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 Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:34 pm
When I'm struggling with many different things
And I've lost my way
The one I look up to is you
But I know I shouldn't take for granted
All the times you'll pick me up, when I fall!
I'm trying so hard
To stay in the right path
The enemy's workin harder
Cause he knows I can prosper
He knows that there's that there's a minister
Somewhere down inside
If he lets me take the easy way
Then he knows I'll stay for you
And he knows that I won't be nervous anymore
To tell people about you
Well that's all I have now, and I just made that up now!! I was just saying how I'm feeling right now and typed them out. heart If anyone has some input, awesome. I'm gonna keep workin on it though. heart
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 3:11 pm
Here is some more to the song!!
As I'm gettin older
Understanding more
I'm realizing more and more things
That will pull me down,
Drag me down,
Suffocate me now!
I'm trying so hard
To stay in the right path
The enemy's workin harder
Cause he knows I can prosper
He knows that there's that there's a minister
Somewhere down inside
If he lets me take the easy way
Then he knows I'll stay for you
And he knows that I won't be nervous anymore
To tell people about you
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:57 pm
What type of tempo where you thinking of setting this to? And how do you imagine the accompaniment being?
I really like the words...It'd be a beutiful song to do a Sign Language special to as well (depending on the tempo, rhythm and overall style of the song)
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:03 pm
LizzywithaY What type of tempo where you thinking of setting this to? And how do you imagine the accompaniment being? I really like the words...It'd be a beutiful song to do a Sign Language special to as well (depending on the tempo, rhythm and overall style of the song) I never REALLY thought about that much cause I'm just getting my musical ability's matured. heart I'm thinking put it in 4/4 time, a moderate tempo, speeding up a little in the chorus, but I'm gonna discuss more with my dad. He went to college with a minor in music. (he had a major in ministry) xd
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:15 pm
dragonfreakpk LizzywithaY What type of tempo where you thinking of setting this to? And how do you imagine the accompaniment being? I really like the words...It'd be a beutiful song to do a Sign Language special to as well (depending on the tempo, rhythm and overall style of the song) I never REALLY thought about that much cause I'm just getting my musical ability's matured. heart I'm thinking put it in 4/4 time, a moderate tempo, speeding up a little in the chorus, but I'm gonna discuss more with my dad. He went to college with a minor in music. (he had a major in ministry) xd 4/4 time is your friend smile It sounds good so far
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:27 pm
LizzywithaY dragonfreakpk LizzywithaY What type of tempo where you thinking of setting this to? And how do you imagine the accompaniment being? I really like the words...It'd be a beutiful song to do a Sign Language special to as well (depending on the tempo, rhythm and overall style of the song) I never REALLY thought about that much cause I'm just getting my musical ability's matured. heart I'm thinking put it in 4/4 time, a moderate tempo, speeding up a little in the chorus, but I'm gonna discuss more with my dad. He went to college with a minor in music. (he had a major in ministry) xd 4/4 time is your friend smile It sounds good so far Thanks. heart heart
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:28 pm
Ooooo! i'm not a composer in any shape or form, but to me your song sounds pretty good so far smile and i agree, the words are quite beautiful ^^
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:28 pm
xingyXD Ooooo! i'm not a composer in any shape or form, but to me your song sounds pretty good so far smile and i agree, the words are quite beautiful ^^ Thanks so much!! heart heart
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:39 pm
i realy lik it heart the words r great keep workin on it and u and ur dad well hav a great son heart heart
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:41 pm
lol i ment song haha heart lol
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:44 pm
LOL!!! rofl Well, he does have a new great son. D' Mar!! I guess he has a great older son too. rolleyes
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:53 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:55 am
I'm loving the first verse... are you gonna put a bridge to it?
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:10 pm
anluanle I'm loving the first verse... are you gonna put a bridge to it? Yeah, I've actually just recently been thinkin about that. heart
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:31 pm
Finally done with the song! Hope you like it! heart
I would have never thought that
So many things
Would pull me down
I would have never thought that
Maybe sometimes my friends
Would pull me down
I guess that goes to show you
That things aren't always how they
Appear and things can deceive you
And pull you down
But I know
That if I focus on you
And I walk with you
There will be nothing in my path
That I can't handle
And when I can't walk
You carry me
I think that wraps it up. Advice?
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