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Red Letter Challenge, eh?
  Sounds cool.
  Eh, too played out.
  Hmm, write more about it then I'll decide.
  I have no opinion, but I will have ten gold in a moment.
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Draco_Starbo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 9:32 pm


Okay, I wrote this long post early - took me about an hour. When I clicked "Sumbit" I was booted off the net. crying So, I'm going to make this short as possible, because I don't feel like retyping it all right now.

A boy, who has had bad luck all his life, had to move to a new town because of some misfortunate events, he was blamed for a big commotion at his old high school. He moved in with his grandparents because his old high school was the only high school in the district he was living in. He meets a girl who does all she can to help break (or at least buffer) his bad luck. Then he gets a letter on red paper, in a red envlope, in the mail - no return address. It basically said that the boy could be bestowed good luck if he finished some challenges. If he tried and failed, nothing in his life will change. If he ignored the challenges, consequences will happen.

His first challenge, he ignores it and the sky turns purple. So, after putting two and two together, and seeing how a purple sky is effecting the crops, he does the challenge.

For another challenge, he has to hook up the girl who is trying to help with another guy. He hates this, because he has feelings for her. But he has to do it, because the world will be over runned by butterflies that sing lovesongs off-key. The boy that does get hooked up with the girl is so greatful to the main character that he is determined to be the guy's best friend, even though the main character wants nothing more than to throttle the little guy.

And everyone notices these bazzar happenings. Everyone has different theories, but a group of students at his new high school have made a club who believe that it's aliens trying communicate with the human race. His next challenge was to get into the club. When he did, they made him the spokesperson of their club. This takes his popularity with the rest of the school into the negative numbers. He meets one of the club members, who's a girl that's extremely shy and quite. When he finally gets fed up with all the teasing from the rest of the school, he made a speech to the whole school, telling them not to be ashamed of who they are and to stand up for what they believe, no matter how unpopular or oddball it seems. This helped the shy girl because she lived with an abusive father. She stood up to her father, got beaten, but was able to go to the police with this evidance and go to a group home, where she was much happier.

That's basically all I have so far. There's little details, but like I said, I didn't want to rewrite all of them. I'm stuck. If you have any ideas for other challenges, characters, plots or anything else, I would most appericate your input. biggrin
PostPosted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:02 am


sorry to hear about the booting off net before.... the story is really good so far, well the concept razz

^^ good luck with the rest of it biggrin

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Draco_Starbo

PostPosted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 6:13 pm


Raspberry-Tea
sorry to hear about the booting off net before.... the story is really good so far, well the concept razz

^^ good luck with the rest of it biggrin
Thank you! ^_^
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