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 Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:25 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:29 am
Let me say right off the bat i didnt know not to post in the other classes yet.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:32 am
No, I understand. One of the admins must have accepted you before I got back online to tell you the terms.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:35 am
Yeah it seems i owe valerie now so am i supposed to put details about my profile here? This is just a side note i noticed that all your "most recent" posts are from a year or two ago.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:41 am
Yes, I know they are. stressed
No, like I said, you post your entrance to the school here.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:47 am
Oh ok then after this will be it and you should do a rolecall then like other guilds if you need to see whos still active.
P.S Im a little distracted right now my daughters tryin to get me to marry someone on here.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:57 am
Please use correct punctuation.
Oh, by the way, I know how to run my guild. Thanks.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:04 pm
Sam burst through the trees with sprinting as fast as he could not daring to look back in fear of what hed see. Earlier that day he killed a boy named jack boegar when a fight wasnt stopped in time. Sam tried to remember why the fight started in the first place and he couldnt remember, he killed someone and he didnt even remember why. As he was running he noticed the building to late and he collided with the wall and as he fell back he knew he had a concussion. Sam limped around the wall intill he found the front door. Near the door a sighn was there and he read it "Parker School for Gifted Students". He reached for the door and opened it but he felt his concious leaving him and as he went in he said "hello is anyone there?" and collapsed his concious gone leaving him on the ground bleeding from his head wound.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:15 pm
[[Great. Could you just edit it to fix the punctuation and the capitalisation please?]]
Ria had just reached the foyer when she heard a call. Seeing the source - a boy with a bloody gash on his head - she rushed over, grabbing a first aid kit off the wall, to check his pulse.
"Okay, you're going to be fine..." she said, reassuringly, as she applied pressure, then put a dressing on the wound, and a bandage round his head. Then, she gently shook him by the shoulders, trying to wake him up.
Her mind was racing as she wondered who he was, and what he was doing there. She daren't use her powers to form a portal to call the nurse, in case he was a civilian who had managed to get past the shields.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:36 pm
Sam started to groan when he found out someone else was near him. He could barely remember where he was; all he knew was he was in some building with a stranger he didn't know and his head was hurting.
"Is there a nurse or something here, and who are you?" Colours were beginning to come back to him and his mind was still hammering with pain.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:01 pm
Sam got to his feet wobbling a bit but able to stand "What kind of place is this?" He looks around noticing other teens crossing the halls and he drank the water with the pills going down. "Thanks by the way my names Sam."
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:01 pm
"It's okay. I'm Ria. I'm a student here. Don't worry, I'll fetch a nurse now."
She stepped into a shadow, there was a weird squelching noise, then she reappeared a few seconds later with a nurse.
Ms. Hannigan frowned. "Well, I don't know what you've been doing, but you're going to be fine." She felt his temperature, and pulled out a pack of paracetamol. "Here, take two of these." She passed him a bottle of water.
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:15 pm
Sam handed back the water bottle but as he reached out his hand the bottle fell through his fingers as if they weren't there.
"Sorry it must have slipped or something." A worried look crossed his face, wondering if they noticed his hand becoming transparent then becoming real again.
[[Edit: PAST TENSE PLEASE!]]
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:22 pm
Sams head started swimming, his mind unable to focus.
"What are the side affects of that pill?" he said. He put his hand to his head trying to relieve the pain. The pill was working, but slowly.
[[Edit: Please post all at once, so the people replying know what to reply to.]] (Sorry i get impatient its a bad trait ill stop)
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:31 pm
Ms Hannigan frowned. "It was just paracetamol. There shouldn't be any side effects." She placed a hand over his head and there was a yellow glow from her palm. "Is that any better?"
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