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Click that to read it, I don't want to waste an assload of space copypasting it.
It's not done, it's a draft, and it had a page limit, because it's my creative writing semi-final.
Tell me what you think about it! I love constructive criticism and compliments!
Rayno, the main character, is supposed to be a representation of myself. He's reckless, cocky, and doesn't take s**t. The other characters were suppose to be my friends and I'd reveal the truth about them through my own personal thoughts, but I decided against that because it conflicted with my thoughts too much. I might do that with another story.
Anyway, enjoy!
Click that to read it, I don't want to waste an assload of space copypasting it.
It's not done, it's a draft, and it had a page limit, because it's my creative writing semi-final.
Tell me what you think about it! I love constructive criticism and compliments!
Rayno, the main character, is supposed to be a representation of myself. He's reckless, cocky, and doesn't take s**t. The other characters were suppose to be my friends and I'd reveal the truth about them through my own personal thoughts, but I decided against that because it conflicted with my thoughts too much. I might do that with another story.
Anyway, enjoy!
