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Riiko Shinku Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:02 pm
Genin
Genin are the lowest of ninja skill levels. They possess a knowledge of all the basic ninja skills and will do lower C & D rank missions with their Jounin sensei. Once the Genin has successfully undertaken eight missions, they can be sponsored by their Jounin sensei for the Chuunin Exam. Uncomeplete~~
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 8:09 pm
No offense, this profile is in complete and not Accepted. ~Reasons~ Your jutsus list is incomplete for two reasons. 1~ When you said Link, I thought you meant simply copy and paste from leafninja.com. Please fully present jutsus as shown in the Character Profile Guide that was created. 2~You have to many jutsus that are passed the limits for a Genin rank. In fact, it seems your character is over power to meet the standards of a normal Genin. And as for the Lava techniques, they need to be accepted in the Custom Jutsus Accepted forum, which hasn't even been created yet. Please fix these problems by following the following link ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20672767
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Riiko Shinku Vice Captain
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Lyra Diminium Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 8:43 pm
Riiko Shinku No offense, this profile is in complete and not Accepted. ~Reasons~ Your jutsus list is incomplete for two reasons. 1~ When you said Link, I thought you meant simply copy and paste from leafninja.com. Please fully present jutsus as shown in the Character Profile Guide that was created. 2~You have to many jutsus that are passed the limits for a Genin rank. In fact, it seems your character is over power to meet the standards of a normal Genin. And as for the Lava techniques, they need to be accepted in the Custom Jutsus Accepted forum, which hasn't even been created yet. Please fix these problems by following the following link ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20672767
Riiko, please follow the idea that RPCs are RPCs. There should not be a "proper" way of creating something like this. But anyway, that's another subject.
About number one: The Source area is the link, no complaining about that. If it something that is created by another person; whether it the creator of the show or some other Naruto Roleplayer; Imma provide JUST the name and link to the area where you can find the Jutsu. If no one don't want to search for it, then they lack the ability to do proper research when information is provided. And following some one elses RPC sheet is insulting to my standards.
I like to be different, and still have the same impact that I have with my other sheets. After all, it's a guide. Not a mandatory thing. If it was, then there's an issue here.
About number two: Read the rubric. Read the rubric. Read the rubric. I don't know how many times I can say this, but read the rubric. You glanced over it, that's all I can tell because you telling me that I have jutsu that's clearly breaching the level of a Gennin when the Rubric explains that something is color means that it something she cannot do now is a sign that you haven't fully read it. Lava Jutsu is something that the creator, i.e: Shinku's bloodline trait creator, has to be contacted.
Far as I'm concern, there has to be another reason my RPC isn't acceptable.
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:13 pm
User Name: Tei Shinku
Name: Tei Shinku
Age: 14
Height: 5’ 6”
Weight: 132 lbs
Eyes: black
Skin: Brown
Clan: Shinku
Charka Type: Lightning / Fire
Status & Status: Unknown
Tattoo/Markings: None
Personality: Tei is very loud and obnoxious, most people say he is annoying and he loves to play pranks on people. Known for Monkeying around.
Likes: Bananas, break dancing, playing pranks, fighting.
Dislikes: Vegitables, Niiro scolding him, genjutsu users.
History: In development.
Weapons
-15-50 Kunai
-15-50 Shurikens
Bloodline Trait
None.
Ninjutsu
-Lightning Release - Lightning Strike Combo:
The users hands turn into that of pure electricity. The chakra from the user body travels into his hand as ear punch is devastating and vital and may leave paralysis.
-Lightning Release -Lightning Force push.
THe user grnerates lightning into his palms as they are out towards the attacker and he pushes the chakra into a froce lke aura push. from distance can repel moves if in contacts may inflict damage to vital organs.
(more to add)
Taijutsu
-Windmill Sweap:
The user goes into a break dance position, the windmill which he spins on his back with his feet out, hitting enemies that approach him.
-Jinsoku Combo= the user uses his fist the rapidly stike the enemie with fierce jabs at a high speed.
(more to add)
Genjutsu
None.
Dovujutsu
None.
Special Jutsu
Saruhegan Transformation Jutsu.
The user has 3 states to transform into a monkey shinobi.
-State #1 ~ Balance/Stamina: The user grows a tail which helps him balance out his attacks and make him more maneuverable and well reacted. It ups his evasiveness which helps him dodge and counter moves more quicker.
-State #2 ~Speed/Power: The users hands and feet turn into that of an apes, this makes him a lot more faster and quicker and gives him power in his arms and legs. He can now jump higher and run faster. His hands make it so he cna preform hand signs quicker and punches and fatal strikes are more quicker and inflict more damage to the opponent & his arms get longer so reach is more better for upping the opponents hitting length.
-State #3 ~ Complete Form: he grows gold-ish yellow fur, and his hair changes color. The effects of both states 1 & 2 apply to the final form and boosts them by 15%
Summoning:
Four Apes
(will Update)
Biography: Developing
Summoning information
Developing
Fun Facts
He loves music.
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Riiko Shinku Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 10:52 pm
Asseisha Shinku Riiko Shinku No offense, this profile is in complete and not Accepted. ~Reasons~ Your jutsus list is incomplete for two reasons. 1~ When you said Link, I thought you meant simply copy and paste from leafninja.com. Please fully present jutsus as shown in the Character Profile Guide that was created. 2~You have to many jutsus that are passed the limits for a Genin rank. In fact, it seems your character is over power to meet the standards of a normal Genin. And as for the Lava techniques, they need to be accepted in the Custom Jutsus Accepted forum, which hasn't even been created yet. Please fix these problems by following the following link ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20672767
Riiko, please follow the idea that RPCs are RPCs. There should not be a "proper" way of creating something like this. But anyway, that's another subject.
About number one: The Source area is the link, no complaining about that. If it something that is created by another person; whether it the creator of the show or some other Naruto Roleplayer; Imma provide JUST the name and link to the area where you can find the Jutsu. If no one don't want to search for it, then they lack the ability to do proper research when information is provided. And following some one elses RPC sheet is insulting to my standards.
I like to be different, and still have the same impact that I have with my other sheets. After all, it's a guide. Not a mandatory thing. If it was, then there's an issue here.
About number two: Read the rubric. Read the rubric. Read the rubric. I don't know how many times I can say this, but read the rubric. You glanced over it, that's all I can tell because you telling me that I have jutsu that's clearly breaching the level of a Gennin when the Rubric explains that something is color means that it something she cannot do now is a sign that you haven't fully read it. Lava Jutsu is something that the creator, i.e: Shinku's bloodline trait creator, has to be contacted.
Far as I'm concern, there has to be another reason my RPC isn't acceptable.
I did glance over it, that is my fault. I have been having a very bad day, and when I saw the amount, and how you set up your jutsus, I got very irritated.
However, you still have to present your jutsu has such.
Why, This helps all the new role players understand the proper way of how they should categorize their RPCs Techniques, abilities, and this since, Jutsu.
I kindly ask for you to please do this, and keep the jutsus she doesn't know the way they are.
If you can do this, your profile will be accepted.
It's not that hard, it only toke me 3minutes to register 15 jutsu.
Tei, if your character profile is not complete, do not post it in this forum.
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:45 pm
Riiko Shinku Asseisha Shinku Riiko Shinku No offense, this profile is in complete and not Accepted. ~Reasons~ Your jutsus list is incomplete for two reasons. 1~ When you said Link, I thought you meant simply copy and paste from leafninja.com. Please fully present jutsus as shown in the Character Profile Guide that was created. 2~You have to many jutsus that are passed the limits for a Genin rank. In fact, it seems your character is over power to meet the standards of a normal Genin. And as for the Lava techniques, they need to be accepted in the Custom Jutsus Accepted forum, which hasn't even been created yet. Please fix these problems by following the following link ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20672767
Riiko, please follow the idea that RPCs are RPCs. There should not be a "proper" way of creating something like this. But anyway, that's another subject.
About number one: The Source area is the link, no complaining about that. If it something that is created by another person; whether it the creator of the show or some other Naruto Roleplayer; Imma provide JUST the name and link to the area where you can find the Jutsu. If no one don't want to search for it, then they lack the ability to do proper research when information is provided. And following some one elses RPC sheet is insulting to my standards.
I like to be different, and still have the same impact that I have with my other sheets. After all, it's a guide. Not a mandatory thing. If it was, then there's an issue here.
About number two: Read the rubric. Read the rubric. Read the rubric. I don't know how many times I can say this, but read the rubric. You glanced over it, that's all I can tell because you telling me that I have jutsu that's clearly breaching the level of a Gennin when the Rubric explains that something is color means that it something she cannot do now is a sign that you haven't fully read it. Lava Jutsu is something that the creator, i.e: Shinku's bloodline trait creator, has to be contacted.
Far as I'm concern, there has to be another reason my RPC isn't acceptable.
I did glance over it, that is my fault. I have been having a very bad day, and when I saw the amount, and how you set up your jutsus, I got very irritated.
However, you still have to present your jutsu has such.
Why, This helps all the new role players understand the proper way of how they should categorize their RPCs Techniques, abilities, and this since, Jutsu.
I kindly ask for you to please do this, and keep the jutsus she doesn't know the way they are.
If you can do this, your profile will be accepted.
It's not that hard, it only toke me 3minutes to register 15 jutsu.
Tei, if your character profile is not complete, do not post it in this forum.
Links that are provided should be enough. The only thing they have to do is click on the source link, look for a jutsu that I've done, and click on said jutsu. It's not that hard to do so. Especially, almost every naruto RPier will 99.9% chance in either knowing what jutsu or even having an RPC that can do jutsu that I've done.
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Lyra Diminium Vice Captain
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Riiko Shinku Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:39 am
Asseisha Shinku Riiko Shinku Asseisha Shinku Riiko Shinku No offense, this profile is in complete and not Accepted. ~Reasons~ Your jutsus list is incomplete for two reasons. 1~ When you said Link, I thought you meant simply copy and paste from leafninja.com. Please fully present jutsus as shown in the Character Profile Guide that was created. 2~You have to many jutsus that are passed the limits for a Genin rank. In fact, it seems your character is over power to meet the standards of a normal Genin. And as for the Lava techniques, they need to be accepted in the Custom Jutsus Accepted forum, which hasn't even been created yet. Please fix these problems by following the following link ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20672767
Riiko, please follow the idea that RPCs are RPCs. There should not be a "proper" way of creating something like this. But anyway, that's another subject.
About number one: The Source area is the link, no complaining about that. If it something that is created by another person; whether it the creator of the show or some other Naruto Roleplayer; Imma provide JUST the name and link to the area where you can find the Jutsu. If no one don't want to search for it, then they lack the ability to do proper research when information is provided. And following some one elses RPC sheet is insulting to my standards.
I like to be different, and still have the same impact that I have with my other sheets. After all, it's a guide. Not a mandatory thing. If it was, then there's an issue here.
About number two: Read the rubric. Read the rubric. Read the rubric. I don't know how many times I can say this, but read the rubric. You glanced over it, that's all I can tell because you telling me that I have jutsu that's clearly breaching the level of a Gennin when the Rubric explains that something is color means that it something she cannot do now is a sign that you haven't fully read it. Lava Jutsu is something that the creator, i.e: Shinku's bloodline trait creator, has to be contacted.
Far as I'm concern, there has to be another reason my RPC isn't acceptable.
I did glance over it, that is my fault. I have been having a very bad day, and when I saw the amount, and how you set up your jutsus, I got very irritated.
However, you still have to present your jutsu has such.
Why, This helps all the new role players understand the proper way of how they should categorize their RPCs Techniques, abilities, and this since, Jutsu.
I kindly ask for you to please do this, and keep the jutsus she doesn't know the way they are.
If you can do this, your profile will be accepted.
It's not that hard, it only toke me 3minutes to register 15 jutsu.
Tei, if your character profile is not complete, do not post it in this forum.
Links that are provided should be enough. The only thing they have to do is click on the source link, look for a jutsu that I've done, and click on said jutsu. It's not that hard to do so. Especially, almost every naruto RPier will 99.9% chance in either knowing what jutsu or even having an RPC that can do jutsu that I've done.
Well unfortunately, in this guild It is not enough. I believe this is my third time telling you this, and I hope there won't be a fourth.
If you have ever join a professional Naruto Guild of what not, you would understand that this is very important. Your selective role players do not need to click a link to see your characters jutsu, when they can be easily seen on your RPC profile. Not only this, it sets out an example for al the new role players of how the should set up their Characters abilities in any type of role play. Not only that, it shows ones individual's commitment to their rpc, and professionally organized.
I don't care how lazy you are, this is very easy and simple to do, and it should be no problem for you.
Until this is done, your character profile will remain invalid for acceptance.
The only way you can set up a link for this subject, is by creating a journal entry with the list of your characters jutsu. This is for those who have a large amount of jutsus that would make their profile look sloppy.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:54 pm
Riiko Shinku Asseisha Shinku Riiko Shinku Asseisha Shinku Riiko Shinku No offense, this profile is in complete and not Accepted. ~Reasons~ Your jutsus list is incomplete for two reasons. 1~ When you said Link, I thought you meant simply copy and paste from leafninja.com. Please fully present jutsus as shown in the Character Profile Guide that was created. 2~You have to many jutsus that are passed the limits for a Genin rank. In fact, it seems your character is over power to meet the standards of a normal Genin. And as for the Lava techniques, they need to be accepted in the Custom Jutsus Accepted forum, which hasn't even been created yet. Please fix these problems by following the following link ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20672767
Riiko, please follow the idea that RPCs are RPCs. There should not be a "proper" way of creating something like this. But anyway, that's another subject.
About number one: The Source area is the link, no complaining about that. If it something that is created by another person; whether it the creator of the show or some other Naruto Roleplayer; Imma provide JUST the name and link to the area where you can find the Jutsu. If no one don't want to search for it, then they lack the ability to do proper research when information is provided. And following some one elses RPC sheet is insulting to my standards.
I like to be different, and still have the same impact that I have with my other sheets. After all, it's a guide. Not a mandatory thing. If it was, then there's an issue here.
About number two: Read the rubric. Read the rubric. Read the rubric. I don't know how many times I can say this, but read the rubric. You glanced over it, that's all I can tell because you telling me that I have jutsu that's clearly breaching the level of a Gennin when the Rubric explains that something is color means that it something she cannot do now is a sign that you haven't fully read it. Lava Jutsu is something that the creator, i.e: Shinku's bloodline trait creator, has to be contacted.
Far as I'm concern, there has to be another reason my RPC isn't acceptable.
I did glance over it, that is my fault. I have been having a very bad day, and when I saw the amount, and how you set up your jutsus, I got very irritated.
However, you still have to present your jutsu has such.
Why, This helps all the new role players understand the proper way of how they should categorize their RPCs Techniques, abilities, and this since, Jutsu.
I kindly ask for you to please do this, and keep the jutsus she doesn't know the way they are.
If you can do this, your profile will be accepted.
It's not that hard, it only toke me 3minutes to register 15 jutsu.
Tei, if your character profile is not complete, do not post it in this forum.
Links that are provided should be enough. The only thing they have to do is click on the source link, look for a jutsu that I've done, and click on said jutsu. It's not that hard to do so. Especially, almost every naruto RPier will 99.9% chance in either knowing what jutsu or even having an RPC that can do jutsu that I've done.
Well unfortunately, in this guild It is not enough. I believe this is my third time telling you this, and I hope there won't be a fourth.
If you have ever join a professional Naruto Guild of what not, you would understand that this is very important. Your selective role players do not need to click a link to see your characters jutsu, when they can be easily seen on your RPC profile. Not only this, it sets out an example for al the new role players of how the should set up their Characters abilities in any type of role play. Not only that, it shows ones individual's commitment to their rpc, and professionally organized.
I don't care how lazy you are, this is very easy and simple to do, and it should be no problem for you.
Until this is done, your character profile will remain invalid for acceptance.
The only way you can set up a link for this subject, is by creating a journal entry with the list of your characters jutsu. This is for those who have a large amount of jutsus that would make their profile look sloppy.
Then you better check yourself "oldie". Like years experience in Roleplay is going to make me ever show a sign of respect to you after this. You dare insult my reasons on why I'm not doing it. Granted it not "prim" and proper, yet I'm not going to let some child explain to me otherwise. If this was an respected Naruto RP guild, then maybe I would take it into consideration.
So far, this guild been nothing but a bunch of children that can't even be IC properly or have a proper understanding of roleplaying. I bet you that every RPier in this guild can't even RP without metagaming. The last thing you ever want to jump on me and state that you're even comparable to other professional Naruto RP guild.
I'll start treating you like the rest of the disrespectful fools...
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Lyra Diminium Vice Captain
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