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Buu's Blues (A DiscoDino Creation)

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:32 pm


Hello everyone. This is my first fanfic mrgreen Hope you enjoy it! its not finished let but here is part of it. 3nodding

Buu's Blues
Chapter One: Mr. Satan

Buu is trying to play fetch with Bee. Poor Bee he can barely even run anymore. No matter how old I get I will always be the World Champ!
“Mr. Satan! Bee no getting ball” Buu pouted.
“Well be he’s old, his bones are getting weak he doesn’t get all the exercise I do.” I told Buu.
“Oh! Is Mr. Satan old too? Is that why yous hair go bye-bye?” Oh man is it really that noticeable?! The strongest person in the world shouldn’t be losing his hair! “Ok Buu lets go back inside now!” I called trying to change the subject. “I need to exercise I don’t become this strong over night, you know” Examining my muscles in a puddle
“Awww can we pleeease play with Bee longer! Please Mr. Satan!” Buu begged
“Fine but only a few more minutes, I mean it this time!”
Chapter Two: Buu


"Time for me to goes to bed! Does Bee want to sleep in my room tonight?!” Oooh tomorrow I’m going to eat pancakes, and ice cream, and pizza for breakfast !! Buu so hungry me can’t wait!
Yaaawn Morning Yay! Buu hopes Mr. Satan is up! “Bee! Wake up! Up, Up, Up!” hmm Bee must be really really tired! Guess me let him sleep more. Oh I smell food!!
“Good Morning, Buu.” Mr. Satan said cooking eggs and bacon…yum! “Where is Bee? He usually follows you everywhere.”
“Oh! Bee is sleepy in my room still, I tried to wake him up but he tired so he sleep.” I replied waiting for the yummy food to get done.
“Mr. Satan after we get done with eating can we go play at park?!” I shouted happily!
“Sure, Buu, the food is finished I promise you it’s the best food ever! If I wasn’t the World Champ in fight I would be the World Champ in cooking! Now eat your food like I need to tell you that”
“Yay I beat you!! I’m done eating!! Hahahaha” I shouted joyfully.
“Man Buu I didn’t even have time to sit down. Go get Bee while I get finished eating. I need to stay healthy the World Tournaments are coming up in a few weeks.” Hmm Bee still sleepy? What was he doing last night? Why Bee so tired? I guess I’ll have to carry him to the park to have fun.
“What’s wrong with Bee?!” Mr. Satan asked.
“Nothin he sleepy. I guess he didn’t sleep any last night. Mr. Satan grabbed Bee from my hands. Why he do that?!
“Oh no… Bee…” Mr. Satan looked like he was about to cry.
“Buu, Bee isn’t sleeping see... He has to be sleeping. We are going to the park today remember you promised! Lets go, come on!”
“Buu, listen Bee he’s…he’s dead.” Mr. Satan whispered.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:48 am


Bump.. now dont get too crazy with the colors rainbow brite. xD

Oh let me explain im not being rude by bumping this shes already had me read this. xD I gave it a thumbs up. wink

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:19 pm


AWWWW, poor Buu and Mr Satan (I always giggle at his name, I know i shouldn't, but it's just hilarious when people are chanting 'Satan' to the sky rofl )

Anyway! AWWWW, I feel sorry for Buu. That's a sweet story! Thumbs up Disco biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 2:20 pm


can i use the bragonballs to wish bee back?

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 2:51 pm


Thanks everyone (except Vegeta tales xD ((kidding)) Im working on more right now and Mr. Satans name makes me giggle too =P
PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:24 pm


Chapter Three: Mr. Satan
Buu grabbed Bee from my arms. What? Buu is trying to heal Bee…poor Buu.
“Who do this? Who do this to my doggy?!” Buu cried.
“No one did this, He is-was just old, im sorry Buu but you cant heal him…hes already gone” Oh man Buu’s crushed, what am I going to do?!
“BUU HELP HIS BEE!!” Buu shouted with steam coming out of his body.
“Buu you need to calm down, I will miss Bee too but you really need to calm down” I said nervously, I don’t that scary Super Buu to come again, then not even I could stop him… well I guess I have been training a lot lately so maybe I could. “Maybe we could have a funeral for little Bee”
“What a funeral?” Buu questioned.
“Its where you tell Bee bye, everyone will come over to tell Bee bye.”
“No I cant tell my Bee bye-bye! I love him he Buus’ best friend!” Buu blubbered and hugged Bee.
“Buu, you have to, I’m sorry but Bee is gone hes not going to come back.”

“I don’t see why I have to go to a funeral for a damn deag dog.” Vegeta complained while Bulma was fixing his bowtie. “Women! Its fine I’m the Prince of all Saiyans I think I can put on a stupid bowtie!”
“Thanks for coming Vegeta and Bulma. Also Vegeta, Buu is really down so don’t… be you, be nice.
“I can do whatever I want old ma-“ Bulma elbowed Vegeta in the stomach.
“So where’s Buu? How is he doing? My mom came incase he needed some food” Bulma said concerned.
“He’s in his room he has been in there for three days now, but tell him that you mother is here…he loves you mom’s food.”

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:55 pm


I know I ain't supposed to laugh, but man did Vegeta make me giggle in that chapter lol

Good job! I can so imagine that scene between Vegeta and Bulma.

And poor Buu... Makes me wanna cry as well crying

I liked it, carry on! biggrin
PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 5:08 pm


thanks! i knew i just had to put Vegeta in my story somewhere

im trying to carry on but im a little stuck xD

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:16 pm


Good job Abby. xp
PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:22 am


-is working on reading-

Would you mind not posting it in strange colors?
It's really hard to read that much in the pink.


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 2:36 pm


<3


thanks everyone
and sorry about the color but i changed it...im just too colorful User Image


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:50 am


Thank you.
That is so much better. n.n

Also: Read it.
Love it! Keep it up, chika.


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