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PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:47 pm


Username: Rainan98
Character name: Nakaza Rain
Height: 6'1
Weight: 182 lb.
Age: 263 (looks and will always look 24)
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Race: Shinigami
Divsion: Nine
Rank: Captain
Likes: Chilling, Sake
Dislikes: Work of any kind, Cocky people, Party poopers.
Personality: Laid back, funny guy

Appearance:
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Markings: Tatto on side of face to chest

Zanpaktou name: Tsuchi Shojo

Zanpaktou element:Earth
Zanpaktou type: Offensive, Defensive

Zanpaktou spirit:
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Shikai(and bankai):
(Not "scorpion" anything but that is what the two forms of the sword are. Whip in second form. Sword in first)
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Shikai abilities: Anything the sword touches has a seed implanted in it and can have any type of plant grow out. You can also touch a body but a hinigami can stop that by having more power than me.

Shikai attacks:

Acid plant- Plants in forest turn to acid
Polluted air- The air around you becomes very damp and thick very hard to breath in. Forces you to jump out. The air can sometimes dissolve things and can suck density out of certain things
Mother Stampede- Wooden animals rise from ground soon turning into real animals after two mintues of summoning(or lonnger depending on how weak I am) The only bad thing about this technique is that I cant determine whcih animal comes. The sword is very stuck-up and has a mood of her own. I could need a monkey one minute and she has a lion come out. I could need a rhino another minute and she has a mouse come out. I never know. Animals can be summoned up to 892 ( can have more but with only pushing himself past his limit)

Bankai achieved: Yes, But not liked to use because it effects people within a 20 mile radius. If anything uses second form of Bankai.

Bankai appearance:
Big forest. Little more complicated than this picture though.
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Bankai:
Daichi jouhatsu- Forest shatters in to trillions and trillions of peices but can reassemble in the blink of an eye. So lets say a peice of a sharp stick was going by and it reassembled quickly right in you arm. Well that arm is gone now. Bankai is the only part of Tsuchi Shojo, that does not involve earth at all. It is a matter of breaking and re-placing atoms. Solid, gas, or liquid. It would be very difficult to see atoms around you since they are small. Considering how many there are though, causes a glitter like veiw of the technique. Bankai could result in many outcomes. If a tree has shattered, but put back together around you body, then you are going be stuck inside of a tree. Say that, atoms from four diffrent swords entered through your nostrils, then you just might have some organ damage. Who knows. It all depends.

Agility:
Dashing-A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.

Shunpo (Flash-Step)-A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range.

Air Walk:Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of reiatsu within a captain ranking individual.

Senka (Flash Blossom)-Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability.
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Bakudo:
-Sai (塞, Restrain
-Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
-Seki (斥, Repulse)
-Geki (撃, Strike)
-Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle)
-Kyōmon (鏡門, Mirror Door)
-Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare
-Hakufuku (白伏, White Crawl)
-Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape)
-Kyokko (曲光, Curved Light)
-Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam)
-Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
-Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield)
-Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows)
-Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light)
-Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence)
-Sajo Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes)
-Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)
-Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars)
-Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air)
-Danku (斷空, Splitting Void)
-Kin (禁, Seal)
-Shisō Kekkai (四葬結界, Quad Burial Barrier)
-Bankin (卍禁, Great seal)

Hado:
-Shō (衝, Thrust)
-Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
-Tsuzuri Raiden (製本雷, Bound Lightning)
-Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire)
-Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
-Kongōbaku (金剛漠爆, Adamantine Blast)
-Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang)
-Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)
-Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)
-Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon)
-Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down)
-Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon)
-Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin)
-Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm)

Unamed Kido:
-Unnamed Pyramid Barrier (fends stongest of attacks.)
-Unnamed Spell (Teleportation spell. Reiatsu is masked.)

Kindo:
-Kūkanten'i (空間転位, Spatial Displacement)
-Jikanteishi (時間停止, Temporal Stasis)

Side note: The two unamed kido's are real. Used by Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto and Shūsuke Amagai.

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Characters history: On the night i graduated, There was an afterparty at the Kurakara Inn and everybody was there. Even me. (even though i was not the slightest bit of popular. Sort of a "SAVE THE EARTH!" freak. It wasnt as serious as the other kids made it out to be.) Well, some wacko who got held back in 12th grade came to the party with a telephone wire, 12 inch sharp blade, and a pistol. I was in the bathroom, which was where he decided to go to load his gun. Well i certainly was in the wrong place at the wrong time, because as soon as i came out of the stall, with wide-eyes, he stabbed me 18 times. 18. I never liked that number. Anyway, I was dead, as you would imagine, and that was the end of me. Until of course later i became a soul reaper. Then "life" was good again. I went to the academy, graduated at about 4th from smartest kid in my class, and went on later to be Lt. of sqaud 6 but soon after, captain of sqaud nine. While i was young and foolish, I really wanted revenge on the kid who had killed me, so while on duty in kurakara town, i snuck away from my sqaud,trying to be quick, and go find the boy who had killed me. I was astonished to find out the he had been killed at the party also. Right after he has stabbed me, he foolishly went out to the dancefloor where he shot two guys but thought he could get everybody somewhow. A bunch of big guys ran up to him and acidentally ((yess, acidentally)) beat him to death. Well, there was a little snitch in my sqaud who went to tell on me and say that i left my mission for personal reasons. For this i was scentenced to SS jail for about a loong time. When I got out, i found that My position had been taken and then the captain decived the whole SS so i got it back. And "life" was back to being good.

Gigai:
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:02 am


Rainan, I'm afraid you're not going to like what I have to say very much . . . crying

As stated in the Magic Templates of Wonder sticky, at least once in every profile template (which you should have at least have taken a peak at) I say no more than three abilities for a secondary power stage (shikai, normal Arrancar, etc.).

So unless you have a good reason for going over that maximum, you need to cut back on the shikai abilities.

Also, please describe your Bankai's abilities in greater detail.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 9:02 am


Periodic table will cause problems
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:08 pm


gotcha wink . I thought it would be over the top. Just needed a little critique.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:19 pm


You could summon uranium and make yourself a lead shield, radiationing your foes but not you
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:21 pm


I just decided to get rid of the whole technique. A bit too much for just a captain. Plus, it seems like my zanpaktou's powers are all over the place, which would be unfair to the other guilders.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:07 pm


So your Bankai forest essentially reforms in different places? Would you please give me a small RP example, as I am still a little confused. confused
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:02 pm


((Ohk. Dont call me Skitzophrenic though ! These are two diffrent characters.))

Rain lifted his sword. "Bankai." The sword changed into a long whip. He made a quick slash towards The tree behind his opponent.

Kenzo chuckled. "Hmph. You missed." He smiled triumphantly

Rain smirked. "Not quite." The tree behind Kenzo fell to microschopic and decended into the air. The particled wrapped around kenzo and revolved around him in a circle.

Kenzo tried to exit the technique, but it seemed like everytime he tried to exit, a wooden tree-like, wall would stop him from doing so.

Rain ran his hand through his hair. "You see. This Zanpaktou manipulates matter itself. This forest that grew during Bankai, is filled with matter. Whatever this whip touches, breaks apart into the atoms it is composed of. Almost like breaking a puzzle and putting it back together again."

Kenzo continued to make an effort to get out of the swirling atoms, but he could not. It was like one second there was nothing but, almost sparkle, like things in front of him, and then there was a huge wall. It was confusing.

Rain chuckled. "You should give that up. The only way resulting of you getting out of there is my will, or my death. Say hi to your other little friends for me okay?" The atoms that made up the tree suddenly came back together again. The only diffrent thing about it was that there was a body inside of that tree most likely suffocating.

Kenzo could not move. He gasped for air but it would not come. The more that the atoms settled, the more his air supply shortened.

Rain lifted his sword up and made a quick slash to where Kenzo's body would have been.

Kenzo did not feel anything. The tree starting sliding to the left along with the upper half of his body.

Rain put the sword back on his side and then walked away from the scene as the forest dissapeared, leaving behind two halves of one shinigami.


(( Hope that helped :3 ))

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:09 pm


Yes, yes it did! blaugh

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:11 pm


Woohoo ! :3

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