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Holy Lirin-chan

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 10:59 pm


Now that I've officially gotten back into the mood of writing, I'm working on an old vice of mine: a psychic story.

Plot: A facility where naturally born psychics are studied and enhanced is destroyed by one of its strongest subjects, a mindwalker. Two subjects who escape, one carrying the future sons of the mindwalker, escape together and turn to the woods, where they live in seclusion for many years. 19 years later the mother has passed on and the father-figure takes the now grown twin boys off the island to the continents, where he meets with an old detective friend of his who helps to enroll the two in school and offers them a home and a job. But what really happened to the people in the facility, those scientists so bent on finding means to enhance themselves and the man with the power to control hundreds of minds all at once? Will the twins be able to keep hidden in plain sight for long?

I'm working on the prologue still and I'm hoping to post that, but I'll have to clean it up a bit before I can even try that.
BUT. I've already changed a few things after talking it over with someone, however chances are I'll be posting a few things-chapters, questions, random paragraphs-in order to solidify the plotline, since I tend to deviate, and make it enjoyable.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:34 am


Well from what i've read, it seems quite interesting. I'm already trying to guess what's gonna happen >.< Wish you'd put me out of my misery x3

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Holy Lirin-chan

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:11 pm


Hahaha! Be glad I didn't post all that I have written. I had my friend read it and she said she felt like she'd read the first few chaptes; but that's because when I get into it, I write out a very detailed summary. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

My only problem now is consistency; keeping up with it in order to actually get to writing it. I lose interest much to easily.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:07 pm


Lol that does sound very promising and I, like you, lose interest in things easily..

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