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Poems I have written through boredom and heartbreak

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Banana Hurristrom

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:02 am


Nothing Special


Once when I was very young,
I believed that I was pretty strong.
I learned that I couldn't be more wrong.
I feel oh so dumb.
I wonder if you feel the same way?
What can I say

when nothing is going right
Should I just give up the fight?
Must you always be my light?
Could I just lay with you and face my plight?

I wish I could be more like you
I wish I could be strong
I wish I could be smart
I wish I could say no
I wish I could keep fighting
I wish I were the beacon

Sadly, none of this is true of me
I cannot be who you want me to be
Do not listen to me
I am nothing special. How can I be,
when you no longer love me.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:02 am


Thank you Miki Akane


Thank you so much Miki Akane
I wish I could do the same
Sadly I have no gaia cash
I wonder if anyone has a stash

I would gladly forget about my former lover
If someone could while undercover
gift me a Love's Warrior
or maybe a Heartless One
It does seem a bit more fun.

I also seem to like the plushies
Please someone gift me one

Banana Hurristrom

Dangerous Survivor


Banana Hurristrom

Dangerous Survivor

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:04 am


Not Worth It


It seems I'm not worth it
oh my, I should forfeit.

I'll give in while I have the chance.
I wanted the pants
I would have danced

No one seems to care
It doesn't seem fair

But that's how it is
That's life anyway ...
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:05 am


Do You Care?


Show me you care.
Don't pretend I'm not there
I may not be great
but at least I don't hesitate
I was once great
but now it's too late

You are gone,
the one I love.
I'm alone

What shall I do?
Should I wait for you?
Tell me how and why
I have forsaken you.

Banana Hurristrom

Dangerous Survivor


Banana Hurristrom

Dangerous Survivor

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:07 am


Heartbreak


My tale of heartbreak
isn't great.

I hate it,
Once I loved him and in some ways I still do
He will always be mine. My boo (haha)
I don't know what to say
Perhaps ... I'm not okay.

Is that enough?
No not for me,
I want more. How could this be?
come back to me and be mine?
Don't make me be forever alone.
I love you. Please come back home.

I cry these tears waiting for you
Will you please come back to me
I do not care what has happened between you and me
Just promise me one thing
You will not give up on me.

I need you my stepping stone.
You, my back bone
I've broken into pieces
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:23 am


I know I'm not great. I'm not looking for positive reviews. I just wanted to share this. I'd like to consider myself a writer and most writers like to share their work mainly for the feeling that they get when their work touches someone else. I'm hoping some of these poems will touch you and maybe help you see a different side of me. A side that hasn't really been shown online before.

I'm aware that most of these poems are very emotional and I'm sorry if they bother you. Most poetry is written based on the emotions that the author is feeling when they are being written.

Warning: I accept criticism but do not criticize my ideas or opinions because I will get defensive.

Banana Hurristrom

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:56 am


Although I do not prefer that particular style of poetry, they are very good and heartfelt poems. I hope you cheer up soon APC. heart
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:59 pm


Thank you Serris. I'm better just wanted to let my feelings out.

Banana Hurristrom

Dangerous Survivor

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