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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:27 pm
This is a place for you to post any Louie fan fiction you have wrote or have found.
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:29 pm
How I Got Louie's Silk Jacket.
This is a story from a while ago.
Kumori: Ah i miss Dova....
Kisshu: You need to losen up youll see him soon.... Don't worry about it. Things will be ok.
Kumori: What if he's mad at me?...
Kisshu comes over and holds my face. He looks into my eyes.
Kisshu: Who could be mad at you be happy he's probly just doing some thing. Dont worry.
Louie: You know he's right now stop crying!
I lift up my head and whip my face. I look down at the floor. My ears and tail come out. I tuck my tail and lower my ears.
Kumori: Fine! I wasnt crying. No i wasn't.
Kisshu: All you been talking about is him lets go have some TLC.
Louie smacks him on the head. Kisshu glares at him.
Kisshu: What was that for geer. God!
Louie: Thats not what she needs right now. Come on baby! I'm sorry I yelled. I just want you to be happy.
Kisshu: I didn't mean that.
Louie: Lol.. But you impiled that.
Kumori: Lol.. Not that.. That wouldn't be great but I'm sorry....
Kumori: Tears are a sign of weakness I'm so sorry to fail you 2.
Both of them : What no! Never!
Kisshu: Tears are also a sigh of copashion.
Louie: You aren't weak... You most really care about him?
Kumori: Yeah I do. You 2 allways chear me up. Lets do some thing fun!
I hold on to Louie tighly.
Louie: Lets go for a swim or to the park.
Kumori: Swimmy yeah!
I blush, I run up the stairs and get changed. I run back down. I look around.
Kisshu: Ku why are you still sad?
Kumori: I miss him he would have enjoyed this!
Louie: Don't cry god.
Kumori: But.. But..
I lay in his arms crying.
Kumori: I'm sorry I just really miss Dova. I'm hurting this family.
He holds my face he kisses me. My eyes glow.
Louie: No your not.
He holds me close to his chest. He rubs my neck softy and gentally.
Kumori: Ah.. I feel safe with you. I.. Lets go have some fun!
Louie: Ok lets come on Kisshu.
We walk out to the pool. I feel the wind blow agianst my skin. I get in to the pool. Kisshu and louie also get in the pool.
Kisshu: Ah.. The water feels warmer then the air.
Kumori: Ahh.. It feels really good.
Louie: Lol! Some one's melowed out.
Kumori; Gaar yeah... Heee..He..
Kisshu raps his arms around my waist.
Kumori: Hu.. Hee.. Ki Ki
Kisshu; Hee.. Yes baby
Kumori: Ah you'er soft.
Kisshu: Ahh.. Hee..
I crawl out of the pool. I sit on the side.
Louie: What you doing?
Kumori: Playing.
I wag my tail yawning. I spread out. I start to fall asleep.
he raps me up in his jacket and sets me on a pool chair. I cuddle up in his jacket it smells warm and safe. I smile.
Louie: Here have my jaket.. Don't wory i'll get another from work ok now rest.
Kumori: You don't know how much I apeachate this. Lol!
Kisshu: Ahh... That's so cute!
Louie: Yeah I know she our little princess. I want to protect her forever.
He sits on the wall at the end of the pool smoking.
I fall a sleep.
The End
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:15 pm
This is a story I wrote it has to do with Louie pluse its ust a sad story but its good.
ahhh (completed)
I stand in fornt the bed.
Kumori Thinks: What if he's glade to get rid of me. What if he only said he come back so i wont kill my self.
leans back. falls on my a**. lays on the floor
Kisshu walks in looking down at me.
Kisshu: i droped the kids off for the week they shouldnt have to deal with this.
(A Thousand Miles) {plays in the back ground}
I pull me knees to my chest.
Louie walks in, siting on the bed takeing off his top.
laying on the bed.
Louie: how you gonna break it to them he is there dad and there a chace theyll never c him again.
i whip my face.
Kumori: I know i just have to be in a better state of mind frist they cant c me like this.
Louie: I wish i could help you
he looks at the wall.
Louie: I even tryed last night turning you on to c if it would make some of your sadness to go away, but you dont react to my tuch like you usely do.
Kumori: theres only one presons passhion i can feel on my skin right now and god dame it i can't even ******** get to feel that.. uuhh i feel light headed..
Kisshu: youll be fine it cause you didnt take your thyroid meds.
Kumori: yeah y i have to leave them at moms dame my stupidity.. i feel like im gonna pass out..
{back ground song changes( we belong together)
Kumori: god i miss him.
sighs
Kumori: does he miss me too.
sighs
i clime on the bed i lay next to Louie.
Louie; what
Kumori: just hold me.
i fall asleep.
I wake to my phone, I rush to pick it up
Kumori; Angel!! Uh oh no its ? Ginos house number uhh it's lilly... sorry baby
Lilly: mom i need to talk... i over herd you talkin to dadyo..
Kumori: what angels you dadyo...
Lilly: thers a chance he's not comeing back let alone c use.
she slids down the wall siting on the hardwood floor.
(life after you) plays in the back ground}
Kumori: thats ture but dont give up on him yet.. theres still a chance.
Lilly: yeah ive.. goten use to it.. but he doesnt diseve to b my dadyo..he's just dad..
Kumori: you some kids dont even get know who their father is.
i whip me face.
Lilly; Thats y i give him the curty of calling him dad.. he piss me off..
Kumori; dont talk about him like that
Lilly: he promised to you he wouldnt act like his father to you. But look he left u and us never talks to you and hasnt exkloage us for aleast a mounth.. He promised that to u and us didnt he..
Kumori; iii
Lilly: its a yes or no answer.. answer the question
Riku: mother just answr it.
Kumori: yes
Riku: you care about him still
Kumori: yes i love him.. I always will
Riku; i have to say that to but it makes me angrey cause of all this hurt .. y so much ******** pain .
Kumori riku..
Ryou: ma.. ma.. he did do alot of good things too he did show alot of forgivingness and love when he was here. he tryed to make me better. it worked to the pills ran out and my illness mutated. uhhh....
Lilly; he is right .. but still we know he wants to be alone and doesnt want to hurt u but what if he neveer comes back. huu?
Kumori: then he'll never know if dies kihaku
Lilly: his own son its sad.
Kumori: we dont say any thing to him.. In away Kihaku reminds me so much of angel..
His smile his giggle and the way he blushes he doesnt lok much like him but he's alot like him. Its so sad to c my baby be in the hostpitle for so long.
Riku: it should be me not him..
Ryou; i wouldnt wish this on any one..
Kumori: he's gonning to hate me when he finds out i just dint have the heart to tell him.
(White flag) plays in the back ground}
Kumori: pluse theres a chance that he'll getbetter he's body been working better with meds lattly so maybe he can home and have Jinny phooh watch him...
i start crying he is one of the pretiers babies iver ever seen so sweet but already scared... ill call back later.. ok .. I need to go c him..
i hang up the phone.
Louie: ill drive your not in the condishion to drive
he grabs his t and picks me up and carries me too the car. he places me in the back seat..
i look up at him.
Kumori; you didnt have to carrie me down.
i cough again.and again
Louie: your going to c your sick child in the hostpile and your broken its beter that i did.
Kumori; Whats up with you your a mess too and have attuid
Louier; all children i consiture mine and always pluse it hurts to c you like this.. it hurts the earth to have a goddess like this.
Kumori; thats just what .. angel called me
Louie: lol i know but just maybe it has a meaning be hide it. Pluse the attuid in the room changes as your does.
(parachute) plays in the back ground}
Louie: your specale you can change the glisen in mans eyes . you think men arent attacted to but you found angel.. you too might have your problems but every one does you make his eyes sparkle.lol.
Kumori: you mean i did i hope i do again. I want to make him blush again.. I love him
The car stops we r here arent we.
Louie; you mean there and yes.
he helps me out.
Kumori: huu i didnt notice....aw your hair s all mesed up hunny.
Louie: huu o
Kumori; this is affecting you too. and i just called u hunny uhh. wow
Louie; you cant call me baby can you
a tear runs down my face
Louie: save that for inside come on lets not stand out in this parking lot.
Kumori: and the only thing i really want from him is not to hurt him self and to have him with me again.
coughs coughs..
crys..
Louie: dont worry itt kill you. leturly..
the docture looks at me..
Docture; what did I tell you about bring him in here.
Kumori; what you cant talk to him like that.
Louie; sire ive donated alot of money to this absablement..
docture; You might calll him yours but angels names on the birth curtific and pluse your a vampire i cant turst you from snacking on the paitents
Louie: you serouisely think ida do that
Doctuer: yeah cause you think your better then every on like u most have angel caused him to get his hind tail out fast
louie: shut up thats not ture you basturd
he pulls out his gun
Louie: im not like that and he wouldnt leave over some thing like that. My babys done nothing wrong. She disvers to c her a baby let us though. she doesnt disver this
Docture: theyll know its u even if you shot and youll lose every thing .
Kumori; put the gun away.
i pull out mine.
Kumori: Ive lost almost every thing that means any thing to me already .
Louie puts his hand on my arm.
Louie; you havent totle lost Angel yet. so dont do this.
Kumori; thats ture.
i lower my gun and slide it back in my dress.
Kumori: come on louie
i tug him along
Docture: dame shites
i walk into the hospital room.
Kumori; he's over there i look . it hurts
i grab louies chest i start cry.
Louie: lord hunny.. i mean baby its ok.. god.
he sits on the ground.
Louie: he's a sleep.. Hay do to u still have that rose that angel gave u at the hostpitle that on time.
Kumori; the moon rose yeah.
Louier; isnt that his calling card
Kumori; yeah what baby
Louie: where is it.
Kumori: hiden under the bed
louie dails the phone
Louie: hay kiki get the rose out the box under the bed teleport here with the rose thanks.
Kisshu apears in front of me holding the rose in his hand
Kisshu: here
he sit next to louie.
Kumori; it bring backs so many memorys when i c that . thats y i havent tuched it in awhile...
Louie do u want him to know his fathers love for him and he visted him.
(In the arms of the angels)plays in the back ground}
Kumori: but he didnt o i get it... and he does.i take the rose gentally placing next to kihaku on the bed stand i kiss him on the forehead. He sweams in bed
Kihaku: mama dadyyy?
Kumori: go back to sleep plz he went to the bathroom you need your rest he loves you.
i try to to hold back my tears
he looks at the nightstand he smiles
Kihaku: he really did come..
he closes his eyes and goes back to sleep
Kumori: lets go home.
the end.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:27 pm
Louie's childhood stories
Louie sits on the bed crying. He holds his knees to his chest. His nurse sits on the bed next to him. She holds him to her chest she gently kisses his forehead
Nurse: he shouldn’t have ever touched you Louie. He’s such an a**!
Louie: I for sure he doesn’t love me any more!
Louie cries into her chest.
Nurse: Of course he loves you he didn’t always used to be that way.
Louie: Really!
Nurse: Yeah he used to be a sweat caring man. He used to be so nice and charming.
Louie: You used to Love him didn’t you.
Nurse: Yes I did! I did a lot. I could never truly hate him.
Louie: Why?
Nurse: Because he made you your like a son to me Louie. Don’t tell him I said that.
Louie: Ok! Why don’t I ever remember you when my mom was here or alive?
Nurse: I knows in my heart she’s still alive. I wasn’t around when your mother was so much.
Louie: What that supposta mean?
Nurse: I’m not allowed to talk about your mother. Pulse you where always exploring or by her side.
Louie: Please! Tell me more about her.
Nurse: Well she loved animals like you do. I mean loves animals. She has long blond hair curllyish. She was somewhat tall. She really loves you and Ian. Being he youngest she watched over you a lot even when you first played explores in the forest. You always wanted her to play with you and your brother. She did whenever she could. She played with you 2 for hours in your tree club.
Louie: she told you about that place. I hide there from daddy alot. One day I remember daddy got mad at her playing with us in the forest all day instead of being there watching him battle with his friends. He found her laughing and playing with us mood cover her face like face paint. She wear flowers in her hair parts of it wet from her playing in the creek with us. She walk bare foot her white skin cover occasionally with stops of mud. She wear a crown made of branches we had made for her the leaves on it where thin and long. My father was playing battling sword with his friends and they tuck a break and heard some thing. They wondered where we where they caught the sight of her the sun light hit her just right. She looked like the Queen of the forest and that’s what she was in the game of explores and we where her magical sons that helped her with the forest and all nature. We where playing the part where she had escaped from the evil lumberjack that keep her under his control as much as he could. At the time I didn’t know she was truly meaning daddy. Every time she say the lumberjack was coming she tell us to hide fare away and to wait there for a long time. She herd russling in the bushes. She new it was father and his friends so we ran as she said. I wanted to hurt the lumberjack for ever hurting my mama. I knew I couldn’t even protect myself but I would try my hardest for my mommy. I told Ian we need to spilt up. I waited to lose him then ran back hiding behind a tree. I saw my father and his friends walk out of the bushes be for mommy could run. My dad looked her over head to toe. He smirked he said oh wow hunny this is what you been doing his hole time. God the children can be a burden. She looks at him and says not at all she was having fun watching us smile and laugh and mostly believe.
He pushes her off him. He says to her you dirty this isn’t what I expected from you. She looks up at him. He mutter my sons should be dreaming of these nonsense things. They should be watching us men not doing this crap. I pick up some rocks putting them in my pocket. He grabs mom’s arm as she turns away from him. He started to lift his hand to her. I jump out from behind the tree. I say to him you are the evil lumberjack she told me about she told me not to tell daddy about him but he is him. You most parish for holding mommy forest Queen captive and hurting her. He looks down at me. He says to me how cute is this part of mommy’s game we’ll me a mommy have a long a** talk about this later. He slaps her. I kick him in the leg as hard as I could. He laughs. He says to me dumb boy I have boots on you are gonna be in alot of trouble when you get home. I say to him I don’t want to come home I want to stay out here where mommy’s happy and I see her smile. He slaps me. I pick my self up mother yells at father he hits her again. He tells her come home and just let us play that we’ll come home some time. He glares at me. I yell at him you hurt mommy and don’t even love me so let us go come on my we can be free you’ll never be hurt again even if it hurts me . My father bends down. He says to me shut up that’ll never happen she loves me. I kick him in the Nats an turn to run like hell. He grabs me by my pants and beats the hell out of my a**. After that day Ian never played explore with us and mom rarely did and only for short periods.
Louie: I messed it all up..
He cries on the Nurse’s leg.
Nurse: No you didn’t!
The End!
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:49 am
Louie: I love you baby promise you on my soul I'm telling you the trurth.
Kumori: I Know.
I hide under neath the sheets. He rubs my belly. He gets under the sheet with me.
I cuddle into his chest. Some thing hands on my nose.
Kumori: What's on my nose!
Louie picks it up placeing it in my hand.
Louie: It's a butter fly made of rose pedles and it just foud the sweatist flower in all the worlds and relms.
Kumori: What flower.
Louie: You and you have a little bud in side you!
Kumori: Aw baby!
I hug him tightly! I put the butterfly on my nightstand.
I hear some thing a child runs down my back.
Kumori: That's so sweat you made me a gift I love you. Louie I think I just felt a spirt in this world,
he sits up holding me tightly to his chest. kasui walks in.
Kasui: Mommy a blond man was in my dreams I never sceene him before.
I grab him pulling him close. I feel some thing again!
Kasui: Who's John!
Kumori: How you know that name! He died before you where born!
Kasui; he sits at the bed of the bed.
Kumori: Louie put on some pants! Kusui thats your grandpa's spirt! Spirt why are you here?!
I feel his hand on my shoulder. my eyes get big! He loks into my eyes. My eyes and tail stand up straight!
Louie: Baby you need help!
I hear a knock on the door!
John's spirt: Hide them if you love them.
Kumori: Kasui your herd him take your father hide it's late it most be the company!
They run to the kitchen they open a hatch in the island Louie slides Kasui down in the hole he grbas his snipper riffle crawling
in the hole he turns on the light he sits with kasuiin the coner.
Louie: Be quite!
I answer the door!
Kumori: Hello who is this!
A man in a suit stand there.
Suit man: Helo my name is mark!
Mark:I'm so sorry to bug you but we are collecting taxes on pay.
Kumori: Oh! Thank good!
Mark: Some thing else is going on isn't it?!
Kumori: No it's not I just though I was in troble.
Mark walks in with a gaia police man!
Mark: We are gonna have to have aloks around.
I think: Crap hope Louie hide his weed good!
Kumori: You have no warent!
Mark: no but what would you be hiding here,
He looks down just noticing I' pergnant!
Mark: So wheres you husband.
He looks at the weding ring that hang around my neck. The police man stops he heres a creck on the floor.
Kumori: I don't have one.
Mark: I'm a train Private investagature I know there's a man here.
He look at the vadca bottles on the table.
I whip my eye's.
I look down at the ground.
Mark: Why are you protecting him he most have done some thing bad.
Kumori: This is my fault your gonna take him away because I love hm.
Mark: What hold on?
Police man: some one else is here mama tell me. I run out the door. The police man grabs my arm.
Mark: Let go of her!
Police man: She's with holding some thing!
Kumori: My godess help me protect my love!
My eyes glow. moonshi bites the cop!
Mooshi: Get out you rotten man!
The police man pulls me in to the kitchen putting his gun to my neck.
Mark: Man that's un called for!
I hear some thing a click. I tremble. I close my eyes opening them up again!
I look to see Louie and Kasui standimg there. a red dote flashes on the cops forehead.
Kasui: Daddy are these bad men gonna take mommy away from us! Or will they just take you away! I love you I don't want to lose
your or momy or baby sister she aint even born yet.
the cop sets down his gun.
Cop: Don't shot me!
Louie: Your an a** you diserv it I won't if you promise not to ruin our family or tell the compnany.
Kasui and Louie move in to the light . He pats Kasuis head.
Louie: Son put the gun down.
He does.
Mark: Hu! Louie really the NPC...
Kumori: Crap!
I start crying! Louie runs over hugging me!
Louie: don't cry baby they won't take me away!
Cop: Wait aren't you suppost to be with that other girl.
Louie: Suppost but ida rather be here with my foxy and my son.
He rubs my belly.
Kasui: And the new member! Mommy She'll live right!
Kumori: Yeah baby that only happened with the twins!
Louie looks into my eyes.
Cop: So you 2 had twins!
Kumori: They died in side me!
Kasui: So the company didn't kill them?
Kumori: no they didn't but remeber we go around telling people about Louie!
Kasui: i under stand but are chops the good guys?! I wish dady could kill all the lawers and the people mean to mommy!
I pat him on the head.
Louie: I wish but lawers populate like rabits. Time to go to bed.
I take him back up to bed.
Louie: Um.. Do you guys want some thing to drink.
Mark sure!
Louie opens the frige. Vadca chochlet smokes nail polish milk, butter, water, soda,and juice boxes. They notice this they also notice the ktan on the counture and
the gun tuched in Louies pants he hand them some drinks!
Mark: Not much in there!
Louie: It's in case the compnany comes we all can run!
Mark: You really care about her alot!
Louie: She's the one!
Cop: So you married her and that's your child and she's haveing your child. Wow and you seddle down hiding I would have just stayed with the other girl she hot.
I shake.
Kumori: He should of what kind of wife am I. I'm a epice fail!
He holds me tightly to his chest.
Louie: Never you are the best thing inthe world what I say about you being happy.
Kumori: You want me happy!
Louie: Here this is for you I was saveing it.
It's a little clay red painted heart it has a design.
Kumori: Hunny this is so sweat!
Louie: No you are the sweatist glade you like it. I love you my queen I wouldn't trade for the worlds! I'll always be here for you!
He kissess me deeply!
Louie: they'll have to kill me to tale me awy from you with out your say so!
Kumori: I'll never let tehm take you away.
Mark: That's sweat!
Cop: I kinda feel sorry for them with the compnany thing! But stiil they'll find out eventally!
Louie: Not if i can help it.
The end
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 11:48 am
This is a story from Louie's child hood.
Louie sits at the dinner table.
Vladimir: Son that enought you do want girls to like you don't you?!
Louie: Yes!
Vladimir: Good boy! Now go to your room and finish your home work! How's that Sue girl at school.
Louie: She likes me she said that if I don't Imbearance her or bug her she might go out with me. Oh and I can't talk around her friends.
Vladimir: Oh ok son she's a pretty one she make a nice queen.
Louie: Yeah she would! Oh my friend Kumori said I treat sue like a queen and says Sue's a lucky girl for me to do all this for her.
Vladimir: Oh I see!
A few days later!
Louie: Theses are my friends Sue and Kumori.
Sue: Well hello Mr.King!
Vladimir: Wow! You are a pleasent girl prefect to be a queen on day you just need a prince to marry.
I look down at the floor.
Louie: Yeah she would!
Sue: Hu! maybe I can be the vampire queen if Louie keeps his act right1
Vladimir: Yes! Yes!
I tremble!
Vladimir: Oh! I almost foregot about you you must be Kumori!
Kumori: It's ok alot of people foreget about me!
Vladimir: You seem very.. Nice you are kinda cute!
Sue: Not as cute as me!
Kumori: That's probly true!
Sue: No probly nerd it's true! I don't know why your here but shut up!
Kumori: I'm Louie's friend I..
Sue: His friend that's a joke! Ohyour here to carry my stuff maybe ne day you can be our maid!
Kumori: Louie You'd hire me to work for you it be a honner!
Louie: Yeah! you wouldn't have to clean floors you can make beds and work in the kitchen!
Sue: no hunyy she can clean floors dust she can stay in a shed out in the back! And one day we might have children stay away from them!
Kumori: What ever you want Louie master!
Sue: You are a worthless wench! Hu!
Kumori:Yes I've been told that!
Vladimir: Well Louie help me get some tea for the ladies.
Sue: Kumori will be doing that one day hopely you wont slip any on you kness they have to hurt after cleaning the floors!
Kumori: Yeah.
Sue reaches into my bag!
Sue: Whats this? Are you kidding me! You drew these of Louie you like him alot don't you you like like him?
I tug the papers away from her! I hide them back in my bag!
Sue: You Love him?! He never love you back ever! All you'll ever be is his maid!
Louie walks in with his dad!
Sue: Louie doesn't give a s**t about you! I think he only keeps you around to talk to and use! That's all your good for!
My eye's water! I shake! I run down the hall! I look around I run into a bath room! I sit on the floor crying! I pick some thing up off the floor.
Louie stands there loking at the floor!
Louie: I sould treat her better!
Sue: She a piece of shite she probly steling some thing now!
Vladimir: Well then we better go find her!
Louie: I need to find her and a ploigise.
They walk down the hall... Louie's father stops sniffing the air! Louie walks up to him.. Sue rushes up too! Vladimir opens the door.
I sit on the floor blood drip from the cuts on my arms!
Louie: What happened?! Kumori you ok?
Vladimir loks into my eyes and looks at me lok at louie watching me cover my wounds!
Vladimir: It's hard for you to under stand she'll be fine!
Sue: Look some one cares about you all the sudden! You s**t!
Kumori: I am thanks for loking for me Louie!
Louie: Your welcome Why are you bleeding
Vladimir: Girl! I can't controll my self!
Louie: What dady?
His fangs are out! his eyes glow yellow. Tears run down my face!
Kumori: i'm sorry I'm such a disapointment and I'm so weak crying!
Louie: You aren't weak!
Sue: Yeah right!
Louie: Sue Please Stop!
Sue: You don't telll me what to do I'm not this wench!
Kumori: Louie's dady please go a head! I'm notting worthless! Drain me! It be better for every one! Plus then maybe Sue and Louie can be happy and Live together aqnd get
married! I'm worthless any ways!
Vladimir: You sure you want this!
Kumori: Yeah!
Louie: No! Your my friend don't give up! I'll be fine I have Sue!
Vladimir leans in on my neck!
I mutter very very softly: Of chrose I die to see you smile again to make sure you do! I can't go being such a breden to you!
Vladimir stops!
Vladimir: Son she isn't gonna die and I'm not gonna drain her I promise You and sue go get some medical things from the closet down in the wing where the uman nurse keep all the
cleaning suplise hurry!
They run off!
Kumori: Why didn't you just end me like I asked?!!
Vladimir: Because your a young woman and I can tell you like! No love my son alot! You give up your own life just to have him happy even if he's with another woman!
Kumori: I know! I do it in a heart beat again!
Vladimir: I know don't talk about any of this Sue is not the sweatist on him but he loves her.
Later they come back Vladimir wraps up my wounds then I go home. I tell my mother I fell in the creek when we where playing she belives me!
The End!
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:49 pm
I wrote this back in the day! i fixed it up and here it is enjoy!
Gambino Estate!
Kumori: whats this I found it taped under the bottom of Gino's desk
Marry: Sweet! Omg thats the huges joint I've ever seen! We should smoke it no ones even gonna be here tonight!
John: So I'm going to be gone so make sure the home is clean when I get home girls!
He happly ran out the door ! We watch for a moment to make sure he is really gone!
We waited to it got dark, we closed all the window turns down the light and light the joint we break out the floor clean for the wood floors. I leam agains it .
Kumori:: Man i don't want to work tonight i onwly do this horriable job because I get payed and I like this house. Also I can work night or day!
Marry: I like steelins his nicnacks! Oh put on some music girl!
Kumori: You got here a good all american one here!
(We all need someboody to lean on lean me when your not strong I'll be there to help you caire on!)
Doshi: I hate this job but you 2 pull me thought it! Tonights gonna be so fun!
A familure song comes on next I forget what it is! I'm not really paying atention right now.
Every one starts singing I join in doors to Gino's room open! We all stand there shoked faced freezed! I stand completly still The drink in my hand shakes a little! Ian, Gino Louie, and, Sasha stand in the hall way looking at us!
Gino: So you are the one's smoking weed in stead of working!
Doshi: Shut up boy your rich a** can buy some more weed! What you think We can This job is crap but we have to do it we might as well enjoy it! It's making Kumori all bent up!
I just look at Doshi she has put her nose and lip pircings back in!
Ian: So I guess they though we where'nt here Girls your slacking off!
Doshi: Don't talk to me that way boy you don't know our lifes you a rich a** ******** too!
She takes a hit of her cig.
We all turn around and look at them in the door. I nervusely wave to Louie. He thinks for a moment he finially rembers me.
Louie wispers: Their kinda cute!
Ian: Some of them but not all of them!.
Marry hands them some drinks.
Doshi: We'll you snobs are here any ways you might as well party with us now.
Later on.
I sit next to Doshi and Marry.
Louie: I never thought you would be cleaning floors and dusting for this basturd!
Gino: I herd that!
Louie: Well he is an a** lok at all these sores they have and cuts!
Gino: So they are theifs!
I look down at the floor!
Louie: Kumori I thought you be doing some thing better!
Kumori: There's not much to do around here that's safe it's safer here and he's more trusting then any restront boss!
Louie: That's to bad i thought you be married and have a kid by now!
Kumori: I want that but who would want that with me! I knew thta when I was a kid and I still know that now! They're right you should never get your exspectation up high!
Ian: That's not exacally what they say!
Kumori: I don't care!
Ian: Aren't you the downer!
I take a hit of Marry's cig.
Gano: Weed usely makes people happy!
I flick my skirt not paying attention!
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Marry: life's not all rainbow's and sun shin boys! Kumori here Loved a boy she won't teell me who he is she still does he loved another girl a pretty b***h!
Kumori: don't tell them this I told you out of confadence! Dame it!
Marry: What ever!
Louie: who is he!
Kumori: No one it doesn't matter he wouldn't take an intrest really in me!
I look in to his eyes my eyes water!
I mutter to my self: Dame it why you take an intrest in me instead oof other girls!
I don't notice my voice I'm thinking out loud they look at me!
Marry: Oh it makes sence to me now I know who it is!
Doshi: Yeah I do too how as soon as he walk up in her she got all shy and quite! Hell girl you didn't tell me you know him like that man!
Ian: You mean it's one of us!
Gano: I bet it's me she works here!
Marry: no one here like's your snobby a**!
Sasha: Hey you don't know for sure!
Doshi: shut up whore!
Ian and Gano: no you shut up!
I lay down on the floor!
Kumori; Be nice to Sasha I like her she seems like she be a nice friend!
Ian: don't change the subect! So It's either me or Louie!
I look down at the floor.
Ian: You don't know me very much and I've notice you staring at Louie alot!
Louie laughts. I shake!
Kumori: Maybe!
Louie: oh s**t that explanes alot! hey look at me I'm so sorry!
He reaches over holding my face.
Louie: Come on lok at me don't be so dame imbraced.
I shake looking up at him slowly! I don't rember what happen next or the rest of the night!
We all wake up ascatured around. I wake up in one of the gest bed rooms in the east wing. I look around the shades are closed and someone lay next to me and on the bed next to me lay 2 bodies.
I try to see who is laying next to me feel long silky hair cascadeing down a male body he is some what thin and tall so I had alimanate Mr G. Ian has short hair and any of the maides because they where all female.
I feel a wave of sleepyness come over me. I lay my head down before falling to sleep I notice who the 2 bodys are Doishe and Daishe.
I wake up a few hours latter.
I can tell by the movement of the light pecking under the shades. I look around I notice I'm in his arms! I can feel his hair streaming down my back his leg againts mine. I try to look up at him, but his chin rest on my head he looked down at me.I try to speak. I finally get my mouth to move!
Dawn/maishe: did we... how fare did... who r.....
the man: its ok we didnt do much we danced last nigh u passed out on the floor next to me I woke up later so i cared you in here we been snuggling alittle thats it sweatdrop
Kumori: Did we do what I think we did and are you who I think you are?
The man: Me well I'm a man for sure so that rules out alot of people! and yes we did that last night!
I think hard even that I'm hung over his voice sounds very familar!
Kumori: Please tell me your not Gino!
The man: No I'm not!
I feel a little releaf for a sec. He runs his hand through my hair push it out of the way. I'm surpsed he got his hand through my hair is a curlcricle and rated mess!
The man: It me Louie silly! I know we aren't doing a good thing but it kinda happen! I didn't know you wheren't wearing your ring! cry sweatdrop
I flip my self around even that I don't want to!
Kumori : What?.... It's just I haven't seen him in amonth im just felt so lonely! What am i going to ?....I am so broke and I have a felling he's never coming back! what's the point of even keeping this ring I shold sell i lord know I need the money!
He holds my head in his hands!
Louie: It's not your falt we where alittle high and well one thing lead to another.
Kumori: But... But I got to get out of here! Cause I lo...
Louie: Kumori please dont leave!I..
Kumori: I want you to help me with some thing! I'm sorry I could help my self from saying that!
louie: What is it?
He holds me tighter to his chest. I feel his soft skin against mine, but I try to fight it.
Even that I really do want it and even deeply in my heart! He is atracted to me and I feel the love In his body! He a man who I thought would never feel this way to me or ever feel the love I've always felt for him!!I Know I have to keep a pormise to another one I love who at this point I don't even know if he still cares! I swing my head around back to him my mind still proseesing every thing.
Then he leans dover grabed my chin and kissing me deeply me on the lips!
Kumori: I lov... But....
I'm in tottle shock! I think most girls like I dream of a kiss from some star we love but this didn't seem like I thought it would!
Feeling that kiss after it was over was like I have no chance ever make it with him he is famose and the other would hurt even much as a friendship between us. It wasn't like i couldn't couldnt proctect my family at all! I don't want Louie to find out about the people I've killed! Or for him to want to never see me agin or let alone hate me.
There where manny things few knew about me those things need to say secert for as long as possable. I could'nt let Louie know how deeply I've loved him for so long!
To be contitued!
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:22 pm
Story part 2 of estate
I also figure a man of his stauture would have nothing to do with me after this, but in side I knew he would'nt just get ride of me ! I knew this because that's not the man I feel in love with!
I lay in his arms time seems to move by slow like! I'm getting pissed off.I look around lost in my thought.
I think about what to do next to leave was a heavly though about chose but isn't what i really want.
I'm so mad at my self he can tell I'm unsure what to do. He reachs for my head then he speaks softly pushing back my hair!
Louie: icon_heart.gif icon_heart.gif i dont want u ever be unhappy with me i know u will probly just think of this as some lucky fling but i will never think of u that way ok
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I kiss him softly on the lips! We lay up in bed. I gentaally run his hair though my fingures I get shivers down my back. Louie can tell!
Kumori: I love you Louie and always will!
We hear the door swing open to the bed room! We see Edmund standing in th door sockly! icon_eek.gif
I look acrossed the room in the miro noticing a weird glow to me and Louie's eye's! I look down closely and notice I'm not wearing my top or skirt Or any of my udie graments my string bikine(My a** is to big for a full on thoung!)
Ed runs over to the bed snarling and panting. i shake alittle he locks Eye contact with me!
I cuddle more under the sheets reacth off the bed into my maids unaform pocket. Ed run over to Louie's side yelling he has a hard time deiciding what to say!
Ed: What the hell do you think you get off sleeping with the help!
Kumori: Where do you get off saying that! It dosen't matter what the hell my job is all that matters is I care for him and my family so back your crusty a** off my case and his!
He pulls out a bebe gun he see my teeth sigh in the light from the crack in the curtains!
Ed: Boy you better foget about her if you know what's good for you I've got me pair of 2's here in my arms am im not afaid to use them!
He insert a sliver bolet!
I pull out a pistel!
Kumori: Welll!I've got me a set of queens here and I'm not affaid either! You hurt me or him you be finden one of these little bolets goning righ throught that little skule of yours! Now please just leave us befoer more conflict has to come to the point of us all taking fire!
Ed: Yeah right like your aim has ever been tested!
Kumori: I spin the gun on my figure slide aslientcer on itand shot the picture of Gino on the wall!
(Bob Marley)|I shot the shareif but I didn't shut the deputy}
Kumori: I hit it perfectly that's what will happen to you if you mess with Me and Louie!
Ed: You can't shot all the lawers and other gaia people!
I try to stand up I fall. Louie run grabing me I keep the gun pointed at Ed. I hear a sound and Johnny runs in and kocks over Ed I notice the girls are no longer in the bed next to us!
I look around I feel mighty imbrested! A look of shame apeirs on John's face, having no idea what was happening! John looka at me in Louie's arms glaping on to his neck showing only a glims of fear in my eyes. I hide my brest in his chest I ssit back ward hiding my self!
Louie slides me down his body! A sad lok comes over my face!
I sit under the sheets on the bed! We try to porcess words but none can come out. He sits down behind me and put his arms around me.
Every one in the room could tell my emotes by the mixed cloudy ness of my eyes! I look down at Louie's hands. My eyes glow faintly when I lok into Louie's John notices this! John grabs Ed slaming him agasit the wall Ed turns to olok at him with qustion!
John: Why I didn't think you would go this fare trying to hurt a poor girl and her family and Louie to u just have to put your self uneedley in sitution! Let alone Louie's father and what he did to me and those boys and My dearest!... Any ways now children we need to talk!
I slide on my out fit and grab my things! Louie notices the few dolllars and collection of change in my purse!
Louie: It might be a little rude to ask but what all the change for?!
Kumori: It's not rude! I've just been living pay ceck to pay ceck and I need the change!
Louie: That's to bad! It really is!
Kumori: No wonder my husband left me I' notting and i'm broke as heell with out him!
Louie: Hu!! Or he was just an a** hole!
I shake a little!
We walk into John's office Ed sits in the corner in the leather chair!A tear slides down my chin! icon_cry.gif
Louie holds me chin and trys to speak!
Louie: This isn't your fault you'er not to blam for all this!
John stares at me a wroid look apeirs on his face his face! I can feel the aquwradness in the room!
John: Well I'm...Shcoked at the way you been acting lately Ed but still this problem isn't exspetable! Well I and you do know that this hole thing needs to not be herd about that for sure and I don't aprove a relation ship of love between u 2! either will the rest of them and to them she'll never exsitist!
My eyes fill with tears!
Kumori: I dont know what to do? i don't understand!
John: I think No I know you 2 should stop seeing much of each other or not ever see each other again, and I will deal with Ed the last thing we want to happen is this get out to the public which it wont tehy just egnore her any ways she's not an npc!
I look up my eyes full of tears I'm confuzzled, hurt and lost look up at John and Louie! Louie feels a sort pain!
Kumori: Why should you or any other one chose who I'm with or what I do.... Dooo.Dooo.. Help me!
{A gental Ping sound is herd!}
I fall foward hiting my head on the desk! Louie rushes to pick me up! He pulls out a bag of blood rips it open and pours it into my mouth and helps me drink it down! John dives down on his knees!
Louie: Help me get her in the tub please! I most have turned her last night but I don't remeber it!
They placed me in the tub they fill it with alot ice and cold water! I start to come around, he hands me a blood bag I sip it down!
I hear pacing out side the door Louie is siting on the totlet bent over holding my hand tears stain his face till it's bright red and sore! I wip my self off slip on undies he is still looking down at the floor! I look up John walks in and outs my uniform is on sink!
I put it on and grabs Louie watches! John ivites us back in his office!
John: All I have to say is it better that u aren't seen together! I see the love you each have of each other in your eyes! Now I think it's time you should be going young lady to much has happen between you to already!
I look sadly back at as we are exsorted out the door! I grab his head and kissing as deeply as I can! Gino walks down hall he notice this and how my eyes seem to sparkle! He runs over to us pushing his dad out of the way hands us a card we look down!
Louie opens it! he reads it showing it to me!
Louie: You want us to come to your couples masked party cool but I don't know!
John: No they can't no way... I don't want them in my house!
Gino: What why pap?
Kumori: Yeah we can go if you want to pluse its a mask ball! Lol!
Gino: The party last night was alot of fun and you 2 where hiting it off pretty good!
Louie: He did invite us and that parrty rocked!
Kumori: And i did help with his problems!
John: No ok just this once and never again you hear me!
I kiss Louie deeply smiling! I don't want him to let go of me John tugs me out the door and Louie walks out the other way!
The End!
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:05 pm
The ball
At the Estate
Kumori: Oh my god it's you!
I lay my head on Louie's chest! I giggle I shake!
Kumori: I'm being bold I'm so nevuse!
Louie: Oh I see!
Kumori: I can't believe you came I love your out fit! Why are tyou alittle dark!
Louie: I'm sorry I'm just worried about you!
Kumori: Do you like my out fit?!
Louie: I do it brings out your eyes!
I giggle!
Kumori: Thank you that was so sweet!
Louie: It's ok has there been any word from your x!
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I through my arms around him I hold him tightly!
Kumori: I'm sorry to be all sad and every thing I don't think he is coming back I'm sorry to worry you!
Louie: Oh hunny It 's ok I didn't know you had all this stress too night just forget about him tonight! We are here to have fun lets just whip this face!
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Kumori: Thank you now lets have some fun and it starts with me kissing you!
Louie: Huuuu!
I lean in kissing him!
Louie: Know how good that feels!
Kumori: Yet I so much I do!
John walks up dressed as fabyoi!
I put my head on Louie's chest!
John: So I see you 2 are bonding here!..
Kumori: Hu what?!
John: So I'm going to have do some thing!
Kumori: No you are not! No one doing that to me and Louie!
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I lay in Louie's arms crying! Louie glares at him he loks back at me a sad look comes over his face!
Louie: Please stop crying umm.....
John: Is the baby crying?!
Louie: You drunk a** basturd!
John: What's you gonna do girly man!
Kumori: No one call my Louie girly!
I pull out my pistle and put it to John's gut. I slowly open the door and push them out.
Kumori: I can't believe I'm doing this..... Any ways you back off John I know you've gotten a little drunk! Just please you know I needs him and maybe forever! But a rich basture like you wouldn't undersstand that!
I run off down the hall crying!
Louie: Real smart a** hole and I real like her I hate you!
He goes running after me!
John: What I do?!
Louie: You know a** hole!
He contuies down the hall after me!
to be contoinued in next issue on another day
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 7:46 pm
Louie: hunny look at me I didn't know you felt that way here get in my arms!
I cuddle in his arm tears run down my face they burn the skin! He whips my face. John taddleds over.
John: Whore how do you think I felt when me wife died!
Kumori: How could you ever compair this and you don't know she's dead!
John: What?
Kumori: She told you she loved you you got time to be with your love I love Louie and you are trying to take him away!
Louie holds me back! He pulls me into his arms!
Louie: Leave now look you already caused enought hurt!
John: You call this hurt! Lol!
Kumori: You bastrad you don't know how it feels to tell 2 young girls that dadies not coming back they've never seen him only in pictures they cling to Tommy there big brother cause his the only man in the house! James left with dad I lose a son and a husbine how dose it fell you still have the rest of your family!
Louie: Family!
Kumori: Basturd you haven't even told him have you? You son of a b***h!
Louie: What are you not telling me!
John: Controll your b***h!
Louie: I will!
Kumori: What?
Louie: Cause I want you to be my girl! We can go on some dates!
Kumori: I would love that you! I don't know what to say but thanks! Love you!
I leap into his arms!
John: How do you know you get to love again I can't let you and Louie has Moria!
Louie: Never!
Kumori: You really are a heartless basturd we are going back to the party I wont be at work tommarow!
So we walk in to the ballroom I look around find a open place to dance.
Louie: I'm not the best dancer but I've learned a little going to these things! can you Dance!
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Kumori: That for me to know and you to find out first let see how the nightakes us first!
The mucie plays in the back ground!
Louie: I didn't mean that but that'll work too!!
Kumori: Becareful steping on my feet!
Louie: I didn't notice I was stairing into your eyes!
I giggle!
Kumori: Aw I'm so glade to have you!
Louie: Me too!
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I lay my head on his chest we dace till I see John walk up! He rips us a part I fall to the ground!
Louie: What the hell man!
Some random preson: Man where do you go pushing her like that man just cause you own the place! Dosen't mean you own the guest!
Louie: Thank you you ok!
He gets up! Ed and Gino walk over! louie helps me up!
Gino: What the hell are you doing?!
John: Just keeping this whore away!
Kumori: What how can you say that you know I....
Louie: Clame down now don't go doing any thing unrash now!
Ed: John you finelly understand about this issue don't you this slevly little maid of yours!
Kumori: No one calls me that!
Gino: I can't believe you dad !.
John: You'll be over it in the morning!
Ed: You bet he will he is weck just like little baby Louie here!
They both laugaht: Heee!
They take a drink of their drinks..
Kumori: How dare you low life basturd in warned you!
I reach up my leg and pull out a 3 inc dager! I try to drive it into his leg but Louie stops me!
Louie: Hunny just put down the dagre!
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I hold the dager over his foot!
John: Is that ochhhhhhhh! What the hell!
I stabed the dager into his sheo barly missing the flesh of his foot.
To be contionued in anouther issue.....
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 4:38 pm
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Kumori: I'm so sorry just I'm feeed up with the way you treat him! I'm notting but He is he best thing ever!
Louie: Wow!
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Gino: See all you do is cause conflict!
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Ed: It what she deseves right john you there hello!
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John: Yeah I'm there... Um I'm going to my room have fun every body exspect you 2 sperate!
Ed: God that man he never finish what he starts this party is late I'm going home!
Kumori: I should be going home too I just don't know if I want to or not!
Louie: Well if you want to leave you can always come to my house!
Kumori: Ok Gino thank you! You will be repayed for this you'll see at least for awile!
Gino:What hu? Well bye!
So we went off to Louie's house!
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:33 pm
Christmas story
My house on chrimass It's a snowy cold day!
Ding... Dong..
Kumori: God who can that be? ugggg!.
I toss around in the bed!
Louie: Hunny want me to answer it?!
I look deeply into his eyes!
Kumori: You know you can't anwser the door it could be the compnany! Love you!
Ding!... Dong!....
Kumori: Ok!!.. I'm coming! Hunny hand me my nigth gown!
He does! I slip it on. I run to the door!
Kumori:Hu they left! Damb it! Hu It's a pakage!
I st it on the table Louie walks in! He throw his arms around me!
Kumori: Put down the coco!l No now you get back in bed I'm not done with you yet!
Louie leans in on me!
Louie: What is it baby?!
Kumori: Mine not yours now go get in the bed I'll be there!
Louie: If I'm going to move in with you then it'll be our mail!
Kumori: Fine you gonna know eventully mom's a bad girl! Hee!..
Louie: It's okk sexy momma!
I unrap it!
Kumori: Band new pistle!
I set it down on the table!
Louie: A little girl with a gun! Kinda sexy wooh!
I sit on the table he picks me up! We stubble into the bed room!
A hafe an hour later
Ding!... Dong1..
Kumori: You got to be ******** kidding! I'll be right back it's probly carolures!
Louie: Let me get it baby! God you lok grogest! You so dang thin too!
Kumori: So are you!
I crawl out of his arms sliding on my night gown!
Kumori: Stay here I'll be back!
Ding!... Dong!..
I rush to the door answering it!
Kumori: Hello! Oh it's you guys!
Jbm: So some ones been k-noodlin!
Louie rubs his eyes! He comes up behind me grabing by the waist!
Jbm2: Yeah hey is that Louie?! Wow you moved up the scale.. Now you gonna lets us or what!
Kumori: Um!...
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Louie: Your mine forget them let's go back to bed!
Louie: Why are they here! Is there a party here I don't know about?!
Kumori: They just invited them sevls here!..
Jbm1: Yeah! Man Louie still in his boxer Girl was getten it!
Kumori: How do we get them to leave?!
He pushs back my hair!
Louie: They're like family and it's Christmas! Pluse We should take a break it'll mmake the rest To die for!
Kumori: Ok! Lets get dressed!
I tug Louie along! We come out Al and aya are already here
Kumori: More people really I didn't invit any of these people!
louie: Well I finely GEt to meet your friends! You talk about me alot to them!
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Falls! Nose bleed!
Kumori: So the killing people thing I do!.....
Louie: Yeah! I'll be here to protect my gir!l maybe I can work from home! From here!
Kumori: How sweat!
Aya: Party time! Ariba!.. Ariba!.. Abubu!..
Louie: He's drunk as hell! Do these parties happen offtent!
Kumori: I really don't know and if where lucky we can slip away!
Aya: Not with out some sock-y you kids enjoy your sevles! Here.. Here drink this shot!
10 min into the shots!
John: So they're in here?! Hu it smells odd in here!
Kumori: I'm sure I heard some thing! Shuu!
John: So you 2 having a goooooood omg!!!!
Louie: Huu! Holly s**t it's you!!!
Kumori: What sexy Panther!!..
I look up John stand there shocked!
Kumori: You never seen to grown people giving each other please-sure! I know it's socking to you but when a woman and a man love each other or don't u know?! I aint explaining all this to you!
John: Ahhh! What?... When?.. Sense when ahhh?????
Louie: Man out let us get dressed!
John walks out!
Kumori: I'm prepard for war!
Louie: What?!
John walks back in!
John: Good your dressed!
Louie: Foxy where you want these?!
Kumori: Put what's not dirty in the dresser! Then dirty in the hamper and you needs a new toothie brush!
John thinks~: They are blocking me out!... Wait what she just say!
John: What?
Louie: Oh and we need some more frost flakes!( They're food) What where you saying John?!
John: Wait!... What do you?
Louie: Do I what, oh live here most the time!
Kumori: You live here full time now you can move fully in now baby!
John: Stop this now!
Louie: Stop what?! My girl always looking sexy you can't stop that! Who'd want to any ways?!
John: You know what I mean!
Louie: Well She's my girl and I care about her alot and want to be with her so back off!
John: What's in the bag?!
Kumori: Just a pistol he got me for my birth day not much and dress some black mail photo's a plushie and some gum!
John: What you gonna do with that?!
Kumori: If any of the guest get out of hand!
John: What the ********: Oh yeah all most for got to lock these babies up that would have been bad! Some one would have lost a head or some figures!
John: God!
Louie: Noting!
John: I don't approve at all I will end this relation ship if you don't!
Louie: We be so happy pulse maybe even we might give you grand kids!
Louie: That would be nice!
Kumori: You'd want to have kids with me?!
John: You told him it's not like he already didn't know!
His phone rings he answers it!
John: I just got a call some one held a gun to my son's head!
Kumori: I don't know notting about that oh man hang on Louie Q247!
Louie: Here now?!
John: What the ******** does that mean?!
I stick a riffle out the window!
Boom....
I jump out the window!
Kumori: Dispolela time!
10 minats later
Kumori: Sorry it tuck so long!
Louie: It's ok hunny!
John: Did u just kill some?
Kumori: More like cleaning the world! one moter ******** at atime!
John: Do you know I would be a hero for killing you?!!!!.....
Louie steps infornt of me!
Louie: You anit gonna tuch her!
Kumori: In life we got to fight for our selfs and the ones we love and some times a days pay.The rules to suvile are the book of the world we most impove our enveriment for our needs and our wants!
From the ocean to the sky the war will never turely end. We most take care of our envoment or it I'll be the one who ends us all!
I turn away from the window glace at Louie then back at John!
Louie: Yeah I think you got throught to him!
Kumori: Now lets go party to our party!
John: I don't know what to say other then I should kill you! You think you can take him and love him look at your broke a maid! Your noting and you kill people for a a living and you want kids! You make a horrible mother too!
Kumori: My mother said that to me too!
Tears start running down my face!
John: You'll never be what she was Louie's mother was a wonderful wife and mother unlike you will! And you didn't get tucken away!
Louie: God you are a bad dad you should be happy for me! But No you hate me because I'm my fathers son! Know what glad your never there for me you are a sick little selfish man!
End of part 1!
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:40 pm
Part 2
We walk out in to the living room with all the other people!
Kumori: It got wild out there?!!
Kumori: It's not safe out here Brett's giving them lap dances!
Louie: That is sick who would want that! Rape!
Louie turn and looks at me!
Louie: So we either party here and have a mad time or go some where else!
Kumori: Oh! I know who brought the strong a** weed and no memo!
John: What?!!!
Louie: Look it's our cable guy and the mail man?!
John: What is all this?!
Kumori: Welcome to the really life of the lower haft party seane this the way the hard working broke haft parties down on their payed vacation days! So should we mingle over by the smokers or the dance! Who other hired that striper!
Louie: Wow! I don't know but!
John: Hey!
Kumori:Hoe! Whatz up with John?!
John: I can't let you 2 stay here!
Kumori: But who's gonna take care of the durnks and tell the police chef to that prople striper pole isn't gonna hold him! Go Chef! Hee!
John: What the chef?!...
Kumori: He dose know his way around a pole that for sure!
John: You 2 kids need to get out of here now come with me to the Christmas ball!
Louie: He said ball!
John: What yeah?!
Kumori: Let me get changed and grab my shoes!
I rush into to our room!
After changing!
I wall into the party room!
Later on
In johns car!
Kumori: I can't believe he invited us!
John: I can't believe we got out of there with our lives! Is she ok?!
Louie: She's fine she's just really happy!
Louie: Yeah whats up with you and masked balls?!
John: We're here!
We get out of the car!
Ed walks up!
Ed: Who is this stunning lady?!
John: A little bit tips Ed I'm afade!
Ed: A little still she smoking hot! Where you been?!
John: At her house with Louie talking!
Ed: Wait is that Kumori?!
Kumori: You best believe!
Kumori: I'm an assin don't you think I would notice a few spys around my house.
Every one turns around Ed knocked over a vase on to the floor!
Louie: Hunny!
Kumori: You dumb little fool you never talk to me again! yesterday you had some 1 fallow me home!
A woman: Go sister you don't let him treat you like that!
Evey one is still watching confused alittle! Louie walks out from behind a pillar he picks Ed up by his neck!
Louie: You never talk and or act like that to my woman again you hear me or I don't want to hurt you but if you hurt her I'll hurt you!
John walks in he flings back his cape!
John: No 1 comes up in my house and acts likes this! Ed control your self!
John: Now I want to see you 3 in my office! NOW!
The woman: DAM!
Kumori: You got that right sister!
John glare at her then us! We fallow him into his office!
Ed: What she doing here?!
John: Don't even get me started with your party but mine good and Ed god damb!
Louie: Japan is looking really good right now!
Kumori: Yeah it is!
John: What?!
Kumori: We are thinking of moving to Japan some time!
John: You can't please wait!
Louie: Look who cares about Vladimir's son the one you hate! But for some reason you wont let me be happy with her cause it might bring you shame some how!
Kumori: If we move he can't keep an eye on us and to make sure we don't try to make a life start a family I know you are thinking that in the back of your mind!
John: Wait what now?!
He puts his hand on my tummy!
Louie: All I can say is you are a b*****d you should be happy for me and even happier if I found the woman I might one day want have my babies!
He takes his hand off my tummy and stans by the open window!
Kumori: Hu!
John: What's going on why?
A tear runs down my face I lift my head!
Kumori: If you want to fight I will fight you and win!
John: What?!
I tackle him my eyes turn blue!. I stand over him then faint to the ground!
My body lays cold! Louie picks me up!
Louie: Hunny I love you please don't die! I've never felt the same way as I do for you! I don't know if I ever will I won't!
A tear runs down his chin and lands on my face his eye turn the same shad of blue!
Ed: Hurry kill it it looks pa-zest!
Our hair blows in the wind! A light flashes I fall into his lap retracted our eyes I fall so cold into Louie's lap!
Louie: Hu that was strage!
John: Oh god what was that?!
Louie: Mori you there she not responding come on don't die!
Kumori: Why do you think I'm dieing! I'm talking to you silly that was strage! God that's never happen before except once before!
John: I was loved?
Ed: What?!
John: You 2 should be getting home!
Louie: We got home and had a pretty good nigh don't you think hunny!
He picks me up carrying me out!
The End
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 12:14 am
I lay in bed cuddle up in Louie's chest his arms around my waist and his hair around me. I giggle kissing Louie's neck softly.
Kumori: Sleep well my prince I so lucky to have you!
I look down at the bottom of the bed to see the child wrapped up in Moonshi's tails. I smile looking out into the dark room.
Louie: Something wrong hunny?!
He kisses my forehead watching my ears twitch!
I look over at the ash tray wonder what to say to him!
Kumori: It's noting baby!
I giggle rubbing his neck slowly. I cuddle back in to his chest falling back to sleep!
later on
I wake up to the sound of yelling!
Kasui: Zombiesss!
I sit up.
Louie: He's just sleep talking again don't worry ok!
Kumori: I'm just so worried about the hole ghost thing! He can see them and it frightens me!
Kasui looks up at us!
Kasui: Grandpa came to visit me he says dad's been slacking off at work and that the company has been noticing it! He said he's noticed it so he know they have! he says that some people have parked a car down the street and walked down here when mommy wasn't home looking for daddy! They don't exactly want to take him way yet but if mommy goes public they might take a different path!
Kumori: e-shi-mo! Uhhhh!
My ears stand up! A tear runs down my face!
Kumori: I'm flat broke i can't pay for a lawyer let alone being sued.
I grab my head around the hair line shaking it! Louie holds my head to his chest!
Louie: Hush! OK go back to sleep ok I'll deal with this my goddess sleep! i might just need to take a vacation from this world again ok! Now sleep.
He gets up siting next to me genitally sing. I start to fade from the stress and the sound of the beautiful melody that hangs from his lips.
He gets up walking in to the next room.
He opens the window leaning against the door he lights a cig. he pulls out his cell dailing a number!
Louie: Hey Mark I need you help! Got any friends that can help me! Yeah ok!
I start dreaming! (My dream)
Knock on the door.
I walk over answering it.
Kumori: Help sire your our new neighbor aren't you help.
The man: Um.. Can I come in!
Kumori: i don't see why not the boys play together alot. Your wife tells me you work at the market alot. ignore the empty bottles me and my husband ahve been having some drinks earler!
Louie walks down!
Louie: Hey baby oh hello Bob it,s nice to meet you! hey want to come see my car just got the tint redone!
Bob the man: Sure i need to tell you some thing!
The walk out into the garage!
Kumori: Odd well men are men!
I hear yelling. Louie runs back in.
Louie: oh i forgot theres something in the oven mayo sandwhitchs.
Kumori: What I Crap.
Kumori: Children run get in the island now goo with yah!
They start to run when we hear a bang at the door!
Police: Police open the door!
Kumori: Run baby run go!
Louie: I'm not leaving you behind!
kumori: All that maters are you and the children. Ok!
Tear run down my face the scares on my arm hurt. Pain wells up in my stomach.
I kiss Louie deeply. he slides the children in the island.
cop: Open or we shot we know he's in there There's no exspace we got some help from one your X's and got you covered .
Louie grabs my arm!
Louie: I can't teleport oh shite. The door opens light fills the room.
Louie hold s a gun to his head.
Louie: Take me and i pull the triger,
Louie: Go take the children go woman!
Kasui: Why dady have a gun to his head is he really sad or some thing
Moonshi covers his mouth picking him up.
Kumori: You life hunny is worth way more then mine go!
Cop: Ok no one has to get hurt put the gun down!
Cop 3: Damn writers.
i stand infront of Louie.
Moonshi wraps the kids in her tail covering their eyes also closing hers.
Kumori: let me have him and no one will get hurt call this all off please. We all can disappear no one has to know this happened.
My tears burn my skin.
Police chef: Aint gonna happen orders are above my head.
I pull his arms around me!
Kumori: I love the children do what you have to to keep them safe and loved. I told you the day i die I want to die in your arm. I want o feel your ora you heart your love and pashion I'm sorry! I give you the freedom to escape.
Cop: Quit wasting our time damb it.
I kiss him deeply I feel what power in my body leave mine and go into his and Moonshi's. Our souls connect. My ears glow. Good bye my love to the day we meet again. dark beam oh energy fills the room. All you can hear is energy and bullets hitting fall against his my flesh and my body ainst his. The energy fades away. Every thing shot or broken exsect the ones i wante dto protect.
Later on in the dream.
I see light around my white but dim. I expect to lift my wrist and be crufted to a hostile bed oe dead!but instead I find my self in an odd room no windows a few posters on the walls the kids playing sadly watching. As I'm being feed blood Louie crying histrionically next to me holding my hand that hangs off the side the bed I black in and out again.
A voice: They'll never find you now you live under ground now1 Well If she lives other wise the children just will! I'm sorry ok! I won't let my other hafe die or let alone this family!.
The dream ends
I sit up in bed panting.
Louie: Baby It's a dream I say it too! I wont let that get that fare i promise .
He pulls me to hiss chest i cry. He kisses my forehead.
The end
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Kumori Kitsune787 Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:08 pm
I wake up I look up Louie holds me!
Louie: Thanks for loving me even that I'm kinda nerdy and..
I cut him off!
Kumori: Sexy so sweet and kind!
I play with his hair! He smiles at me. He tickles me i bust out giggling trying to get the tickling to stop. I fall deeper in to his chest the tickles stop.
Louie: It's cold and rainy the kids are at school. Sooo!!
Kumori: Oh babe sure!
Louie: Oh baby
He pulls me under him as he kisses my neck!
I slowly rub his chest.
later on
I cuddle up to Louie's chest.
Louie: Again!
Kumori: Aw baby sure!
I wag my tail. I wrap my self around him.
we here the door creak.
Ed walks in with a shocked look.
Louie points at him.
Louie: We gonna find you we gonna hide you you are so dumb!
Ed: What?
I'm laughing under the sheets.
Ed: Stop joking around so much.
Louie: Why whatz wrong?!
Ed: You haven't been showing up for work that offend once again.
Louie: Can't you just dock my pay and say I've been there.
Ed: No people are starting to notice!
Louie: Like who?
Ed: Every one!
Louie: So I'll go in once a week or so.
I cling to him.
Kumori: No that means I have to go to school with out him!
Ed; So! Ian of chrose notices and even Moria and the bosses.
Louie: I see but still.
Ed: Of chrose there's you king ship your followers your subjects are acting up.
Louie: I've been dealing with the paper work but we all know i'm not the king really!
Ed: So they think you are at least most of them do.
Louie: We both know father isn't dead! I'm sorry Kumori I wish I could kill him but he's my father some think keeps stopping me!
He holds me tight.
Kumori: It's ok he's just jealous you have me and you've grown to be such a great FINE man!
Ed: Um hu!
Louie: Any ways Yes I'm married i mean we are but That's even hidden so how am I king King must be married or crowed at a very young age. I'm just young. I'm a prince I want to be king but I'm not rightfully and some know that.
Ed: Plus they way you act. Smoking drinking doing that alot. Stealing murder. Taking justice in your own hands. Fast sports car. You have kids.
Louie: so i live a great life here most of that is for fun or to deal with the company.
Ed: what kind of influence are you?!
Louie; They one that tells people to enjoy life and that love true love can come from any where plus who really know about our life any ways other then you and people we meet?.
Louie: we are teaching our children to be safe enjoy life and love not to be so close off and skeptical. there are thing in each world that we can't even under stand. Or you can't relisen science can't prove. In some cases me. Ghost aliens some Wicca. Other things too life is hard like a game like but more meaningful.
Ed: What that have to do with work?!
Louie: i enjoy it but not as much as my family and friends! Why spend my life miserable in a job i have money I work other things get money that way too! But i have to protect my family so I'll come and work a litle more but just because I have to.
Ed: Fine but this is not over!
Louie: i know it's all just begun.
The End
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