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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:33 pm
Someday these will be more than scripts
((This post won't have anything in it....maybe an explanation))
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:39 pm
(This Preview has been approved for all Audiences by the motion picture association of America) *The words in Italics come up on the screen in blood red over all black. Epic sounding music (I imagined something along the lines of the stuff from pirates or a super action movie) plays in the background as the trailer plays, a narrator also voicing over the words*
Don't Believe Everything You Hear... *flashes of Tess Bot and the beautiful cities* Tessla (Bot): Together, we are making this world, a better place! *people cheer* Don't Believe Everything You See... *View of someone talking to Zombie Gloria* ???: That coloration on your arms...That's livor Mortis...Shouldn't you be dead? Gloria: Should be And Don't *Quick view of Shocked Riza* Trust *Quick View of shocked Bethany* Anyone... *View of Jason before switching to a rather angry/upset Gloria* Gloria: Wait...So you've been lying to me this whole time? ~ *change to capture scene, place Tess-Bot in place of Tessla for this line* Tessla: I can give you everything you've ever wanted ~ *Random scene that would look nice with this quote* ???: I never meant for it to be like this...
This Summer... *Commander in his office, the tick visible behind him* Commander: I'm so sorry... Experience the Perfect World... *More views of the world, the happier side with flashes of families* Computer: Zeolite Renewed the World, Creating cities amongst the wasteland... Gone Horribly Awry... *Flash of Tess Bot before chase scene during lines* Tessla: You don't stand a chance against me... ~ *More scenes play, showing as terrible as you can show in a "suitable for all ages" preview. There's a sudden halt in the music at the end* ~ *view of Gloria's face, crying at the end. Cuts to static during the laughter* Gloria: I...I can't. I've failed.....I can't.... Tessla: *Maniacle Laughter* *The Zeolite Logo blinks on and off for a few seconds, lasting longer each time* Computer: A perfect world forevermore... *Final cut to black, Summer and the year of release appear on the screen in blood red, along with the required movie information afterward* (Summer 2021)
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:42 pm
This makes me want to go see this in theatres.....
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:45 pm
XD Good to know This is actually the second one here... (This preview has been approved by the motion picture association of America.) *The camera shows Tess bot staring over a massive city full of creatures. It changes to each of the cities, showing those people looking up at several large TV screens (think Times square). Sad music plays in the background, a huge contrast to the feelings the ruler is trying to convey to her people.*
Tess-bot: Dearest friends! Today marks the start of a new era! Yeas ago, the fall of my greatest hero turned our lives tragic. But now look at us! We've built the cities! *the camera shows views of the deadlands* We've started generations of prosperous lives! *possibly Death of Bethany's family scene* We've overcome famine, and sickness, and hell itself. *needs a scene* We've bred angels, *dead Gloria* and demons, *remorseful Jason* and all of those in between. *upset Riza/ pissed Bethany?* We are the masters of life and death, *offering Jason the helping hand* the heroes *angry Zombie Gloria* and villains *Tess-bot and the shifters* of the greatest story ever told! And together we are making the world a better place! *camera is back on the speech at this point, people cheering in their respective cities as the music dies at "told". Music then changes to something more action-y and suspenseful, as it shows our rag-tag team stepping out of their proverbial ashes, giving dark looks to the audience. Camera pans up from Tess-bot's shoes to her face* Tess-bot: You think you stand a chance against me? I've been playing this game a lot longer than any of you kiddies....and it's time your game ended. (voice modulated to be Tess-bot's instead of little Tessla's so as not to spoil the biggest part of the story) *music cuts out and the Zeolite logo flickers on the screen, followed by the movie information*
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:49 pm
Now I totally need to see this...it needs to be a movie
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:57 pm
I need to reread all of out current material for this Then I can make more *bricked*
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:01 pm
...Is that a hint hint, wink wink at me? sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:08 pm
hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge, nudge
Maybe... *has all of her own stuff, but needs to reread that too*
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:25 pm
UH... I'll work on that k?! mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:26 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:46 pm
Uh, what exactly would you like...?
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:14 am
Whatever you can give me I guess that I didn't give you in the first place or that you changed
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:16 am
Um, I can give you am updated typed-so-far version, though I haven't typed much, but I don't remember what you have...
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 12:03 pm
I have everything I gave you Plus some character stuff I think....somewhere.... Not that I mind getting repeats of stuff, my writing folder needs a drastic organization overhall
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