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 Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 2:09 pm
My faith is low, I'm running scared
I'm backed against the wall again
My heart is broken, my spirit weak
I'm losing endless nights of sleep
My strength is gone, My soul is pained
I'm sitting on the floor again
How much longer, am I in this fight?
How much longer, can I survive?
You are the chest master of this game,
I am the pawn who is in your way,
You check mate them off, one by one
Till I yet alone stand, just me, the lone pawn
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:00 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:01 pm
thank you very much. i'm celina by the way
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:56 pm
Very nice, interesting sentence structure. I like it.
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:00 pm
ty lord. nice to meet you kai
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 10:49 am
Interesting poem. I don't see a lot of poems like that, outside of my own writings! So it was nice to see someone else do it.
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 4:27 pm
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