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 Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 4:32 am
The return of Hope
...is a fantasy story I'm still working on, I allready have 14 full pages of it and more wil be coming soon. The reason is that I get the best ideas for the storyline when I'm at school when the lesson is so boring that I want to sleep. lol
the first part will be in the next post, depending on your vote (in the poll) I will put up the newer parts ^^
I hope you are going to like it
Edit
I put up all the parts I have for now... sooo... if you have read them all I'd really like to ear your opinion.... and good tips how to make it better are welcome too ^^
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 4:34 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:59 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:02 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:03 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:09 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:09 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:13 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:15 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:16 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:18 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:43 am
heey, you have been busy blaugh ...or bored? confused
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 6:56 am
rofl I knew it was too stupid to read XD
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 4:32 pm
heart oh my gosh! my story has a fan!! biggrin on Deviantart.. she commented on all of the parts, she cant wait until the next part is ready and she loves the plot thingee... blaugh
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