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 Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:55 pm
Goku Crashed into the cliff and Bardock flew towrds the ground.
"You really got it in you dontcha kid? That determination! You're drive! now i understand why you're so different!", Bardock sadi towards the small crater that Goku lay in. Bardock walked over to the hole and peered in, but didn't see anything. Suddenly Goku appeared over his father's head and clubbed him into the hole. Befor Bardock hit the ground he blasted a small Ki wave up towards Goku only to have it deflected harmlessly. Bardock's golden hair shimmered slightly in the fading light of the Wave.
Goku looked at his father with a ferocious glare.
"KA-ME-HAAAA-MEEEEEEE-!", Goku yelled as the wave began to charge and pulsate withgreen-ish blue energy. Bardock grinned and looked down at his hands thinkin to himself,wow i'm the father of one of the greatest warrriors the universe has ever seen! But he had to get it from somewhere! Let's see if I got what it takes!
"Ok Kid! Try this! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!",Bardock yelled upwards to Goku, a massive ball of Blue energy erupted from his palm.
"-HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!", Goku screamed as the Kamehameha was unleashed from the Saiyan warrior. The Blasts met in mid-air and it seemed like time stopped temorarily, the immediate environment was riddledd in a blue tint. Veins bulged in Bardock's neck and forehead. Goku gritted his teeth, trying to gain the upper-hand in the struggle of his broken family.But it seemed like his father matched him in every aspect.
I don't get it.......Vegeta told me that my father's power level was barely 10,000! But now his level is on par with mine! I just don't understand!
Goku poured more energy in to his blast but BArdock seemed to match his output perfectly.
Bardock looked at his son. He smiled to himself and jumped up, letting Goku's blast punch through his own causing a small energy disruption. Both Bardock and Goku sheilded heir eyes from the blast and the only sound was the battle of the KIng and Prince.-------------------------------------------------
ok people i will work on this some more comment with some new ideas please
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 3:40 pm
<3 its really good
ill try to think of some ideas for you...if i think of any ill make sure to tell you! DiscoDino
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XxDiscoxDinoxX Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 9:32 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 2:19 pm
Wow. great story. Maybe.. this is just an idea something to get your ideas going again. you can have vegeta and his father get too intense with each other and goku and bardock try to step in? or have trunks and gohan/goten meet/fight their gramps? but your doing great so far. ^^
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 5:47 pm
Vegeta-Tales Wow. great story. Maybe.. this is just an idea something to get your ideas going again. you can have vegeta and his father get too intense with each other and goku and bardock try to step in? or have trunks and gohan/goten meet/fight their gramps? but your doing great so far. ^^ yea i'll seriously consider Vegeta trying to kill his daddy......it might be a strong possibility
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 10:13 pm
Tehe. Glad i could help. ^^
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-PrimaCzarina- Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 12:32 pm
❛❛-read all of them-
Wow.
I love the idea of the dads coming back, and using the lookout's tricks is just brilliant.
And you have the personalities down perfect. It's amazing.
Keep it up!
And I love the idea of Vegeta trying to kill his dad. It's pretty much exactly what would happen. xD❜❜ <3 -primaczarina-
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:04 pm
ok people!!!! if you liked Part I-V your gonna love Part VI!!!!!! Its going to be Freeking Bananas!!!!!!!!!!
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XxDiscoxDinoxX Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:58 pm
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