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 Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 7:11 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 8:21 am
[Claps] I love your poems...I really really like this one.
PVC
Secret friends and dressed up lies
Hidden deep within my face
Tales of majesty long despised
Each one decked out in jewels and lace
Copper things and paper wings
and words softly spoken
Golden frowns and silver rings
But inside easily broken.
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 2:41 pm
Demonic Life [Claps] I love your poems...I really really like this one.
PVC
Secret friends and dressed up lies
Hidden deep within my face
Tales of majesty long despised
Each one decked out in jewels and lace
Copper things and paper wings
and words softly spoken
Golden frowns and silver rings
But inside easily broken. Thankies so much. I really like that one too, it's one of my favorites. I usually don't share my poetry, but oh well gotta sometime if I wanna be recognised for it even in the slightest.
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 2:42 pm
You have renamed
all the parts of my body
that never before knew
a gentle word and
made each one of them
your sweetheart.
You call to them
as you lay beside me,
let your skin
love mine.
Then your kiss
like that first
crumbling kiss
that dissolved me
into a dust, fragrant,
musical and potent.
Leave the panties
on.
Then I take you
in a rush
even before
our socks
come off.
Even better
half-dressed.
Birds fly from
your eyes.
Your mouth is
a hot soup
on a dead-winter
dusk. I taste
you again and
again.
Afterwards,
you make a nest
of me with
pillows and bedsheets.
I watch you,
my Lolita,
in one surviving sock,
as you search
for the words
to wash
my pleasure away.
-Lola
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 2:45 pm
i picked up the receiver
pressed the numbers
feeling their imprint under my finger tips
that tingly sensation running like electricity
through me to my sexual organs
making me instantly wet
it rang once you answered
surprised i had taken a chance
and called you at home
I'll make this brief i whispered
just listen and agree
i want you to call me baby
i want to feel my body react when i hear that single word escape your mind set
there was silence
and an almost smile came through the telephone wire
i want you call me baby i continued
often every chance you get
so i can become desensitized to the word
to my reactions
the smile was gone now
you were listening intensely as i choked out the next words
i want you to call me baby
even in public
so that if there is a next time
and i sit across from you at dinner
watching silently with a smile
as you tell stories about us to total strangers and future lovers
using my name spoken only during passion
that i do not cry out in outrageous orgasm
and weep at the casual way it sounds out there in the open
then i heard another voice in the distance call for you
but just before the phone went dead
i heard you say i can do that baby
and my eyes welled up
my legs went to jello
and i fell to the floor in a puddle.
-Lola
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:22 pm
Oh I love your poems! I like the two at the beginning in red and the very last one. ^^ biggrin They're really well written.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:02 pm
Oh new poems o.o Excellent poems.
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:23 am
biggrin wonderful poems... red the first one and thought "gotta read more" ^^
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 12:38 pm
Thanks guys It means a lot. I'm going to post some more later. I got to go do some modly chores first. Peace.
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:06 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:12 pm
Perfection cursed by distance
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Boyish good looks like a smal child,
No attitude or rudeness, just tender and mild.
You treat me so well I almost feel bad,
that I can't give you all I ever had.
Like the love of a girl you'll see everyday,
Or a love that'll make you feel that special way.
Or The realization of all you're hopes and dreams,
I will tell you, my feeling are as the seem.So Torn
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You left me alone, dazed and confused,
Mourning, lost, sad & abused.
I wish youewre here to dress my wound,
to make it all better, make it heal soon.
I miss you now more than anytime before,
I'm afriad to see whats in store.
I want you to be here, want to hold you in my arms,
away from all the hurts and all the harms.
You so important to me, never want you too go,
Just aknowlage me because I love you so. My Love ------- Every tear that falls, makes me die inside,
Makes me cowar and crawl, and reteat so I can hide.
I want to open up, show how I really feel,
To open up my locked vault, to see that love is real.
You came to my aid, everytime I cried,
I would push you so far away, everytime you tried.
But now I realise, what you did for me,
You gave me a reason to live, you gave me a reason to be.
I love you now & always, no matter what you do,
And whenever we're apart, my heart it cries for you. For once, I wish this was a dream
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You held me close on that cold winter night.
Arm in arm you held me tight.
You leaned over and whispered in my ear,
you told me everything I needed to hear.
"Princess I love you, I always have.
I love the way you smile, and I love the way you laugh.
I love you're emerald eyes, and I love your chestnut hair.
Tell me now, do you understand how much I care?
You have me thinking about you night and day,
I have never felt about another this way"
The story is almost over
This love is almost done
Yes, his feelings changed
I was not that one.
He said:
"Brittaini I hate you and I always have.
I hate the way you smile, and I hate the way you laugh.
I hate your emeraled eyes, and I hate your chestnut hair.
I never really did care, I hate you I swear"
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