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PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:46 pm


Ok white/everyone, you see anything wrong with this time line? or that might mess with anyones stories? (this is totally open to critiques from anyone btw) Expecially you white, since we're both doing crap during "Season Zero", need to make sure I'm not messing with your time line.


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Character Timeline:

Age 3: Morcinna is introduced to the Xiao.
Age 6: Morcinna starts studying wushu (kung fu).
Age 7: Morcinna meets and becomes friends with Christina who would be her best friend through high school.
Age 10: Morcinna and Christiana join track together.
Age 12: Morcinna expands her training into mixed martial arts.
Age 13: Youma's begin appearing in China. No one knows where they came from. They seam to appear, hurt a bunch of people, leaving them barely alive and then leave. People are living in fear.
Age 15: Morcinna begins to have feelings for Christina.
Age 15: Morcinna and Christina starts sneaking out at night to investigate, much to their father's displeasure.
Age 15: One night after Christina's gone home, Morcinna runs into a mysterious figure that prompts her first transformation.
Age 15: Morcinna finds a strange black talking doll that takes on a guardian role. (she will find out at the end of s1 that it was sent by SBR.) She names it ebony.
Age 17: The youma attacks eventually stop.
Age 18: Morcinna approaches and has her advances rejected by Christina.
Age 18: At ebonys urging, Morcinna starts college in america.
Age 18: Almost immediately youma's begin sporadically attacking the LA basin.
Age 19: Still emotionally scared from Christina's rejection of her, she goes out and gets a tribal tattoo on her arm. She rationalizes that it is a less destructive outlet for her angst then dropping out of school or joining a gang.
Age 20: Morcinna runs into Sailor White. They begin fighting together.
Age 20: Morcinna achieves AA in business and begins grad school.
Age 22: Sailor White and Sailor Black go their separate ways when a disagreement over what to do about Sailor Rainbow arises.
Age 22: Morcinna graduates and gets a job at brokerage company in LA.
Age 23: Season 1 begins with Sailor Violet Awakening.


@everyone: we should pick a hard date for Sailor Violet's Awakening, since S1 starts with her awakening, everyone needs to know when she's waking up.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:07 pm


Hello? Maybe I shouldn't have posted so much as once. >.>

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:56 pm


I can't speak for anyone else's timeline, but it looks fine to me. I don't see anything that would cause conflict either. As for picking a date, do you want a specific date for when Violet awakens? Or do you want us to pick a general time frame, like "it was a warm spring day when such and such and so on..." Violet, was there anything specific you had in mind for your character's awakening?
PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:43 pm


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I can't speak for anyone else's timeline, but it looks fine to me. I don't see anything that would cause conflict either. As for picking a date, do you want a specific date for when Violet awakens? Or do you want us to pick a general time frame, like "it was a warm spring day when such and such and so on..." Violet, was there anything specific you had in mind for your character's awakening?


I was thinking exact date. So everyone can build their time lines around it, makes it easier. Otherwise we have to label everything like "2 years 256 days before violets awakening...

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:35 am


Violet meets Murasaki her guardian when she is 14 yrs old? on the night of June 13 2009
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