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The third chapter in the story of the Omikami Clan. (A Naruto-based Roleplay guild). 

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:09 pm


A character from a clan of mine, his storyline isn't too constructed yet, but I got most of it nailed down, and parts of it are still in editing. His name is Blaze because he can use fire as a devastating weapon. Blaze is a character that I've been working on since the beginning of my Gaia membership anyways except then my Name was Firedoombells so his name was Fire and that was in his darkness state, which wasn't as cool then.

Blaze is a character from a few centuries ago where it was halfway between a Medieval period and getting closer to the beginning of a more advanced age so basically around the 16-70 hundreds sort of style. There were a group of Knights who were loyal to the King known as The Knights of the Divine Light, which were religious, yet false warriors. (they weren't christian but some weird gaian thing, picture The Elderscrolls IV Oblivion's Knights of the Nine for some weird style of their beliefs if you've heard of it.) And they became greedy and realized the Beauty within one of their fellow member's wife. The one who was married to this women was my character. Long story short they killed her and basically Blaze opened a portal to the underworld and betrayed them because they wrongfully killed his wife, at this time you have to understand that he had blue eyes and blond hair(Not GERMAN D:<) He wasn't able to retrieve his wife, Death himself fought against Blaze and stabbed him with Deathwhisper which cursed him, it started making him more negative, it began to slowly move acrossed his face like a curse mark, then it spread and caused one of his eyes to turn red, he became extremely unstable and murderous so he slaughtered many people, his weapons became dark, and he began to sprought a wing. Eventually the cursemark took control and it became a seal on his forehead, his hair became orange, Death Whisper basically can morph forms as many different weapons for him so there. Blaze gained control over the Death Whisper Curse and he formed an order of Knights that seemed dark and crooked to fight against Gaia and the Knights of the Divine Light. Long story short, Blaze and his Knights nearly overpowered the Knights of the Divine Light, but they were sealed for a thousand years. (This isn't earth time and I stated that it is in an age like the new world, not that it actually is.)
Eventually the cursed seal vanished and Blaze emerged along with his other Knights basically seeking revenge.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:11 pm


My reason for posting this is because I want feedback on how I can improve my Character's/Clan's storyline.

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