Clans Entering Vote & Judge's Remakes/ Suggestions
Voting Phase of the Bloodline contest will begin soon. These are the clans that have been chosen. Also the remarks below have nothing to do with me. I simply copy and pasted them from my PMs okay. So do not complain to me about what they have said. Basically, take the judges comments below and edit your clan/ bloodline. You really don't have to do so. But these judges know what they are talking about. And the warning goes, even one miss use of a clan and I will remove it. from existence in the guild.
Voting Phase of the Bloodline contest will begin soon. These are the clans that have been chosen. Also the remarks below have nothing to do with me. I simply copy and pasted them from my PMs okay. So do not complain to me about what they have said. Basically, take the judges comments below and edit your clan/ bloodline. You really don't have to do so. But these judges know what they are talking about. And the warning goes, even one miss use of a clan and I will remove it. from existence in the guild.
Chisokugan || inutori
Judge #1 Comments - I think, if it is one of the clans that get picked to be in the guild. Make it more descriptive. Have more Jutsu that are Realistic. The Air Walking Skill is a bit much and become abused by those that may think to use it to avoid every attack. And the seeing things is kinda like what the Hyuuga Clan members can do. Doujutsu should only affect ones abilities of their eye sight. Such as weakening Genjutsu and such. There shouldn't really be any physical anomaly happening unless it involves chakra.
Judge #2 Comments - I Like the eye, but the entire skill area needs to be changed. I don't think any of them make sense unless the strictly involve the eye. Or the elements that clans uses. Say like skills in the Hyuuga Clan and Uchiha Clan.
Raikou Neko || Diablo en Musica 92
Judge #1 Comments - The history is like the thunder brothers of the Hidden Cloud Village, which I have issues with. But other than that you did go off into your own idea of it rather than having them be too much like them. I like the array of techniques that you set you set up and making them double edge moves was always great idea to limit their powers. But there could be some more decriptive words in the techniques themselves and I say added say one more Rank - A skill and turn the lightning cat skill into an S.
Judge #2 Comments - I like the idea of using the Thunder Brothers. It kinda opens up a door. But than again it can be a downside, people may think they have the demon in them rather than just a bit of the demons chakra in their bloodline. But you explained it well enough that most should understand they do not have the demon in them. But just to be sure, I say bold letters in red should be made telling them the clan only has a bit of the demons chakra which makes them a clan.
Kusabana Clan || Diablo en Musica 92
Judge #1 Comments - YOU MAKING FUN OF FLOWERS!!! Joke, but seriously I like the idea of the Senji clan having a branch off. The famine side of the Senji would make a great addition to the guild. But I do not like the skills. I think you should expand it with a few more. And in the history go more into deeps I want to know more. I want to know whom founded it. I want to know why they decided to take a more "gentle" if you say approach to the style.
Judge #2 Comments - I hate it in general. It could be much better, but you did use logic and logic I like. The branch off of the Senji I say is a bit much and I say a rival to them would be much better. I like the skills that you added. The Man Eating Flower is one that I like and I think would scare a few people. Again not my taste, but good enough to go into vote unlike our lazily created first clan.
Shiro Kuma Clan || Phoenix Ktp
Judge #1 Comments - I say this is way to close to one of Orochimaru's Spider guy of the Sound Ninja Five. Not only that it is a bit overpowering in some of the skills that should be low ranked skills. Fire is also a common element to would burn things would it not. The poison thing I don't like at all just because it was attempted many times and failed. But, I i like some of the skills. But you have to remember your limits in power. We can't have say a Genin killing a Jounin out of no where. The clear poison this bothers me alot....
Judge #2 Comments - Another clan I hated. Your completely forgot the fact of the Medical ninja and what they are able to do. If you forget about that than you need to have some info in there for them. Also the Web thing is way to close to what was stated the guy from the Sound Ninja Five. Also what about other elements affect upon the web. I know that web can't be Immune to everything but chakra. I picked this one because I think it can work, but you have to limit the power hun. The Clear Poison is just WAY to much hun, that is like a god-mod within it's self.
Also cut back on the skills hun, there are way to many and give the clan way to much of an advantage.
Jutsu I say as To Powerful
Poison Mind
Death's Breath
(There are more I just can't find her PM with the rest)
