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Sapphirianna

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:53 pm


The ultimate love story,
Inspired by You, God.
Written by You,
Told by You.


A story of a corrupt kingdom,
With no good hearted men within.
Evil doings, wrongly loved,
(Simply, let's call it sin.)

Where only one maiden,
Virgin Mary, by name,
Became burdened with a child,
Putting her fiance to shame.

A boy named Jesus was born that year,
Who grew to be a mature man.
He fell in love,
Like anyone can.

This woman, her name was the Church,
She barely even stood alive,
She barely even existed,
Let alone did she thrive!

Christ made the decision to hang,
By hands and feet,
On the cross,
As if to sign on defeat.

Satan grappled with Him for three days!
On the morn of the third day...
He ROSE! ALIVE!
You could imagine what Mary would say.

Jesus came to be the hero,
The knight in shining armor to me.
He died and rose, a Savior of the Church,
All of us, you see.

This is the ultimate love story
Laced with action and sorrow.
Come back to hear the rest of it,
Come back, if you must, tomorrow.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:56 pm


*sits there speechless for a moment or two*

That... was awe inspiring. I wish I could say more but seriously... I wouldn't know what to say except I love this poem!

Boshowa

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:27 pm


That very Good heart biggrin
PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:33 am


Wow! 2 thumbs up, that was not only creative, but it painted a lovely image. Great job heart

Taizic S


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:37 pm


I'm speechless...Besides telling you I think that's the best poem I've heard biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:00 pm


I can't say that I'm a poetry critic but this one was really beautiful to me.

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