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 Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:41 pm
well, I wrote a... hmmm... not a poem... either a story
... dunno what should I call it by ~shrug~
but I always want someone set it on music so I'll call it a lyric~shrug again~
I wrote this lyrics in my mother language and my cousin translated to English
... sooo... here is it...
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:41 pm
Prayer
From this world,I only see the hopelessness.
Please do not clear the small hope...sparkling
In the deep darkness
A tender singing
Like a little,faint sparkle of light
Mingling with the voice of night dew.
The tender,wordless singing
Modulates in the cold,dull sky
Help us to find out each other,darling
This heart cannot escape from sweet sorrow,profound emotions
And still desires to be sunk in the singing forever and on
The first time I saw you
I know another destiny other than hopelessness
Please do not clear the small hope...sparkling
I`m sitting here
Feel the beautiful,bright sunlight out side
But my eyes, my heart is familiar to the darkness of my hurt
That makes me afraid that I would vanish when I come into the sunlight
Moreover,it`s not for me
The tender grey in your eyes fades away my hurt
And the gleam of light in your eyes like the star and moon
Although it is not dazzling,it still shines through the darkness
Cover my soul smoothly,sweetly
If you is the moon always shines in the darkness,I would never stop praying
Please do not let tender gleam of light in your eyes disappear
In spite of a short time,I feel very happy because I know you
If I die and was born once again,I still remain the pray and feeling for you
In the coming time,I will pray in the moonlight,I want to see you smile as the sunlight
I desire to meet you because I want you to be happy
It`s not far from the day when I leave this world
I hope that I would bring the darkness with me
That will help you find a new brighter way
If I could,I will not only give all my luck but also happiness and even my life for the pray to be come true.
The tender pray
Like a little,faint sparkle of light
Modulates in the cold dull sky
Please do not clear
The small hope which is sparkling.
P/s: This prayer is only for him.
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Magnetic Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 7:19 am
It would be called a song. It just doesn't have background music to it yet, so it is sung A Capella. It's Beautiful, by the way.
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:07 am
serris94 It would be called a song. It just doesn't have background music to it yet, so it is sung A Capella. It's Beautiful, by the way. Welcome the first comment biggrin Umm... I hope it will have backgroun music on someday :"> And thank you your kind words ^ _ ^ HAPPY HOLIDAY! heart
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Magnetic Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:38 pm
jf-_SvetlinaAcraliya _-fj serris94 It would be called a song. It just doesn't have background music to it yet, so it is sung A Capella. It's Beautiful, by the way. Welcome the first comment biggrin Umm... I hope it will have backgroun music on someday :"> And thank you your kind words ^ _ ^ HAPPY HOLIDAY! heart I monitor the poetry corner pretty closely, which leads me to be the first to comment usually. I hope you get background music added and I hope it becomes a best seller smile Happy Holidays to you too heart
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Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 2:35 pm
serris94 jf-_SvetlinaAcraliya _-fj serris94 It would be called a song. It just doesn't have background music to it yet, so it is sung A Capella. It's Beautiful, by the way. Welcome the first comment biggrin Umm... I hope it will have backgroun music on someday :"> And thank you your kind words ^ _ ^ HAPPY HOLIDAY! heart I monitor the poetry corner pretty closely, which leads me to be the first to comment usually. I hope you get background music added and I hope it becomes a best seller smile Happy Holidays to you too heart oh awesome biggrin You must love art and literature so much :3 And thank you, angelgirl, you're so kind lol no no, I don't want to public that song, baby xd Lol Happy Chrismas for everyone! ^ _ ^
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Magnetic Conversationalist
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 5:12 pm
I am very passionate about poetry. If you aren't going to publicize your song, I hope it at least becomes well known and loved within our family. smile
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 12:57 pm
serris94 I am very passionate about poetry. If you aren't going to publicize your song, I hope it at least becomes well known and loved within our family. smile I see. That's very obvious. You're so romantic girl I guess :'3 Thank you, I only hope someone can read it~shrug~ This lyric is not for everyone.
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Magnetic Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:28 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 8:40 am
You could put some backround music and sing it.I did and it sounded alright.
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