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 Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:48 pm
(Non Pretty-fied Plot overview)
Human girl gets kidnapped, and dropped with no memory of her life before her kidnapping. Vamp finds her and takes her in, not telling her he is a vampire. Should end up as a romance! Mwahaha
FULLY LITERATE WITH LONG POSTS PLEASSSEEE
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:49 pm
 ●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● ●๒ครเςร●● I was born on a Snowy day in December. ● On my last birthday, I blew out 18 candles. ● I lived in A City before I came here. ● People tell me I am Quiet, Shy and Depressing. ● I am special because I am a Human. ●ครк ๏Ŧ ๓ק אครt● I… I know nothing of my past… I woke up in the middle of the street, my knees were scuffled, and my hair was tousled. I was scared. I didn’t remember my name, my age, where I came from… I’ve forgotten everything. I walk the street in hopes that someone will recognize me, or some kind stranger will take me in. I've heard of creatures... creatures that walk the night; that hunt women like me, who haven't any way of defending themselves. I am afraid.
I see men who have glowing eyes; they seem to be perfect gentlemen... The women they woo, I never see again. What if I become one of the hopeless women who are wooed by the devils who walk the earth?
Please, tell me you are not one of them... Do not kill me, kind sir... I have done nothing to you, please...~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: Edon Jhons Age: Claims to be 30 Hair: Blonde Eyes: Glacial blue Facial Hair: Blonde scruffy Sir Walter Releigh beard. Height: 6'2 Weight: 220, all muscle Birthday: Forgotten long ago Birthplace: Scandinavia Quote: "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." Bio: Edon Jhons, born Edon Halfdansson, was a well-renowned Viking Hersir, notorious for his lightning quick, thorough raids throughout the Black Sea. He was thought to be soft and cowardly for his skill and readiness with words, though any who challenged him soon discovered otherwise, as his axe was all the rebuttal he needed. One fateful day, as he led a raid on a castle in what is now called Romania, he was captured by the master of the castle, who viciously attacked him, biting him on the neck, even as they shared a meal. Though he was able to escape with nothing more than a bite wound, he was forced to kill the attacker. As he made his way back to his home, he noticed some strange things. His skin had become pale, his hair no longer grew, and he had developed a thirst for blood. At first he tried ignoring it, but he eventually attacked a deer, draining it dry. He was fortunate, in that he traveled at night to avoid detection, as when he was near his lands, the daylight sun burned worse than the hottest hearth. Knowing his people would no longer accept him, he began searching for a new place to call home. As he settled down on a bit of land he claimed as his, he noticed that he did not age either. For the next few centuries, he began discovering his strengths and weaknesses, constantly moving after enough time in one spot. He once fell in love with a mortal woman, and eventually revealed to her his secret. She became frightened and tried to kill him, and he was forced to silence her. From then one, he vowed never to fall in love again. As of now, Edon has recently arrived at a new dwelling he makes as his own, with a new name, and enough time to enjoy the surrounding lands. Description: Edon is still built like a warrior, his long blonde hair coming down beneath his shoulder blades. He tends to wear the common aristocratic dress of his peers, though he tends to get looked down upon for his build and hair, neither of which he can help. Note: The Hersir were the Viking equivalent of the feudal Knights, serving their lords/kings, calld Jarls.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:51 pm
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● Winter walked silently down the cold, dark street. It was silent tonight, which it solemnly was. This was a busy highway any other night, but tonight seemed different. Winter looked above; the stars were out, and the moon shone brightly, lighting up the sky. Of course, she thought, this town is so superstitious... It's the full moon...
She had found herself wandering into an alleyway as she gazed, and because she still hadn't found anywhere to stay this night, she walked to the end of it, and sat with her back to the wall.
"I've got to find somewhere to stay." she said to herself aloud, her voice echoing slightly in the enclosure of the alleyway. "This is getting ridiculous... I still haven't found out who I am... where I'm from..." She was truly afraid, but she wouldn't admit it to herself.
The men she had found herself speaking to in the many nights since she had lived on the streets spoke of tall men, good looking, but deadly and dangerous. The tramps told her that one man in particular seduced women, and took them away; the tramps never saw any of them again. They warned her countless times: If ever you find yourself alone, say a prayer to yourself. Pray to the good Lord that you do not meet the vampire. This frightened Winter more than anything. The thought of a cold, blood sucking Incubus was more than she could handle.
Every night, she found herself drawing a cross in chalk above her resting place; she said the Lord's prayer just before she slept. She didn't actually believe it would do anything, but she hadn't met the... the thing as of yet, so she must be doing something right. Or he's just not hungry right now, she thought cynically, shuddering.
Part of her was really curious to see this... Vampire, to be honest, but she shoved that thought from her mind as quickly as it came.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:13 pm
~~Edon Jhons~~ "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." Edon strolled down the night street, the blasted sun setting less then an hour ago. Though he missed the smell of the crisp morning air, nothing was ever as stimulating as the night sky, the twinkling stars. Well, perhaps battle was more stimulating, but it'd been so long. It'd been longer still that he'd felt the tender kiss of a woman who loved him, the giggles of love as he held her gently in his strong arms, protecting her from all that would do her harm. His Brunhilde...He'd heard that upon his being declared dead, she'd went to another. While he was happy she'd found a new love, it stung him so that he was cursed with never having a woman again. Sure, there were a few short term romances here and there, but never something as complete and filling as true love. He passed by a woman he saw on his nightly strolls, who drew the symbol of the Christian God above her as she slept. He felt pity for her, but could not bring her in, as it would end with another replay of Elizabeth. Poor, lovely Elizabeth, with her long, black, silken hair, her plump, red lips...He would always regret sinking his fangs into her neck.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:24 pm
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● Winter rolled over uncomfortably; this alleyway had a certain stench that smelled of wet dog and garbage, but it was as good a place as any to sleep for the night. She shoved aside a few newspapers, and in the process, knocked over a large tin trashcan. She screeched, rolling over instinctively, and getting up. She grumbled angrily, and kicked it with full force. "God dammit!" She yelled out of frustration, clapping a hand over her own mouth after seeing a figure pass the opening into the alley. Her heart was beating at a rapid rate, and she was afraid it could have been audible, had it begun to beat any faster. She hoped with her whole being that the man who had passed was not the vampire.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:44 pm
((Glowing eyes? I thought they were vampires, not Goa'uld...)) ~~Edon Jhons~~ "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." Edon sighed at the exclaimation. As long as she was awake, he might as well make sure she was ok. He slowly walked down the alley, his hands raised where she could see them, so as not to frighten the girl. He crouched before, still unable to see her face.
"Miss, are you alright? I heard your cry, and came to make sure you were in no harm or danger."
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:23 pm
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● Winter's heart beat more rapidly as the man walked down the alley. His hands were raised, so it made him a bit less frightening, but after all the stories, she didn't know who to trust. "I-I'm fine sir... I just knocked over a waste bin..." She uncovered her face; no doubt it was pale with fear.
[[Glowing eyes? What are you talking about? xD Trash can xD Totally forgot it's victorian xD]]
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:35 pm
((second post, you mention Winter seeing men with glowing eyes. I thought this was a vampire RP, not a Goa'uld RP. razz )) ~~Edon Jhons~~ "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." "Well, then I'm sur-"
He stopped in mid-sentence, his mind reeling. She was the most stunning woman he'd ever seen! He resisted the urge to reach out and touch her, to make sure she was real. She looked like a Valkyrie, so much that he wondered if Odin the All-Father was finally paying him for his curse. Why a woman like this was living on the streets was a mystery. He wanted so badly to bring her to his dwelling, but made no other though, remembering Elizabeth and the tragic end.
"My lady...might I be so bold as to ask your name?"
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:42 pm
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● Winter watched the man intently, watching for signs that he was a vampire. Of course, she didn't exactly know what those signs were, but she did anyway. As far as she could tell, he was just a buff human.Er... Yes... My name is Winter sir."
[[LOL Oops xD]]
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:56 pm
((A Goa'uld vampire...epic universal domination. XD)) ~~Edon Jhons~~ "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." Winter. So she must be a mortal form of Skadi...if only a man could be so lucky...
"Winter. A pleasure to meet you. I am Edon Jhons. I'm sorry if I startled you. That was not my intention."
He kept his hands where they were, afraid that if he moved them, we would touch her, to feel that flawless skin, to stroke her long, beautiful tresses, to taste her perfect lips.
NO! Stop it! Remember what happened last time! You MUST get a grip on your heart, Edon Halfdansson!
Though he no longer went by that archaic name, he still referred to himself as such, for that is who he was born as.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:29 pm
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● Winter looked into his eyes. They looked worn, archaic; it was as though he had seen the world many times over. He had thinking eyes, contemplative, stunning.
Her heart was beating a great deal less sporadicly, and was going it's normal pace."It's alright. I'm just a bit... jumpy, that's all. She looked at the ground in a very submissive seeming action.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:47 pm
~~Edon Jhons~~ "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." He placed two fingers under her chin, then gently tilted her head until he was looking at her face again, smiling softly.
"Hey, don't hide. There's nothing to be ashamed about. Lots of girls are jumpy at night, and for good reason. But you still don't need to hide because of it."
Her skin felt soft and warm to his touch, a feeling he hadn't felt in a long time.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:51 pm
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● The man's cold hand pulled her face up, and she looked back into those thinking eyes."I shouldn't have to be jumpy... If I were at home..." Her voice trailed off as she remembered: she had no home. Not that she knew of, at least.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:59 pm
~~Edon Jhons~~ "The strongest warrior in the world is the one who can win a fight without ever drawing his weapon." He gave her a smile, inside feeling both happy and sad at the same time. Happy that she actually ahd a home to go to, but saddened that she wouldn't need his help much longer.
"Perhaps I might help you to find your way back home, Miss Winter. I do know this city quite well. And I tend to scare off the predators that prey on people that walk at night."
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 6:47 am
●ฬเภtєг●๒lคเг● Winter's eyes lowered again. He had misunderstood her words. She brushed her hair behind her ear, and said in a solemn voice: "I don't know where my home is... I've lost my memory, sir..."
If she had known where it was, she would have been there already a few days ago.
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