kitty kitty wants some pritty pritty art. *o*
bah, now that I am past that... lol
Your art style is wounderful, and as far as light sources and porportions I think for your 'style' you are good to go. >.3
Now I am not sure what order these go in, as far as newest to oldest..
Number 2:
This one looks wounderous! And when you are drawing in pen, it is hard to draw out your guide lines -I think, not much of a pen person- so my only question about this one would be her legs and if they line up with the hips correctly. The one on our left looks a little to far over and a little thin compaired to the other.
Also, the ankles/calfs. I understand she is wearing a pair of boots, but even in a pair of boots if a woman has any calf muscel at all, you are going to see it unless it isn't form fitting. But as the goot gets down to the ankle, it looks form fitting. The ankle -the one I can see- is to thin to suport all of the above weight.
But you have excilent detail in it all!
the third one:
This gas mask looks like its missing a circal... >.< But excilent otherwise!
4th and 5th: Are they your OC's? They are cool/cute respectively lol. >.3
on the 5th one however, I suggest practicing female hands. Drawing them, but all your art to this point has had the slim pointy and kinda long fingers, so its become part of your style.
The chibi's: Just wounderous! I bed if you started a shop, you could really make a killing. XDD
after the chibi's: This picture is great, but my only question would be the foot she is sitting on... it looks a bit off... Reference picture next time, as it also looks a bit short, or perhaps its just her clothing.. >.<
Other than that, detail is there, and you have the background looking like its on fire. >.3
Next one:
Her -from out point of view- right arms seems to long... Arms go half way down the calfs on normal people and the one on our left looks good -as you take into account her sloutch and her knee being at an angel- Although the shoulder on that arms looks off as well... to far out maybe? This is an harsher angel and pose to be sketching out. Then down to her foot. Ankle looks a bit small, and so does the shoe.
Last picture:
Gas mask again... if the two circles are the one's you have drawn then the circles for the eyes need to be moved over.
If you google images Gask Mask, you come up with three basic types:
This oneThis oneThis oneI do hope I have helped in some way, and you don't think I am to... harsh. XDD
but still love the art! Amazing detail when you add it. Your style is unique in the top half, get a little out of the pattern after your chibi's.
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