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Demon Damrok

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:56 pm


PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:35 am


I'm sorry this is just the first part. I have to fix the ending.

Aluria awoke in a world unlike her own. Gone were the wonderful silks of her bed,gone was the comely serving wench she had slept beside the night before, everything was gone. All except for the clothing she was wearing, and even those she was sure were not hers. That of which was left was the overpowering scent of roses, her current white dress, an empty vial, and a coppery tang on the tip of her tongue. She rose to her feet, disbelief poured over her face as she looked around, a rose, no a rose garden. Moist fragrant blood red roses littered the bushes nearest to her head, flowing around her like a whirlpool. The roses in themselves seemed to almost have a mind of their own, arranging themselves in patterns to show off their beauty, whilst obscuring their sharp thorns. When Aluria observed a rather large rose it seemed to have a bead of water run off of it, but that is not interesting. As she turned her head away from the rather and becoming rose, the bead of water fell from the petal staining the ground an unhealthy dark crimson.

" That explains the the smell of roses, but there is something else..."

"Yes, it does, although, it does not explain you being here."

A man stepped out from within the rose bush, wearing dress that a gentleman would wear to a ball with a bright crimson scarf thrown over his shoulders.Stranger though this man had rabbit ears fixed atop his head, then Aluria had realized he had a pistol drawn and aimed for her head. The man smirked and pulled the trigger, and the rose garden was no more, well, or so one would think. The bullet blew by her head causing a blooming rose to explode in to petals, red petals splattered Aluria's dress leaving their mark.

"Oh. It seems I missed," the man sighed, " Though there is no fun or pleasure in shooting some one as beautiful as you."

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