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Ashes of an Insomniac

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:34 pm


~Ashes of an Insomniac


Aching and hollow
Unable to follow
Twisting inside
Cracking, died

Slow and painful
Sadly unable
Annoying, stupid
Drunk on lucid

Breaking and fading
Slowly disintegrating
Wounds begin to bleed
Craves declaw the need

Sowing perpetual blackout
Silence drowns the shout
Trapped, caged shut
Wounds bleed cut

Myth of satisfaction
Hindered from action
Chained contraption
Illegible caption

Deaf and ignored
Sealed indoored
Tied with cord
Entwined sword

Dagger and scar
Close too far
Alive not living
Done forgiving
PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:43 pm


I liked it!
It's simple, to the point, and filled with strong emotions.
Great job! lol

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