Alright, I could deal with instant, unstoppable, undetectable, dues ex machina type power up used in the middle of an attack, but this one makes absolutely no sense whatsoever.
I don't really like criticizing someone's character design, but seriously, this makes no sense, at all.
Maybe the issue might be his word choice to describe what's really happening, but as of right now...
Just no.
Vash Sengou
So his opponent managed to cover twenty-two feet with his flight. Vash couldn’t imagine how his bolt had managed to push him that far up to cover that kind of a distance especially since it had only connected with his opponent’s outstretched arm versus his chest cavity. Even then his opponent had to be light as ******** unless Vash didn’t know his own strength. Either way it wouldn’t matter too much. Today was his day and it seemed his opponent would be putting himself into a sticky situation. If he was in Razel’s position, pushing the jug off the side wouldn’t really seem like a bad idea. Fighters were trained to be aware of small details like Vash’s neglect to begin closing the distance. Thus would lead any experienced fighter to look over his shoulder briefly since something had to be amiss. It was then he the jug would be noticed, tipped over and spilling its contents slowly behind him...
Razel wasted too much time attempting to make this match out to be a ‘simple walk in the park’ and he would begin see why. As Razel begun to speak and move his foot towards the jug, Vash would be on the move. A motionless body quickly turned into a sprinting figure that would cover the distance between the two fairly quickly. As he ran the fingers of his right hand extended independently and retracted quickly while his left hand quickly launched its contents towards Razel in a burst pattern. As Razel’s foot connected with the jug the result would not be that of a rolling object that would remove itself from the field of battle rather, the jug exploded. The eruption of the jug was not in a traditional sense where it was torn asunder and launching itself like pieces of shrapnel. What Razel had to be concerned with was the sudden eruption of water that exploded from the mouth of the jug as if it had been pressurized and was now attempting to relieve itself. The water, once slowly creating a puddle that threatened to wet the bottom of Razel’s shoes, now became a running faucet of water that not only created a puddle around him but would soak the bottom portion of his legs and shoes. It was probable that Razel would try to move however he would find himself in the midst of a problem. The water had quickly started to freeze and threatened to hold him into place and would be able to withstand a nice tug from him. If the orbs were to hit him or the water they would explode with an electric burst not unlike what he had experienced earlier from his gauntlets. Each orb held a charge of thirty thousand volts and if they all hit itd probably hurt like a b***h and hopefully stun the demon for long enough…
Flight pattern- Two aimed for water, three localized around chest cavity and arms.
Charge lvl 1.5
L gauntlet-0
R gauntlet 30,000
Electrode mines- 30 (5 in flight)
First, is this a ******** bag or a round jar? At first it was described as a bag, which I thought was ******** weird, and then a jar. The two look very different, are made of very different materials, and would behave differently when moved. I'm just assuming at this point it's more like a ******** gatorade container than an actual duffel bag since it's rolling around.
If it's rolling and Razel is simply pushing it aside, how is it all of a sudden going from pretty much dripping to suddenly exploding like a shaken pop bottle? I mean, falling onto the ground hard enough to have the cork pop out should have caused this before a tap with the foot. With the cork gone and the pressure inside the bottle lowered, you know, because the jar is now open, where the ******** is the pressure coming from to make it all of a sudden want to explode?
That's not going to happen with the bottle of carbonated water sitting next time me, but I don't feel like mopping up just to test something that's already pretty obvious.
And even then, I could push a ******** gatorade container full of water easily with my foot. Does this water have some kind of homing device?
And then the whole water freezing thing. Ok, this might be some magic water, or this guy might have some cyrokinesis, but what the ********? I mean, this is water right? I'm just making sure you're thinking what I am, it's water.
Ok, so it's water.
Now, the jug might have something in it to keep the water tepid or whatever, I don't know. I mean, ********, I still don't know whether it's a ******** jug or duffel bag. But let's assume that's not the case and the temperature inside the jug is relatively the same, if not lower, than it is outside of it.
How the ******** is the water not freezing in the jug? And let's assume that isn't the problem, how the ******** is the water freezing outside of the jug? I know it's not specifically mentioned how hot or cold it is outside, but come the ******** on. Why isn't the water freezing as soon as it hits the air? I mean, that would make sense if the water somehow froze only outside of the jug.
And let's just assume it is magical water and s**t. Wouldn't flash freezing require a LITTLE bit of effort at least?
It wouldn't be so bad if I didn't have to wait 2-3 days for this, for no real reason either, but this is what I get to work with.
I don't mean to question your thinking Vintrict, but can you please explain to me what the ******** is going on with this?
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