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 Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:42 pm
Hello Whovians. So I'm a very new fan of Doctor Who having been interested in this amazing series for only a week. And since then I've drawn two pieces. Please critique them if you can and yes I am available for requests.  
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:43 pm
You are a very talented young lady.
That being said, I will critique now....
Looking at the first image, I see more of the 1st doctor in the face, though the clothing is obviously 10's.
The face on the second image leaves me thinking that he's a human in his 60's or something. I don't know if you were going for that look or not, but that's how I viewed it.
Other than the faces throwing me off, I think the bodies and clothing are excellently done. You have much more talent than I ever had.
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Shanra the Dragon Bard Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:51 pm
I would say the face caricaturization is a little off, but anything I drew would be garbage. So good job. ^-^
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:18 pm
I thank you! I shall try harder
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:43 pm
Those are wonderful. Can't wait to see more.
However, I do agree with Shanra's assessment. I think it's the expression, along with the slightly hunched shoulders and the hooked nose that are giving the One vibe in the first drawing.
In the second one, I think the main problem is the nose. It's too bulbus. Since the cartiledge in the nose and ears continues to grow as a person ages, that's prbably what makes him look older in that drawing. Basically, I'd narrow the nose on that one. Other that that, it's pretty much perfect.
Speaking of noses, you drew two very different noses for the same person. I know they are differnt style drawing and your experimenting but you might want to narrow down what nose you think works best.
Anyway, still aswesome.
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 5:23 pm
Thank you everyone for your input and constructive criticism! Please keep it up. Now here's a new piece. I tried my hand at Realism... it's not very good (dunno why the scanned picture never looks as good as the one in real life). It's my first shot at realism in many many years. 
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 6:13 pm
The second post is much better. ^-^
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 10:20 am
I like the one on the second post and the second doctor on the first post 3nodding heck all of them make ten look so cute heart
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 2:46 pm
Wow, Tragedy that is amazing! The realistic one is stunning, from the bridge of the nose up it is just perfect, almost eerily like him. There's something very slightly off about the nostrils and mouth area I think but I'm not sure what. All round a fantastic drawing though, wish I had a tenth of your talent.
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 6:26 pm
Nicely done. The hair is amazing, and the eyes are very nice. The mouth should be higher up and closer to the nose, and just a little wider. Maybe move the chin up with it. I'm not certain. Experiment. The bottom of the nose needs some work but I'm not sure how to describe it. All in all, very nice work though. Keep up the good work and keep practicing.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 12:24 pm
Wow, Tragedy. The realistic one is very good. I agree with Squirrel, though. From the middle of his nose up, it's perfect, but something off from there down. I think maybe he's nostrils are too curved and his mouth is a little too small, but I'm not a hundred percent certain on that. It just looks a little off there. Other than that, very good. Especially his hair. And with Ten, if you can get his hair that's the most important thing. = )
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 10:37 am
I know I"m cheating with this one but meh XD It's still David Tennant thus kinda still the 10th Doctor... but as Hamlet. :Gonk: Alas, poor Yorick! I knew him, Horatio! 
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 11:38 am
The colour one is totes awesome. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 6:43 pm
Could you relink your picture Nichelle? I'm not getting it.
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