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 Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 12:25 pm
So This morning after Rayne made her contest I wrote a poem. It took probably less then 5 minutes and I hardly ever change my poems. I write them within minutes and leave them as they are. So make fun of the poem. rofl Its okay you won't be beaten to death with a chicken.
When your world was blue
my lies felt true.
As the light grew bright
I feared you'd lose this fight.
I don't want to lose you.
My love please come through.
Fear not the pain, I'll mend you well!
I need you. I wish you had never fell,
but did you? Or a jump?
Why are we in this slump?
I hate what we're becoming!
Holding hands lets fall.
Together we'll be walking down the hall.
Such fine the light, so easing and bright.
Not titled. ninja
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 12:56 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 1:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 3:30 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 3:42 pm
^^ that was a great poem Mockary!!!
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 7:37 pm
I actually quite liked it ^^
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 8:35 pm
ninja I don't know whose weirder, me for writing that kind of stuff or you people for liking it. neutral
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:04 pm
MINUTES mockary?? I envy you.
I'd take me hours to come up with a poem like that. x_x
Actually, I'd probably never think of writing a poem like that. xD
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:14 pm
Mockary ninja I don't know whose weirder, me for writing that kind of stuff or you people for liking it. neutral haha, maybe we're all just weird people.. xd
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:46 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:47 pm
v.v.v.e.e.n MINUTES mockary?? I envy you.
I'd take me hours to come up with a poem like that. x_x
Actually, I'd probably never think of writing a poem like that. xD
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:50 pm
Mockary v.v.v.e.e.n MINUTES mockary?? I envy you.
I'd take me hours to come up with a poem like that. x_x
Actually, I'd probably never think of writing a poem like that. xD everybody always thinks they're work is crap, its human nature, but alot of people will like what they might think is crap ^^ *runs to find Veen and her bong*
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:09 pm
Sounds nice actually, not usually my type though xd
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 12:39 am
I was the first a**-kisser, do I get a prize?! eek
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:22 am
Bulimic Rainbows I was the first a**-kisser, do I get a prize?! eek hahaha xd
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