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Hi people, I'm writing a poem and need ideas for it.

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Celia385

PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 4:55 am


Heres how it goes,

I wish you a good night,
hoping you'll sleep tight,
with the breeze rocking you,
and the stars willing you to sleep soon.

With the moon singing you a lullaby,
and your bed making you comfortable where you lie,
and your mother kissing you saying,
"don't let the bed bugs bite".

and your night light shimmers,
and the stars above you glimmer,
while your conciseness becomes slimmer,

In our dreams we shall play,
with the robin and blue jay,
running and playing all through the night,
for when you dream you can take flight.

(I hate this verse)

and when the morning sun shines,
and your conciseness crosses the line,

you smile awaiting the next night.......

Thats where I'm stuck! i can't think of anything so i need ideas, please help me think of a better verse to replace the one i hate.  
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 4:09 pm


I don't know, it sounds pretty good to me biggrin

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