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A Part 2 to A Narrow Escape

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Lady of the Moons Shadow

PostPosted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 12:34 pm


I had no clue what to name this piece. I wanted it to be longer, but I was dying to post it. Plus, I don't feel like studying.

Once again I regained conciousness. Luckily it wasn't in some alien smelly closet. I awoke in my bed in my room. The aqua colored lights that radiated from the clock at my bedside read 1:42 AM. My eyes blinked multiple times feeling a sting from my contact lenses. I never sleep with my contacts on I thought slowly rising out of bed and gingerly headed to the bathroom in the dark. The light wasn't necessary. The bathroom was only a few feet from ny bed. I didn't bother to carefully secure the lenses. I had to change them anyway so I just threw them in the trash and went back to bed falling back alseep in nearly seconds.

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BEEP BEEP.......BEEP BEEP. The alarm sounded at 5:00 AM. My hand reached out and touched the clock multiple times to turn it off. I tiredly rose out of bed, grabbed my specs and walked to the bathroom. The light was turned on shrinking my pupils. I took my glasses off, washed my face and put in a fresh pair of contact lenses. After the lenses rested securely on the cornea of my eyes, I glanced at my reflexion in the mirror. I was still wearing my aqua colored halter top and black jeans. My clothes were in perfect condition and there were no scars on my shoulder or arm. Memories from the previous day flashed in my mind. Maybe it was just a dream I thought on this as I went back into my room to gather clothes to wear. I had to go to school.

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I walked downstairs at 7:00 AM. I was wearing a white, fitted collared shirt, red white and black plaid skirt, chain belt, matching plaid tie, and black and white stripped hand gloves with black skulls on the side. I left my straight, fluffy brown hair out of my tannish face which had no makeup. My feet had no shoes.

My older brother James' eyes met mine and we glared at each other for 3 seconds.

"Do you gotta wear that Kelly?"

"Why not? This skirt goes up to my knees."

"I ain' never see no Bahamian chile dress like that."

I sighed and rolled my eyes.

I have 3 brothers. James is the oldest at 21. Leo is 19. And Tom is 13. I'm 16 and the ONLY girl in the family. Mother walked out five years ago and dad's somewhere in Paris doing only God knows what. He moved us to California because James and Leo are in college here and dad doesn't want to take me and Tom with him on his trips.

Tom hurry up or you guys 'll be late." James shouted grabbing his keys.

"Coming!"

This was alot to type. Anyway this part was to describe a little bit of the character. Read and Review
PostPosted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 2:00 pm


Very, very good. All the way interesting.

Colorful Shadows
Captain


LanceCalvis
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:42 am


By the standards of my own creative writing and Role-play posts. I would rank this as slightly above average. It was a fairly interesting read.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:22 pm


LanceCalvis
By the standards of my own creative writing and Role-play posts. I would rank this as slightly above average. It was a fairly interesting read.


thanx that means alot. i hope the next part comes out as good.

Lady of the Moons Shadow

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