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 Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:43 pm
Floating Head Dialogue - Straight up speech, no actions, no nothing. Like two + heads talking in space
These come to me sometimes, I'll stick 'em here and we can elaborate
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“You knew”
“You don’t understand.
“I understand. I Understand you knew and you didn’t tell me!”
“I’m sorry I,”
“Why didn’t you tell me?”
“I couldn’t”
“I thought we were beyond business…”
“We’re not…”
“Why not? I worked so hard for you! Just to be with you!”
“I know! I KNOW! Oh god I know….all too well.”
“They why did you let her do this?”
“I didn’t have a choice!”
“You always have a choice!”
“Not in this world.”
“Ye-”
“You’re so naïve. Don’t you get it? We’re not in control of this world, she is.”
“But we can-”
“Even now you don’t get it. She wanted you here. She wanted you to find me. We’re all dead Gloria. There’s nothing left for us”
“You’ve given up hope.”
“There was never any to begin with.”
“You may as well cut off your wings and sell them to your neighbors. You’re not my commander anymore.”
“But Gloria I-”
“Goodbye Andrew.”
“Going somewhere Gloria?”
“You Can’t keep me here”
“I can and will. My little pet made sure of that.”
“You ‘re a monster”
“I’m not the monster here you are.”
“What?”
“You’ve evaded me, inhabited a dead body, and run off to cause chaos in my little world. For that you must be punished.”
“I’d like to see you try”
“Gladly”
“I’m so sorry….”
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:49 pm
“Run!”
“What?”
“Get out of here!”
“What are you doing?”
“The only thing I can, no go!”
“Not with-”
“I SAID GO AND THAT’S AN ORDER!”
“…”
“Bring it on Tess-Bot.”
“Commander…”
“You dare turn on me Commander? For what?”
“For the only woman ever worth fighting for….”
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:50 pm
((doesn't like this one, but you can't like everything...))
“There’s nothing left for me…”
“What do you mean?”
“We’ll never get who we need to face Tessla. We’ll never make it to the end….nothing will ever change.”
“Gloria…”
“Let’s face it. We’re at the end of our rope. We’re finished.”
“That’s what she wants.”
“Good, she can have it.”
“I don’t believe you.”
“Why not?”
“You started all of this, you joined us all together to fight against Tessla. You’re the reason we have a chance and now you’re giving up?”
“Yeah well, things change.”
“You’ve changed”
“Tough luck”
“What’s the matter with you?”
“He’s gone! He’s gone and he’s never coming back?”
“Who’s gone?”
“My commander…I…I loved him.”
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:29 am
YAY FOR ACUTE LIVER... LIVOR... HOWEVER-YOU-SPELL-IT-MORTIS!!!
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:32 am
XD
I think it may actually be one word but I don't really care
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:38 am
You know what I would like. I would like to know who is talking in these dialogues. Easier to follow that way no?
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:43 pm
Well I suppose for the one who didn't think of them that would be easier XD
1st and 2nd one is between Gloria and The Commander (whom I so dubbed Andrew) And then Tess-bot steps in
3rd is Gloria & Jason
I was trying to get some dialogue for the roof scene that keeps popping in my head but I don't think this is it
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:35 pm
Hee, hee. Katie and I were messing around in school and we ended up with something like this. She said it belonged in the floating heads and so here it is, because this would be Riza's reaction to a zombie, right?
Riza
Gloria
Bethany
Jason
Narrator (If so needed)
Early in the story, at some point when Riza and Gloria are all still a little awkward with each other.
"Wait, so you're a... zombie?!"
"Yes Riza. I believe so."
"So... you are dead... Right?"
"...In a way... Yes."
"So... You're dead, but alive?"
*sigh* "My body was dead but my soul is alive. My soul is steadily repairing my body-which might kill me-and I'm regaining my normal functions."
"..."
"What I mean is that I'm exactly like the zombies in all the stories you've heard, but I'm smarter. My brain is more advanced."
"Oh my gosh, are you going to eat my brains!?!?!"
"Riza! I didn't mean like that! I meant-"
"Leave my brains alone!!"
"Riza!"
Later on in the story, once the troupe have become more familiar and friendly with each other.
"Riza... There's something I have to tell you..."
"Sure Gloria, anything. What is it?"
"Do you remember when we first met, and you realized I was a zombie?"
"Uh, yeah... Sorry about that. Old stories die hard I guess..."
"Yes well.... I wasn't entirely honest with you..."
"What... What do you mean Gloria?"
"Well.... I- I- Ah! BRAAAIIIIINNNNNSSSS! BRAAAAAAAAIINNNNNS! E=mc squared! BRAAAAIIIIINNNNNS! Quantum Physics! BRRRAAAAAAIIIIIIIIINNNNNNSSSSSSSS!!!!!!"
"Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!"
"Riza! watch where you're going! What are you screaming about?"
"Run for your life Bethany! Gloria's a zombie!"
"...Yes Riza. We've known-"
"BRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNSSSSSSS!!!"
"Ahhhhh!!!!!!!
"Wait for me! You're my human sacrifice! I have to TRIP YOU!!!"
"RIZA!"
"Was that really neccesary?"
"Yes. Yes it was."
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:40 am
XD
Oh that is simply priceless
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:09 pm
I'd hoped you would like it! You got all that was going on? No confusion?
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:40 pm
no it makes sense
And it's horribly ironic
We're doing Humans Vs Zombies here right now
I'm still human (knock on wood)
But we're loosing fast
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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:32 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:30 pm
Aww you didn't want to be a zombie?
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:39 am
No, it's way less fun.
Just like no one ever wants to be "it" in a game of tag
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:22 pm
Ah I see. Sometimes it can be fun, but eventually I get tired and just lay in the grass. Or my brother finds it more fun and insists I tag him.
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