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ViviiRose

PostPosted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:55 am


Little Bird

Cry, the little bird's broken voice
falls silent in the dark;
her aged eyes feel the weight
of voices thick with contempt - sneering, jeering,
picking apart the pieces of her unhatched eggs
till the bloodied yolk remains were ground into the lining
of her woven bed of sticks;
A sweet lust for revenge satisfied
the crow - and it croakes to the moon in affection
while the little bird smiles in her tears
glistening of pity and compassion;
of loss...
and she forgives the starving belly of the crow
then she flies into the empty night sky
heading North - to the land of no feeling
where her ache for her kin will be stifled
when she preserves her heart in ice.


- a spontaneous poem (little editing - i know, needs work), however, i left out the part where I feel zombie-like whenever I get rude remarks from people and it just sticks there like a damn thorn in my head. This is just how I deal with it.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:56 pm


i like it. very good work. and i love birds so.... heart smile

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ViviiRose

PostPosted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:29 am


thank you ^.^
PostPosted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:15 pm


I love all of your poetry, they seem to have deeper meanings and they flow softly. Very beautiful and melancholy..

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