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 Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 7:49 am
As the title statuates, this is the comment thread for Primordial Ooze^^
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:51 am
Its interesting. 8 out of 10... I geuss... I dont no... I'd have to think about but right now I'm to tried..........
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 10:21 am
Intresting. I like the sense of suspence and mystery in it...
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 5:56 pm
Me too...BUT DONT FORGET THE CHICKENS!!!...Oh wait...That comes later...BWAHAHAHA*sinks into da shadows*
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 6:23 pm
O_o;;; Chickens...?!!
Wooh. I can't wait. stare sweatdrop
xd xd
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 12:06 am
Second part is up for reading, and Saphidae, you should read The Sixth Planet, I hear it's really good^^
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HieiJagonchi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 8:22 pm
Nice concept and opening, but I think you could use a little more thought when it comes to the hallway. Posibly give an explination of why only they can see their doors and lights?
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 12:38 pm
Well....I can't...
That comes into play later...
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HieiJagonchi Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 7:33 pm
Yes, I see.
Well, I await the next entry with much anticipation.
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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 6:34 pm
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HieiJagonchi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 5:23 pm
Nice. You've got a good concept.
Personally, I'd be tempted to leave the girl to die, but that would mean no powers... Tough decision. xp
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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 12:58 am
Well.....I do kill off a few people in the end...and there are definitly going to be some twists...^^
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HieiJagonchi Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 7:18 pm
Well then hurry up and keep going! xd
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