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Vixie Moondew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:07 am


'Nuff said. Whee.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:03 pm


Pretty good. Though I think it could use a little more just... Substance....

...I'm trying to think how to put it...

It needs more depth and feeling to it.

HieiJagonchi
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Vixie Moondew

PostPosted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:05 pm


Yeah. Thing is, it's been like four years. I can't really remember my 'feelings' at the moment. And I don't want to make stuff up. Nah, that's going to happen when James comes in. But until then, I'm just kinda setting the story and letting you guys know a bit about myself. And why I have so many little issues. If I get really cheesed off at something, it's because of something you said that reminds me of that (Whoa there, buddy).
PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 8:43 am


I agree. Needs more feeling. Maybe you can guess how you felt... put more expression into it. 3nodding

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