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 Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 6:48 pm
Ok I'm gonna try to get into the guild now that I know how the guilds work a little bit better :3 so I'll start with one of my newest poems I guess
It's only been edited once tho and took me a week of writing to get it all down and organized before that >_> tell me what you think I guess lol, I kinda want to write a poetry book so I really want honest opinions :3
Death and sorrow coat the walls
They watch, waiting for weakness
I hold myself close, trying to keep from falling apart
They creep in closer, picking at pieces of my broken heart
I weep for my memories as they fade away; as the shadows take them
for the pieces of my heart I'll never see or use again
I think of you, keeping those memories safe from them
I hold onto those thoughts; they keep me going
Make me hold my head up high and fight the death, fight the sorrow
I hold out just a little longer, just a little bit more
I tell myself that someday you'll come save me
That someday you'll come take me away from this hell
I ignore reality and excape to my imagination where you wait for me
I use those false memories and push through death and sorrow
Push through death and sorrow and start another day of my life....
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:09 am
Hmm interesting wolfy... I had no idea you felt that way about me. He he he, btw
Make me hold my head up hight and fight the death, fight the sorrow
Read that sentence you have a mispelling I beleive, I liked it. Although oppinion wise I'm about as usefull as a sack of bolts at a pie eating contest in the middle of winter.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:31 pm
lol ya typo. I copied and pasted from my dA which I copied and pasted from my myspace so I need to fix that in all 3... XD
but the fact that you liked it is good, it means there are people who like it razz and who says its about you. (It's about whoever takes me away from here, whoever finally shows me what true happiness is... I dont know who that person is tho, bc I've never seen their face)
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:22 pm
I was just kidding on the me comment lol. Also, and with all due respect, it wont ever be a person to show you. The only person who can truly make you happy is you. The only one to get you away from there is you as well, through hard work and determination you can go anywhere and do anything.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:38 pm
ya lol i know, but sometimes people need a little help from someone razz thats what I'm getting at... anyway XD ty for commenting you opinion on it :3
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:04 pm
np I wouldn't be a very good guild leader if I didn't at least try.
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