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Word Choice- What word goes where?

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:04 pm


It's a problem every writer faces, the horrible moment when you realize that your whole plot could be affected by one word. Ok, yes, that's a bit dramatic, but not a complete and utter lie.

My favorite books may have a rather simple story to them, but because of the words that flow like poetry and paint pictures before my very eyes I am drawn to them. The word choices in a book can make you giggle or make you squirm or cower in fear. They can have your heart-racing your eyes spilling tears of joy or despair.

All in all, words that make up a story are, to me, as important as the story itself.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:05 pm


Word choice largely depends on what type of writing your are doing formal writing, obviously, is going to be more stiff and business-like than let's say dialogue or descriptive.

So, let's break down the types shall we?

1. Formal- essays, letters to businesses, contracts, reports, school papers(not in creative writing assignments)

2. Creative writing (which can be divided down even further!
a. Dialoge - speaking, talking

b. Descriptive - describe

c. Actions - moving, doing something, working, running, fighting

d. Character's inner voice

Let's start with comparing the two big ones and which words can go were

Creative vs. Formal!

Formal - a lack of adjectives, plus you can't really use words like jumbled or pallid, etc. Most of the time when you have formal writing you really want to just get it over with, your words are blunt and straight to the point. No beating around the bush! You smack that bush right in the middle!

Creative - you have a lot more room to play here, I mean really you do! If you want humor you got some words that make pretty much everyone giggle like madmen, if you want scary you have those words that send goose bumps up your arms.

I should say however, this is not the be all end all guide to choosing words! You are the writer, you get to decide what words get to go down on that pretty little paper!(or screen, whichever you prefer)

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:08 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:09 pm


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