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 Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:05 pm
Esan sat on an old log, he ran his knife down a stick. Creating a point. The campfire crackled loudly, Esan sat and enjoyed it. His swords was in his scabbard, it was lying next to him. In the wet orange leaves. His armor lied next to an old tree, the fire gave off enough light to see it. It was dented, red drops and streaks could be seen on it. Esan yawned, he heard light footsteps behind him, the twigs under the feet let off a small crack. Esan quickly turned and tossed his sharpened stick at the enemy. It flew past the person. "Your aims off, Esan." Said the female voice. Esan realized who it was and smirked.
"I'm just tired, it was a long journey." Said Esan, stretching. "So, Kikyo, where's the rest of the group?"
"They're on their way, they wanted to pick a up a few more sticks for the fire."
The fire still glowed brightly, Esan could hear the drunken singing of his troops in the distance. The rest of the group emerged from the shadows of the forest.
"Esan, they are getting loud..." Said FubukiT, looking over to the troops. Behind him was Becca, Andrew, and Baltro.
"They're just drunk. Let them enjoy the small party. It was a long day..." Said Esan with a small laugh.
"What a lazy general..." Muttered Becca.
"I don't see you doing anything." Laughed Esan.
"I gathered some wood, FubukiT brought food, Baltro watched over to make sure nothing happened. What did you do?"
"I watched over to troops." Answered Esan, he stared into the fire. He remembering the raging fires of the battle earlier in the day. The screams of the frightened citizens. The citizens he couldn't protect. Kikyo saw Esan gaze into the fire, she knew his expression.
"It's ok. We were able to kill the rogues. The citizen's may of died, but with their death, came safety to other villages." Said Kikyo.
"Yah, I should of looked at it that way!" Laughed Esan, he stood up and stretched again. Water dripped from the large trees that loomed over them.
"If your done relaxing, we need to plan for tomorrow." Said FubukiT, he reached into his pocket. He pulled out a small, folded map. He rolled it out on a small moldy stump. The map's edges and sides were tattered. Stains were on the map aswell. "I suggest we go this way." Said FubukiT, as he traced the trail with his finger. The group nodded, Baltro yawned.
"Tactical planning is so boring. Can't we just decide on the way tomorrow?" Asked Baltro, she was tired of all the talk.
"Tactics are important, what if we are ambushed as we plan? We wouldn't be able to finish it." Answered Andrew with a know-it-all tone.
"Patience is a virtue..." Muttered FubukiT. "We must plan this out, no matter how much time this takes. I'd rather be tired then dead..." The fire still flickered as they spoke.
Hours passed, the fire was slowly going down. The night began to become day. The sun could be seen rising over a small hill in the distance, the trail was covered with a variety of leaves. Baltro sat as the group finished up the plan. Her head bobbed up and down. Struggling to stay awake, the water dripping from the trees made a nice beat. "Alright, its done." Said Becca, yawning. She walked to her tent, FubukiT stood up and followed her. Esan got up and was about to go to his cozy tent when Andrew stopped him.
"Your going to keep guard tonight." Muttered Andrew, he yawned as he said it. The troops drunken roars settled down, Esan just nodded at Andrew's command. Too tired to resist, he slowly sulked over to the log he was previously sitting on. He sat and stared into the glowing embers that remained from the fire. He couldn't help and remember the day again. The screams of helpless citizens. The decision to slay to the rogue leader, or to save the village by opening the closed locked gate that kept the rogue from running was echoing in his head. He was able to slay the rogue leader, at the cost of half a village. He lowered his head, hoping more villagers were able to escape the raging fire. Esan shook her head, he hated being shrouded with regret. The wind began to howl, the leaves danced and flew across the forest floor. The tree tops shook, light water droplets rained down. Like a small rain storm, the sound was soothing. Esan lied back on the log, the embers giving off some heat. Esan grabbed his scabbard and held it in his left hand. His right hand over the hit of his blade. He lied in the position, he didn't like being in this dark forest. Barely any light was able to peak through the crowd of trees. The howling grew, what was thought to be the wind was really a lone wolf. The embers and the fragile sunlight that poked through the tree tops should it, it's eyes glew. The silver fur shone with the light, glistening. A low growl came from it, it slowly walked around Esan. Esan sat himself up, his hand was tightly gripped on the hilt of his blade. He had slain beasts stronger then this before. It continued to circle Esan, it's teeth could be seen. He let out a loud, vicious growl as it lunged itself at Esan. It's mouth wide open, the teeth were snow white. Esan quickly slashed his sword, the wolf dropped dead by his side. It's forehead shined with red blood, Esan wiped his sword on the leaves. Leaving a small red line on the leaves. He stuck his cleaned sword into the scabbard. He lied to sheathed sword beside the log. He dragged the wolf in few yards away, then returned to camp. More light was poking it's way through the tree tops. The group emerged from their tents with a yawn.
"Good morning." Muttered the tired Esan, he eye's were bloodshot from the loss of sleep.
"Go ahead and sleep. I'm going to wake up the troops and prepare them for the journey." Said FubukiT, Esan was already asleep. His snores were loud, the rang through the forest. FubukiT just shook his head, and began his walk to the troop's camp. Becca followed him, Baltro poked Esan with her sheathed sword. Andrew just shook his head.
Too be continued! XD it was kinda boring, but it will grow slowly XD
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:15 pm
uhh is this another BW story? XD lol goood
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:22 pm
its not burning wills XD its a story of generals XD though everyone will have the skills in bw XD except the flying XD
becca is an archer
fub is the mage
Esan(me) is the warrior
Baltro is a hunter
Kikyo is an ex-assassin
Andrew is the tactition thats also an alchemist
XD i wanted to make a strange, uncommon group XD
typhads gonna have a different role, gotta think of one though XD
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:53 pm
why the hell am i always the mage!? XD
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I-CrissXApplesauce-I Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:05 pm
why am i always a flippin archer..at least ima sexy one...
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:12 pm
Andrew walked through the forest, he avoided the puddles. He explored some of the forest, the sun has risen. Shreds of light made it into the forest. The wind was calm, the smell of moss filled the air. Andrew looked at a patch of plants, he examined them. Realizing they are herbs, he pulled them from the ground slowly. Leaving the root attatched. His left hand was carrying a large number of herbs. They gave off a sweet smell, Andrew walked back to the camp. The small fire pit was filled with ashes. Andrew lied the fresh herbs on a rock that he scraped the moss off of and he grinded the herbs with his palm, Kikyo walked around. She was bored, she wanted to start the journey as soon as possible. Baltro continued to poke the sleeping Esan, he was in a deep sleep. Baltro got bored and joined Kikyo. They both ran around through the forest, drips of water still fell from the trees. A hour later, FubukiT and Becca arrived back at the general's camp. Esan was still sleep in his log, a bird was pecking his stomache. "Wow, he sleeps through anything..." Muttered FubukiT, Bucca chuckled. Baltro and Kikyo returned from their hike. Andrew finished the herbs and stored them in a small jar he carried. A snake slithered through the wet leaves, almost blending in. Becca's keen eye's saw through the camoflauge and she quickly reached for her bow and pulled out an arrow. She aimed the arrow at the small snake, which seemed to notice Becca, then hid under the leaves. Becca lowered her bow, the snake escaped. Esan woke up with a jolt as he saw a bird pecking at his stomache.
"Get off!" Shouted Esan, waving his arms and legs. The bird flew away into the trees, Esan fell from his log and sank into a pile of leaves next to him.
"Esan, get up. We need to start or we won't make it by nightfall..." Said FubukiT, watching the troops groan and sulk their way over to the them.
"Ah, thats right!" Exclaimed Esan, pushing himself up. "Let's start, I don't feel like traveling at night." Said Esan with a yawn. He rubbed his eyes, the path was narrow. Shimmers of light lighted the patch. Esan wore his armor and equiped his scabbard to his waist. His shield hung on his back, he didn't wear a helmet. He began to march to the path. The group followed, as did the moaning troops. They walked through piles of leaves and puddles. The smell of decaying animals and moss now filled the air. The general's still marched through, the troops followed. "So once we reach the town. We find the target and leave?"
"Thats the plan." Said FubukiT, he walked with his arms crossed. Kikyo skipped and hopped around, enjoying the warm tempature of the mossy forest. Croaking could be heard everywhere.
"I hate frogs..." Muttered Baltro, "not only are they annoying, but they can give your location away!"
"Just deal with it, we're almost there." Said Esan, the end of the forest was near. It looked bright outisde, he could see a large metal gate in the distance. As they approached the forest exit, they heard tapping of feet through the forest. In front of the exit, goblins with small, rusted chainmail gathered. They muttered to eachother, some cheered. The eyed the travelers, one approached the group. Saying something in a different language. The generals scratched their heads.
"They want our equipment and money." Said Becca, she spoke with words with uncertainy. "I think..."
"Well, there's a big different. Find out which one..." Said FubukiT, he heard the troops in the back laughing and complaining. The goblin that approached them grab a dagger that hung loosely on it's back. It lunged forward, Becca quickly took out and arrow and fired. It pierced through the goblin's skull. The rest of the goblin's began to huddle. Their tones showed fear. They dispersed, running in different direction.
"Cowards..." Muttered Esan under his breath. He yawned and continued to march. They approached the gates, the sun reflected off them. It was almost blinding, Esan approached the gate. He knocked on it. "We are the general's of King Typhad, we request an audience with the king!" Demanded Esan, his tone stern.
"For what?" Asked the guard from the other side of the gate, he sounded old.
"That is to be discussed with the king only!" Replied FubukiT from the backround.
"Request accepted!" Answered the voice from the other side of the gate. The gate door's began to creak, they opened inward. They ran across the ground, kicking up dirt. The guard walked infront of them. He didn't appear old. His armor looked frail. "I shall escort you to the king." Said the guard, he had a halbeard in his hand. He began to walk towards the castle. The castle was surrounded by a moat, a sturdy bridge lied across it. Chain's hung from each side, they were old and rusty. The guard approached the throne room. "Generals from King Typhad have come to speak with you! They are coming in!" Shouted the guard, as he pushed open the throne doors. The throne room was huge. The walls colored with tapestry, then floors were marble. The group walked in, the king sat in his throne.
"King Icon! King Typhad of the Northern Kingdom requests an alliance against the South!" Shouted FubukiT, kneeling. "He asks for an alliance among the the North and East Kingdoms!"
"The East Kingdom has done well to stay out of the war, do you expect us to enter now?" Asked Icon, he seemed angry. "The last war destroyed our military!" Shouted Icon.
"The East Kingdom still has you though, you are equal to atleast two hundred soldiers!" Exclaimed FubukiT.
"No matter my strength, I refuse the invitation for an alliance." Replied Icon, though the look in his eyes disagreed with his words. He longed for battle, for the close-combat.
"I see, well, the King plans to attack the South with full force in a few months! If you change your mind, please send a messenger." Said FubukiT, rising. Icon remained silent, his head lowered. The group exited the castle, their troops waited outside the gate. They were wrestling and pushing eachother over. "I think we need to be more strict with our troops. They are acting like children..."
"But they get serious when needed, so it's ok to play around." Said Esan, watching them.
"Lazy general..." Muttered Becca.
"Lazy lazy!" Chanted Kikyo, laughing. She was hyper, and was itching for battle. The gates closed as they left.
"So what next? Typhad won't be pleased with Icon's answer." Said Baltro, scratching his head.
"Then we don't return yet. There is another kingdom. The West Kingdom may comply..." Said Andrew, pointing ahead.
"But that's a long walk..." Moaned Esan. He stared down the path, the journey will be harsh.
"Lazy general..." Muttered Becca again. She shook her head. "We aren't slacking off, we need to return to the king with some good news!"
"Yah, or we may not get payed..." Muttered Andrew, sticking his hands in his empty, moneyless pockets.
"Hmm, alright. Let's begin the travel then..." Muttered Esan.
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:17 pm
good. u shud make a DIFFERENT story not a similar one. A DIFFERENT ONE. too much like BW
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:21 pm
fine fine XD i'll think of something, but i'm in the fantasy mindset XD and what classes do you want then fub and becca? XD whenever i make a new story, i'll change them XD
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I-CrissXApplesauce-I Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:25 pm
make like a modern day thing..like something that would go on today?or future things
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:25 pm
i want fub to be awesome like the character Kunare in my story; XD
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:21 am
I HAD A DREAM! XD the perfect idea for a story! the dream felt real and it felt like i was the actual esan character XD IT WAS AWESOME XD well i have an awesome storyline, i'll post it and let you CHOOSE your abilities XD
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