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Mrs Reaper

PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 3:17 am


In silence I can feel my mind trying to break free.
trying to tell me something.
I cannot hear it.

I cannot hear anything but it's distant murmur.
Words that are no longer legible to my ears.

A message?
Perhaps.
I cannot tell.

In my mind a long since spent image fills my eyes.
Distorted.
Like the world seen through tough frosted glass.

All I have is the image of colour.
Even that has begun to fade.
Slipping away as has the message.

All that I'm left with is a slight feeling.
Is it reassurance?
Or the common fear?
I cannot tell.

I feel uncertain.
A feeling I know well.

Am I destined to feel this way?
Every morning,
Upon waking?
Most probably.

But then,
So is all of my fellow race.

Authors note: This is supposed to be about a dream you can't remember. When you wake up in the morning and you still feel the emotions attached to it, and can only remember very little about it.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 2:28 pm


I really like this poem. I dunno, but it just speaks to me somehow.

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Sakurino Yamaharu

PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:28 pm


It's awesome girl!!!! biggrin !!!!!! I heart IT! wink
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