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 Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 2:49 pm
Overwhelming sadness never seizing grief,
my life seems at an end but no me beliefs
Time has stopped but death's not here
And i am afriad though nothing's here to feer
I crawl back in my little shell
But now i say ''Oh what the hell!
My life is now forevergone
I REFUSE TO BE TIMES LITTLE PAWN!''
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 6:06 pm
ok. I thought it was ok. But you might want to watch your grammar there.
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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 8:17 am
I agree. I like it but, grammar is really important.
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