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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 9:08 pm


The basics

Name: Melunha
Gender: male
Alignment: Noir
Rank: Rook
Cert Personality Keywords: Flamboyant, Reckless

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October 7th @6PM PST - October 31st @6PM PST

Prompt
You are a new recruit helping your comrades and superiors prepare for the winter for the first time. As you help them with any number of activities - gathering supplies, fortifying buildings, etc - how does the thought of fighting a war in what is expected to be a harsh winter affect you? You will inevitably be sent on missions in the midst of snowstorms, biting cold and little comfort, does this affect your motivation in some way? The cold is aready starting to bite and the war does not seem to end soon. Overall, what is your outlook on the war and your motivations/allegiances/etc?

Blanc, Noir and Hong do not draft soldiers into the army, it is completely voluntary.

Response: (Done journal style)
October 23

I've been running around, nonstop, all week. Longer, probably, as the days keep melting into each other. There is so much to do to get ready for winter. Supplies to be stored, buildings to repair, scouting trips, guiding in the last few caravans before snow chokes the passes and trade stops for winter.

The Rooks and Bishops also have to heal, any number of wounded from battle, or even accidents. There have been a few in the mad dash to get all ready for winter. And we still have our own skirmishes to deal with, patrol duty and everything else. It's like Rooks are pulling triple duty, while the Pawns only have double duty. There is little time for sleeping or eating, just grab what you can when you can.

I shouldn't complain, we are all short on sleep. Still, the only thing keeping me from cursing my choice to join the ranks of Rooks is the light at the end of the tunnel. Winter will end, spring will come, and one day I will be Queen.

Still, I haven't been my old self, even my bunkmate said as much, wondering why I've seldom joked around, or stopped my pranks. Well, nearly stopped, as Halloween draws near I have spooked a few people and we are planning a big prank on Halloween. With ghosts, goblins and other spooks. We've roped in nearly every Rook, and a few Pawns too, to help. We plan to turn one of the houses in town into a spooky house, it's owned by an aunt of one of the Rooks.

We are worried about time constraints, will we be able to pull it off? But we have a back-up plan if not. Some of us will just wander around (the costumes and make-up are exceptional) and scare our fellow soldiers in the barracks.

This is all distractions, though, from what winter will bring. We won't be bunking down to wait it out, war will continue on no matter how cold it gets. Or how much snow falls. This does worry me, cold is one thing but snow and blizzards are another. How will we fight? How will we defend ourselves? Snow is hard enough to walk in, let alone try to fight a war in. I wonder what they were thinking when they decided to fight on through winter. Not just Noir. Blanc as well, it seems they will fight through the coldest of seasons too.

I wonder if their soldiers are doing the same as us. From the important tasks right down to the pranks and jokes meant to keep moral up. I hope so. We are, after all, essentially the same people. Though we have been split for a long time, so maybe not. It makes me wonder about the war. It's over the Gate, but Prophylaxis has control of that. Why, then, don't Noir and Blanc reunite? Together we could beat Prophylaxis and take control of the Gate.

Maybe it's been too long that Noir and Blanc have been apart. So now we are stuck fighting both Blanc and Prophylaxis. Even though they claim to be neutral, at least they seem to have retreated to their own boarders. So winter should see mostly action with Blanc. At least I know Blanc will have all the hardships we will face. Still, it is nice to think that, someday, this war will be over. Even if Noir and Blanc never reunite, it would be nice to have peace.

And that reminds me. Where does the Hong Empire fit in all this? I've heard there are Ambassadors here from the Hong. I hope it's peaceful, what ever it is. Having to add to our already crowded war efforts would be unpleasant.

Here's hoping the command (on both sides) decide to give us winter off. I doubt it will happen, but being able to visit home for winter would be a welcome change of pace. Hell, even just staying in the barracks all winter would be better then going out in the snow and cold to fight.
PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 9:10 pm


The looks

Hair color: Same as Popuri`s
Hair style: Something like Popuri from the Harvest Moon series. Mostly I want it to have the look at the forehead with the headband. Other then that, it can be anything from extremely curly to straight or anything in between. I do want it down, no pony tails or braids.
Eye color: User Image
Face expression: Something happy
Skin color: I'd prefer dark skinned (this). If that's too dark to look good with the hair and eyes then feel free to use a lighter base.
Accessory: headband, either the blue of this image or the green of the other image. Any kind of simple, but still girly, headband is fine. The decoration can be a bow, heart, or flower. But just the one, nothing with multiple decorations on it.
Other: If possible could he be in the girl Rook's uniform (minus the boobies, he doesn't stuff)? I understand if not. It's not really necessary at this stage, or Bishop. Just something he'd like.


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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 9:11 pm


The personality

Melu is fun loving, and for him fun can come in many forms. Even just humming a tune to make work go by faster. Though, Melu would be more likely to sing a lively song (sometimes with lyrics that might upset some delicate sensibilities XD) or make up a game to get things moving faster. He is rather loud, having very little sense of volume control, even what he calls a whisper most people would consider a regular speaking voice. Melu is also blunt, unafraid to speak his mind or tell you the truth. He doesn't think words should be sugar coated. As such he also tends to wear his emotions on his sleeve, though he rarely whines about his woes.
Melu won't let anything stop him from completing his goal, to be Queen. It's just about his only goal, short term goals aren't something he sticks to well. But he won't let anyone tell him he can't or won't be Queen, he'll fight however many battles needed. For now, though, this determination is put into his Bishop. What ever he wants, Melu will do his best to get it. He's also creative, able to piece together something from spare parts. Or make a slap-job repair that actually lasts as long as needed. He can see the potential in things, even busted things, and get the parts together in some semblance of working order. Art, too, when he's got free time, is something Melu uses his creativity for. Mostly painting, but if a costume is needed Melu is the Rook to see.
Melu is very reckless, often running into a battle with out thinking it fully through. This has gotten him into much trouble, and he's not always been able to get himself out of it. Many think he'd have been better as a Pawn, considering his rush in reckless ways. However, Melu does not see himself a fighter, even when he can manage to hold his own. He's always done better as support, but often his concern for fellow Noir is great enough to have him rushing in to attract the enemy's attention. He figures that with his healing knowledge, he'll be able to buy a wounded Noir time to self heal, with verdant leaves or some such other thing that most carry. And if the other is too badly injured, Melu can at least attempt to get a heal/attack (or defend)/heal pattern going, to hold out for reinforcements. It is an aspect of himself Melu has, and still is, trying to change. An unconscious healer is no use to anyone, after all.
PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 9:15 pm


The history

Mother: ?
Father: ?
Sister: Cyserno
-Melu's earliest memory is wanting to be Queen. He's worked toward it through every step of his life. It started with his sister, dressing him up as her 'Princess' and she dressed as a Queen. Serno continued it when she started teaching him. Melu has a love of learning, and Serno taught him everything she learned, including basic medicinal plants. That is Serno's favorite subject, so it was the one she pushed most. Melu enjoys helping others, though, more the the knowledge of what heals what. But the knowledge is part of the helping, so he is always eager to learn more.
-Melu is very close to his sister, even now that he's a Rook, Melu writes to her when ever he can.
-His father wanted Melu to enlist as a Pawn and someday attain rank of Knight, to follow in his father and grandfather's footsteps. He wasn't pleased when Melu enlisted as a Rook, but is slowly coming to accept that his son is unwilling to settle for a midrank position.
-Melu's grandfather has no issue with him being a Rook, after all his own father (Melu's great-grandfather) was a Bishop. Simply by joining the army, Melu has kept family tradition.
-Cyserno is ten years older then Melu, and due to her tutoring he entered primary school with a basic understanding of much of the work he'd be expected to learn. This continued through all his school years, with Melu being just a little ahead of most of his class mates. For this reason he was often bored and became a class clown.
-Pranks and jokes were common for him, though he was always careful not to take them too far. It was meant as fun, a diversion to break up the monotony of class and he never tried to hurt anyone's feelings. If he did Melu was very apologetic about it. Though, prank wars were something else. He still didn't do things to hurt someone, but these pranks had a differant feel and his victims (who'd also prank Melu, sometimes starting that particular war and other times retaliating) knew it was all in fun.
-Even with all his humorous interruptions, Melu still managed to complete all his assignments, not that his mother would allow anything else. He'd often be kept after school, though, in detention. Not that it stopped him from making a joke or pulling a prank, Melu was more then willing to accept the punishment for his few minutes of fun.
-Though Melu's father was often away, he hired tutors to teach him battle and fighting. This is one area Melu failed at, miserably. After the first few failures, Melu got it in his head that he could not fight and only made half hearted attempts to learn. This is another part of why he enlisted as a Rook, they are more healers then fighters.
-Even though it annoyed his family, those memories of playing dress up with Serno are his best. His father may not have been around as much as an unlisted parent, but his rules were still strict. He expected perfection at everything, from both Melu and Serno. Serno's games were as much a shelter from those rules as his jokes and pranks in school were a release from the boredom of 'learning' what Serno had already taught him.
-Melu loves to learn, another gift from his sister. She's a constant talker, so every chance she got she'd watch baby Melu and talk to him about everything from what happened that day at school to telling him colors and such. Though she didn't start actually trying to teach him until he was 2 years. But by the time he was 1 year Melu had a larger, understood, vocabulary then average. It's carried over into his adult life and he's always willing to learn something new, be it facts/knowledge or skills.


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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 10:10 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:43 pm


First time read through and I have a few questions about his personality.

Why does he want to be Queen versus King when others seem to think he is better suited to the latter? Both King and Queen are essentially the same rank hierarchy-wise.

The support side of Rook often entails heavier responsibilities when dealing with human life. How does his professional attitude reconcile itself with his reckless, clownish one?

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:00 pm


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First time read through and I have a few questions about his personality.

Why does he want to be Queen versus King when others seem to think he is better suited to the latter? Both King and Queen are essentially the same rank hierarchy-wise.

The support side of Rook often entails heavier responsibilities when dealing with human life. How does his professional attitude reconcile itself with his reckless, clownish one?
I'll get it edited, since it is a bit weak (re why Queen). But for now.

It's not that anyone thinks he's better suited to King, his father simply wanted Melu to join the ranks of Pawn because it is what Melu's father and grandfather were. Sort of a tradition thing. I do have that in there, though I'll have to add a stronger reason for Queen then his sister dressing him in girl clothes.
Especially since I just realized that Queen and King in Checkmate won't carry the female and male persona it does irl. Unless Queens are more likely to wear frilly dresses then Kings?
Even still, I'll have a better reason in there for Queen. *thinks* Ah! I got it, he didn't think he'd like fighting so choosing the path of a healer seemed a better way to enlist, thus keeping (somewhat) family tradition, and he'd get to be Queen. No, wait. Still doesn't say why he wants to be Queen. Can it be as simple as just liking the word Queen better then King? Hmm, or his memories of playing Queen and Princess are just that strong.

As far as his clownish side it's a way to deal with stress, now at least. Melu thinks laughter is the best medicine and has found it not only keeps people's spirits up but it also relieves stress and makes one forget their worries, even if for just a few moments.
As far as being reckless, Melu often doesn't think things through fully before acting, he just sees danger and jumps in. His thought is to take down the enemy before further harm can come to his comrade. And if that fails, as in Melu realizes he's not going to beat the enemy, then plan B is to get his fellow Noir out.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:20 pm


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It's not that anyone thinks he's better suited to King, his father simply wanted Melu to join the ranks of Pawn because it is what Melu's father and grandfather were.

Sort of a tradition thing. I do have that in there, though I'll have to add a stronger reason for Queen then his sister dressing him in girl clothes.
Especially since I just realized that Queen and King in Checkmate won't carry the female and male persona it does irl. Unless Queens are more likely to wear frilly dresses then Kings?
Even still, I'll have a better reason in there for Queen. *thinks* Ah! I got it, he didn't think he'd like fighting so choosing the path of a healer seemed a better way to enlist, thus keeping (somewhat) family tradition, and he'd get to be Queen. No, wait. Still doesn't say why he wants to be Queen. Can it be as simple as just liking the word Queen better then King? Hmm, or his memories of playing Queen and Princess are just that strong.

Whoops! Sorry, I tend to think of Pawn and Rook as endgame ranks in terms of King and Queen. So, replace King with Pawn and that's what I meant. 8DD;; Anyway, if that is the case. You may want to rethink how you're phrasing:
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Many think he'd have been better as a Pawn, but then, as a Pawn Melu could only ascend to Kingship. He wants to be Queen.

I see some sort of rebellion element going on in there between his father and grandfather. But that doesn't seem to be the issue. xD;
If he is less inclined towards fighting, I also question the 'attack first, think later' mentality since I usually think for the less confrontational characters their thought process is the opposite. Rash & action tend to go hand in hand so it's little contradictory here. Unless you can come with a plausible way to get that loophole closed up. <:
LOL. Sure it could be as simple as liking the word 'Queen' but he'll definitely have to examine deeper reasons at some point in his career if he wants to get approval from the current reigning Queen and (Amelie) other Noir pieces.

There are no gender connotations with Kings/Queens. The clothing end tends to be:
Kings = more armor and less luggage
Queens = more bags/storage accessories with less armor and more utility minded

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As far as his clownish side it's a way to deal with stress, now at least. Melu thinks laughter is the best medicine and has found it not only keeps people's spirits up but it also relieves stress and makes one forget their worries, even if for just a few moments.
As far as being reckless, Melu often doesn't think things through fully before acting, he just sees danger and jumps in. His thought is to take down the enemy before further harm can come to his comrade. And if that fails, as in Melu realizes he's not going to beat the enemy, then plan B is to get his fellow Noir out.

So there's definitely a separation between professional and personal lives. Gotcha.

As for the reckless part, again, thinking back to why he wants the walk the path of a Queen as he definitely won't have the luxury of jumping in first.

If you need more info on the duties of a Queen and the usual sort of situations they're put into to help you flesh out a reason, definitely ask some questions!

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:51 pm


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I'm on a borrowed lappy and hate the touchpad, so no quotes on separate issues. I'll try and be as clear as I can.

re: Other's thinking he'd be better suited as a Pawn/King. + His recklessness/rash actions.
Melu may rush in, but he's not really a good fighter. He sorta figures if the danger can be deflected to him then his fellow Noir will be able to regroup and rejoin, or if it's really bad then just get away. Melu sorta assumes that since he has more healing knowledge then a Pawn he'd be able to get a heal/attack/heal pattern going if push comes to shove. Not the best strategy, but it is something I'll work on as he grows. It's a fault Melu is fully aware of and is consciously trying to improve. As a Rook it'll be hit and miss, especially if he is close to the Noir in question. Noir pieces he isn't as close too, he'll be less likely to rush in. Unless it seems they are seriously wounded.
I hope, that by the time I've got him to Bishop this fault will be resolved. Possibly replaced with over thinking things before going in.

If push comes to shove, I can switch reckless with over thinking things now.

There's no more rebellion between Melu and his dad then there is between any strict parent and their children. It's not why Melu choose the Queen's path, though. If Pawn led to Queen that';s where Melu would be.
Melu's grandad doesn't care one way or another, so long as Melu follows the path that makes him happy.

re: Deeper into Queen vs King
He doesn't want all the armor. Frilly clothes and accessory overload are his thing. Again, this goes back to his sister dressing him up when they were kids. Even though it annoyed his family, those memories of playing dress up with Serno are his best. His father may not have been around as much as an unlisted parent, but his rules were still strict. He expected perfection at everything, from both Melu and Serno. Serno's games were as much a shelter from those rules as his jokes and pranks in school were a release from the boredom of 'learning' what Serno had already taught him.

*ttly didn't just make that up* XD

More info, yespls. Like what is a Queen expected to do, act, wear. Are there rules on how he or she should behave, do they differ between private and public? Would he have to reform his prankster ways and if not how far could he push it?

Did that cover it all?
PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:46 pm


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Already replied to the previous explanations in the main thread, so I'll just focus on answering questions. C:

Expectations/Behavior
To be promoted, they must be knowledgeable in most or all areas of medical health, they don't have to be masters in all areas, but they should be functional in them. Such areas could be: antidotes, alchemy surgery, medicinal brews, first-aid, disease treatment, counseling and whatever else. This is a just a list off the top of my head. Typically, Queens will have mastered more than one area. This requires years of study and experience, so unless your piece is a prodigy, promotion for Queenship is not considered until at least the age of thirty-five. A typical training includes a year or two of leave to Chemaia or, for Noir, Apollo to learn alchemy as it assists greatly in their line of work.

Medical care is obviously extremely delicate work, so Queens must have an even harder iron fist than even a King. They should demand a discipline of their subordinates equal to their own or if a Rook/Bishop does not measure up, it is their duty to teach them to gain the necessary discipline. Often, their work will be overlooked in favor of a King's flashier duties, so if 'glory' is something a Queen-hopeful wishes for, you're out of luck. They work behind the scenes, but the plus side is a closer relationship to civilians and soldiers than Kings do. Medical care is often of a personal nature, so Queens should be very easy to approach yet still be able to maintain authority so as not to become too intimate. If Queens allow themselves to get too attached, you run the risk of conflict of interest and endangering your professional attitude. So the balance between personable and professional is something a queen should be able to accomplish.

Queens do not see much of the front, if at all. Their main concern is maintaining the quality of hospitals and clinics. Bishops often take care of the farther clinics as administrative duties will often keep the Queen closer to the capital. Their patient load will often be intensive care patients or long term ward patients. Those who only need weeks, instead of months, to recover will often be delegated Rooks. If a patient requires more than a month of care, the Queen will assign the appropriate Bishop.

Clothing

Queens must be wear tight-fitting or snug clothing in the event of an emergency. Loose clothing will often get in the way and Queens are forever in 'professional' mode during the day and even into the night. That is not to say that they should look like a nun or a monk - merely that their clothing be kept neat and orderly at all times. Short sleeves and pants tend to be favored. But that is up to you.

Rules of Behavior
It's buried in that wall of text up there so here's a helpful list!

- Be easy to approach but always maintain a professional attitude to prevent conflict of interest.
- Iron hard discipline for both the Queen and his/her subordinates
- Constantly researching/learning to keep abreast of medical advancements
- Stay close to home for ease of access

In private, it's personal time, so that's up to your discretion. But in theory, you are always on duty for any emergencies.
In public, refer to the list~

Prankster Habits
- If they are a quirk of his character, it really depends on how he manages his professionalism. So I'll leave that interpretation up to you.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:32 pm


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Re: pranks:
I don't think its a personality quirk, just a stress reliever. But I think by the time Melu is old enough to be considered a Queen candidate he'll have outgrown it.
I doubt he'll ever stop joking, even if his thought of laughter being the best medicine changes, Melu will always believe there is healing in laughter. And crying, too, both can relieve the pressure/stress/tension/other emotions. And a healthy mind can lead to a healthy body, or help at least.

How much medical knowledge do I personally need? The medicines are plant based? Things like (plant name here) turned into a tea, plaster or salve type thing? What other medicines or practices do they have?

Melu loves to learn, another gift from his sister. She's a constant talker, so every chance she got she'd watch baby Melu and talk to him about everything from what happened that day at school to telling him colors and such. Though she didn't start actually trying to teach him until he was 2 years. But by the time he was 1 year Melu had a larger, understood, vocabulary then average. It's carried over into his adult life and he's always willing to learn something new, be it facts/knowledge or skills.

I'll figure out his clothes, pants and shirts can still be girly. His Queen hair might be braided, something similar to Aerith from Final Fantasy VII. Possibly his Bishop hair too, depending on how much it gets in his way.

For now I think that's all, I'll ask other questions as they come up.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 2:04 pm


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Medical Knowledge
Depending on how you characterize Melu, you might not need it at all. Only the implication that Melu has the knowledge is enough. Medicines are plant based or synthesized through alchemy. For Noir/Blanc/Proph, it'll largely be the methods I mentioned before. For Hong, think of Chinese medicinal practices and you'll have a good idea. Particularly chinese herbology. Queens will have broad knowledge from all areas, so you can have your pick. I have no restrictions.

hope that answered stuff. <:

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:12 pm


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Medical Knowledge
Depending on how you characterize Melu, you might not need it at all. Only the implication that Melu has the knowledge is enough. Medicines are plant based or synthesized through alchemy. For Noir/Blanc/Proph, it'll largely be the methods I mentioned before. For Hong, think of Chinese medicinal practices and you'll have a good idea. Particularly chinese herbology. Queens will have broad knowledge from all areas, so you can have your pick. I have no restrictions.

hope that answered stuff. <:

I think I can fake it, or ask you if I have doubts. And research herbal medicinals.
Are plants the same in Checkmate as in our world?

Would studying Hong medicine mean going to the Hong Empire or would he make a request, through the Queen or directly to the Ambassador, for a Hong healer to come teach him? Or is that something normally covered in Rook/Bishop/Queen candidate training?
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