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Leon Newgate - Hueco Mundo Leader [ACCEPTED]

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:56 pm



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~Basic Characteristics~

Name: Leon Newgate
Alias/Nick Name: none
Gender: male
Actual Age: 553
Appearance Age: 23
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 148 lbs.
Date of Death: December 24th
Date of Birth: August 23rd
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~Spice of Life~

Appearance:
User Image
Personality: Leon has a lawful-evil alignment. While he is not entirely sinister and will not go out of his way to cause chaos, he will not care about the rights and freedoms of others. He is a type who twists the rules to his favor. He does nothing unless it directly benefits him in some way and can use his seemingly friendly demeanor and sweet talk to deceive others.
Biography: The man known as Leon Newgate was an orphan by birth. Both he and his littler sister were abandoned by their parents, left to fend for themselves in the world. They lived alone on the streets, surviving each day on the scraps of yesterday. Each summer was brutal and the winters were harsh. Then war came and food became even more scarce. There was no clothing, no food, no fresh water, and no shelter for them. Everyone was desperately trying to survive the war and the two siblings had to keep alive through not only poverty, but the days of bomb droppings. Eventually the two found an old bomb shelter and lived there. As the war began to end, the two were able to find food and steal some clothing, but soon the sister fell ill. No doctor would treat her, for they had no money. His sister suffered for sixteen days, then died. The brother was left alone in the world and filled with despair, decided to leave the shelter. But he had no food and no water. He finally passed away at a train station while thinking of his sister.

In Soul Society he lived an equally harsh lifestyle in the Rukongai. He survived alone until the day he finally found his sister. However she was deep in a coma that she had been in since she had entered Soul Society. None of the doctors in the Rukongai nor Seireitei could find what was wrong. The brother blamed himself and vowed to one day find a way to bring her out of her coma. In his search, he realized he would need power, thus he joined the Soul Academy. There he met a friend who was kind to him and the two stayed together even after joining a squad.

A few years later he and his friend were attacked by hollows in the world of the living. The boy bravely fought against an arrancar, but died. It was a year later when another arrancar, a vasto lorde of tremendous power, found his grave and used hollow technology to revive him. The vasto lorde promised if the boy would aid him in destroying Soul Society, he would save his sister. In compliance, the boy changed his appearance and took the throne of Las Noches under the new name, Leon Newgate.

He has since extracted his sister from Soul Society and kept her sealed in a separate realm while he tries to return her from her coma.
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~Career~

Division: none/rogue shinigami
Rank: Leader of Hueco Mundo
Allies: Espada
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~Zanpakutou~

Spirit's Name: Izanami
Spirit's Appearance: Izanami takes the form of two women linked by a chain shackled to their wrists. One woman is a beautiful lady draped in lavish white silk garments, while the other is a decaying corpse filled with maggots and dressed in tattered black garments.
Spirit's World: A gray world of stairs and doors that go in different directions and even upside down. The bottom of the spirit world is filled with black water where several dark hands reach up as if attempting to escape.
Spirit's Personality: Izanami has a split personality. She sometimes uses a kind, gentle side when Leon is alone, but during battle and when his emotions stir, Izanami becomes cruel, sadistic, and mentally unstable with a desire to kill.
Zanpakutou Sealed Appearance: n/a
Zanpakutou Sealed Description: A 6'7" nodachi with a black blade inscribed with the words "grief, suffering, and famine".
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~Shikai~

Shikai Achieved: yes
Shikai Name: Izanami
Shikai Invocation: "Cry, Izanami"
Shikai Description: Izanami retains the form of a nodachi, but it's hilt becomes a morphed human spine with several deformed faces that cry whenever the blade strikes something.
Shikai Appearance: n/a
Shikai Abilities:

  • Can make the hand transparent and swipe it through a foe to drag out their reiatsu and deplete them of energy.

  • Can touch a foe to temporarily starve their bodies of their spiritual powers, including reiatsu-based attacks, supernatural strength, and their use of shikai or bankai. This effect is only effective as long as Leon maintains contact with the person.

  • A 5 meter invisible field is formed around Leon that affects reiatsu-based attacks. Any reiatsu-based attack such as the ability of zanpaktou or resurreccion abilities, along with kidou and techniques like cero that come within a 5 meter radius of him have their reiatsu severely drained. This weakens any such attacks of this sort and adds their reiatsu to Leon, however physical attacks are not affected by this ability.

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~Bankai~

Bankai Achieved: yes
Wielder Appearance: n/a
Bankai Name: Izanami Ookami
Bankai Appearance: n/a
Bankai Description: Izanami divides into four weapons: a burning black broadsword made of brimstone, a great white bow with poison-tipped arrows, a dual-ended lance made of bone, and a devilish scythe. These four weapons symbolize the four horsemen of famine, death, war, and conquest. They are very useful for adapting to different battle situations.
Bankai Abilities:

  • His shikai abilities still apply.

  • Can create a target mark on the body of the person targeted by this technique. After being targeted by the mark, all Leon's reiatsu-based attacks like cero or bala will automatically target the marked foe. Leon only needs say the person's name to create the target mark, therefore he can only use this technique on foes whose name he knows.

  • A 10 meter space of twisted black energy forms around Leon. Any living being that enters this space has their powers extracted from their body and placed in Leon's body for fifteen minutes. This ability has a cooldown of ten minutes after the ability wears off.

  • Can produce a swarm of flies that spread diseases wherever they go. Those who come within range of the flies and become infected first suffer the effects of vomiting, blurred vision, temporary deafness, and blisters. Five hours after the initial effects the victim begins experiencing severe muscle pains, cold chills, high temperatures, and bleeding pores. Ten hours after the initial effects the victim will experience grand mal seizures, severe headaches, and heart attacks. At this stage the victim may die of several causes affiliated with the disease without proper treatment. Though the number of diseases infecting the victim are difficult to treat, several hours of extensive treatment can heal the victim. However this technique often leaves victims incapacitated for several days while they recover from the effects.

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~Kidou Known~


    Bakudo

  • #4 Crawling Rope
  • #8 Repulse
  • #9 Strike
  • #26 Curved Light
  • #30 Beak-Piercing Triple Beam
  • #39 Arc Shield
  • #58 Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows
  • #61 Six Rods Prison of Light
  • #62 Hundred Steps Fence
  • #63 Locking Bondage Stripes
  • #75 Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars
  • #79 Nine Sunlight Traps
  • #81 Splitting Void
  • #99/1 Seal
  • #99/2 Great Seal

    Hado

  • #4 Pale Lightning
  • #11 Bound Lightning
  • #31 Red Fire Cannon
  • #32 Yellow Fire Flash
  • #33 Blue Fire, Crash Down
  • #54 Abolishing Flames
  • #58 Orchid Sky
  • #63 Thunder Roar Sear
  • #73 Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down
  • #88 Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon
  • #90 Black Coffin
  • #91 Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear
  • #96 Single Blade Cremation

    Unnumbered/Forbidden Kido

  • #?? The Gate of Dragon Tail
  • #?? The Gate of Tiger Fang
  • #?? The Gate of Turtle Shell
  • #?? The Gate of Phoenix Wings
  • #?? The Gate of Four Beasts
  • #?? Quad Burial Barrier
  • #?? Adamantine Blast
  • #?? Glacier Vapor Storm
  • #?? Temporal Stasis
  • #?? Spatial Displacement
  • #?? Opening Revival
  • #?? Luminous Healing
  • #?? Purple Tree

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~Skills and Abilities~
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~Trivia~

Reiatsu's Color: black
Likes:

  • reading and quoting from the book of Genesis
  • manipulating others to his benefit
  • drinking earl grey

Dislikes:

  • self-righteous people
  • the modern concept of good and evil
  • arrogance amongst the Espada ranks

Theme Song: Birthday Massacre

Other: none
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:12 pm


Some of these seem VERY godmody. For instance, the Last Shikai effect. It can't reduce an effect to nil. Thats crazyy.

Second Bankai...Really? thats kinda crazy.

And you can be older, as a matter of fact, I would prefer a higher age.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:31 pm


As it states in the shikai ability, it stops reiatsu attacks but allows physical attacks. It would fit since Leon's element is famine, thus he starves his foes of reiatsu. It's not really anything more than forcing foes to fight with their own strength and negates the long-range combat, which he's not too good at.

In the bankai ability, as it states, he needs to know the name. Thus it has a flaw in it's ability. And while it is a guided attack, it's not auto-hit, so any foe can stop his cero or bala with kidou as they normally would.

He's not really an old person. He's a younger shinigami and is that age for a reason. I don't really think his age would make much a difference anyways, since most characters in bleach weren't that old besides the top shinigami of soul society. Plus Leon was never a captain, who would have been older, but was a regular seated member in the past.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:39 pm


It didnt so much state those options, but i see what your saying.
However, What of the opponents like yourself? That isn't so much fair to them if they aren't so good at Hakuda as well. So I would tone it down to 'It weakens it dramatically.' instead.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:43 pm


Understandable. I edited that part to weaken reiatsu attacks instead of nullifying them.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:43 pm


Actually famine=weakness, perhaps a draining effect?

And definite veto on the last Bankai ability, way overpowered if it can get anyone sick

And I guess I'm immune to the Lock-On, No Name just a title

If it's element was Void ((NaN)), then negation might work...but it would still be overpowered

And maybe add image for his sister for reference


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:48 pm


I would Accept, But i think we have to wait for Dio.
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That's right, you son of a motherless goat. Blood and bloody ashes, I leave you gits alone for two days and already the power has gone to your over-large heads. blaugh
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:50 pm


@Shadowlord9k
I already edited the nullification ability to say weaken.

I don't think disease is very overpowered, since it can be similar to poison in many ways and the disease takes around ten hours to become anywhere near lethal.

Yes, since you have no known name that would make you immune to the lock-on ability.

Famine by definition means extreme hunger or scarcity of food. Starvation in other words and commonly associated with poverty, which is what Leon went through as a human. Weakness might be a side-effect of the lack of food however.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:59 pm


It took a while for me to type the comment so I didn't see that

And instant puking Is a little strange
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 9:00 pm


Accepted.

Have fun keeping those Espada in line!

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 10:25 pm


Darn, Cloud gets to stab you espada leader
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