to you... To which poem are you referring, Jina? ...Did you hear me? ♥
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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:52 pm
here is my poem:
From the Genesis of our created love,
Springs this season of celebration,
Signs and wonders from above,
Brought forth God's Revelation.
Within this, our day, I sow my vows,
The seeds to my remaining life,
Surrendered, here-in, to Beauteous Bride
Now stood before me as my Wife.
Love's olive tree, so rich with fruit,
Shoots forth from soil of hearts divine,
To end the season of love's pursuit,
For now the Lord has made you mine.
Amongst the wheat there grows no weeds,
For this love I hold is pure and true,
The love that blossoms from these seeds,
Flourishes, Elaine, only for you.
And, so to God I raise my hand,
With glowing heart I lift my voice,
To thank Him for a Love so Grand,
And Bride who makes my heart rejoice.
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