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Cuori--the-Devious--

PostPosted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 4:10 pm


"Intangible: incapable of being realized or defined..."

This is my hand at poetry, I don't write it often. >>; I was really emo
when I wrote it... and I'm more proud of Wicked Muse than I am of this.


Intangibility

I am someone no one sees
With a voice that no one hears
Doing a deed without a name
Along the edges of my fears

I am someone no one sees
With a presence no one can match
Suprising those who thought they knew me
With information they didn't catch

I am someone no one sees
With thoughts no one can comprehend
I could spell them out with images
Look through them all, they won't end

Perhaps I am someone some can see
To whom I may be writing
Until more "someones" lay eyes on me
I shall persist this inditing
PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 6:31 pm


Thanks for the definition for intagibility!

Concerning the main portion...
I really enjoy the second stanza. It's not quite as emo (no offense, still enjoy the rest) and is different than the usually "I am unseen, no one cares" kinda stuff. It's a strong admittance that is in contrast to the rest of the poem, with lines about others who "thought they knew" you.

mrgreen

al_batross


Cuori--the-Devious--

PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 5:49 pm


al_batross
Thanks for the definition for intangibility!

Concerning the main portion...
I really enjoy the second stanza. It's not quite as emo (no offense, still enjoy the rest) and is different than the usually "I am unseen, no one cares" kinda stuff. It's a strong admittance that is in contrast to the rest of the poem, with lines about others who "thought they knew" you.

mrgreen
Thank you! =D

I'm kinda emo some of the time, and when I read it while I'm not, the emoness kinda bothers me. I couldn't really un-emo it! whee
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