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death_roseck

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 5:07 am


What You've Done

When I was broken you picked up the pieces,
And put them back together.
You are the soul responsible for making me complete.
The one responsible for turning pain into joy.

Then in one greedy moment of anger,
You took it all away.
Now all that's left,
Are the pieces of a broken heart,
And a shattered life.

In my greatest moment of need,
You turned your back on me,
As the rest of the World has done so many times.
I am naive to think I've found someone who understands my hidden anguish.
But, in the end, instead of healing my bloody and salted wounds,
You tore them open wider,
And drew fresh blood.

Are you proud of what you've done?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:03 am


awh, yea. I can understand how that feels. Sometimes it can be so frustrating. sad

ViviiRose


death_roseck

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:16 am


ViviiRose
awh, yea. I can understand how that feels. Sometimes it can be so frustrating. sad


yes it can..sorry it took me so long to answer i havent been on in a LONG time lol
PostPosted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:09 pm


death_roseck
ViviiRose
awh, yea. I can understand how that feels. Sometimes it can be so frustrating. sad


yes it can..sorry it took me so long to answer i havent been on in a LONG time lol


Its ok : )

ViviiRose



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2011 8:11 pm


I really like this poem! biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:13 pm


musume lexi
I really like this poem! biggrin


thanks smile

death_roseck

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Helix of the End


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:16 pm


death_roseck
musume lexi
I really like this poem! biggrin


thanks smile


Ur welcome!
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