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PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:30 pm


Profile Information:



Main Shinobi Information:


Full Name: Kiyuki Uchiha
Nicknames: The Shadow of the Leaf
Age: 17
Birthdate: 11/30
Village: The hidden leaf village
Race: Japanese
Rank: Jonin
Shinobi Profession: Mission specialist
Ninja Type/Class: Genjutsuist

Major Shinobi Information:


Bloodline/Clan: Uchiha/ Sharingan
Current Bloodline Stage: Stage 2: Mangekio
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Elements: Fire and Wind
Battle Strengths: 1.A powerful Shinobi
2.High class in Clan
3.High Kekki Genkai class
4.Battle Stratigist
5.Genjutsu master
Battle Weaknesses: 1. Over protective of his only family, (Katsumi)
2.Untrusted for his previous tretchery
3.Vision from Mangekio Overuse
Fights won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Special Shinobi Skills:
1. Tsukyomi
2. Amertarasu (Black flames)
3. Time and Space warp

~Completed Missions:~
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
N/a

Summoning Information:


Summon Type: N/a
Boss Summon: N/a

Shinobi Equipment Information:


Headband Location: Around his neck
Headband Style: White, and a small leaf emblem in the middle
Headband Color: *
Flack Jacket Style: open over his Black T shirt
Flack Jacket color: green

Weapon Class: N/a
Name of your weapon: N/a
Weapon Range: 0
Special Abilities: N/a

Exploding Grenade: 0
Makibishi: 0
Shuriken: 0
Smoke Bombs:0
Light Bombs: 0

Kunai Holster Location: N/a
Kunai Holster Color: N/a
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: N/a
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: N/a
Backpack style: N/a
Backpack Color: N/a
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/a
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/a
Technique List:

>Start out with these:
.Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
.Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
.Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)

Ninjutsu:

.Fire ball jutsu
.Wind rush

Genjutsu:

(Uchiha clan Genjutsu)
.Runing man : In which he gives th illussion that he's escaping
.Quick Sand: Gives the opponent the illussion of them sinking




Character Description:


Personality: Cocky, and vain for he thinks his power is the most superior, but Humble to those few he respects and upper ranks.
Nindo: "Power isn't given out, it's created by strong people, and I am one of the strongest people."
Height: 6'3
Weight: 199
Original Eye Color: One is bandaged as the other is always Sharingan
RPC Picture:
User Image
Background information:
Kiyuki was a rouge shinobi , killing multiple ninja from each and ever village. Until his cousin Katsumi and him came in contact in an unfortinate situation. He then turned himself in and was in the prison for 6 months in the harshes situation, and was released by the Hokage's assistant, who he killed a week leader and went into hiding. After a year of hiding, He went to the Akatsuki and saved a life of the leader, and he went back to the leaf.










Profile Information:



Main Shinobi Information:


Full Name: Kio Yakamari Jr.
Nicknames: The seventh blade
Age: 19
Birthdate: 1/1
Village: N/a
Race: Japanese
Rank: N/a
Shinobi Profession: Murderer
Ninja Type/Class: Swordsman

Major Shinobi Information:


Bloodline/Clan: N/a
Current Bloodline Stage:N/a
Chakra Color: N/a
Chakra Elements: N/a
Battle Strengths:
1. Great swords man
2. The sword scroll so he's never without a blade

Battle Weaknesses:
1! No use of chakra what so ever.
2.Over protective his flute
3.Cats
Fights won: {Do not fill out just yet} 0
Fights Lost: {DO not fill out just yet} 0
Special Shinobi Skills: {What your RPC’s best ninja moves are! You are only allowed 3!}
1.
2.
3.

~Completed Missions:~
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations: {No organizations first hand!}
N/a

Summoning Information:


Summon Type: Swords
Boss Summon: Sabastion

Shinobi Equipment Information:



Weapon Class: Sword
Name of your weapon: Sabastion
Weapon Range: 1-50 feet
Special Abilities: It puts the opponent in a nightmare, until released, or defeated.

>Start out with these:


Character Description:


Personality: Calm and collective during all stages in his life whether it be battle or shopping.
Nindo: "The worst pain will be over soon"
Height:6'6
Weight: 214
Original Eye Color: blue
RPC Picture:
User Image
Background information:
Through out all of his life he has been a calm killer. Since the age of 6 he's had his murderous lifestyle, starting with two men and a woman from the leaf.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 5:08 am


For the first character no for the space and time jutsu. I can already see that being god modded. For the second the special ability is not enough information about that ability. If it doesn't matter the distance and such and there's no way to get out that's a god mod. Also how is a sword going to get from one foot to fifty feet of range?

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:31 pm


I hate to be critical unless it's someone I know actually likes constructive criticism... but on your second toon it says under weaknesses that he can't use chakra. You realize that means the Sharingan would kill him when he uses it. ganjutsu and ninjutsu do not work. The purpose of putting blood onto summoning scrolls is to activate chakra through that blood therefore he can't summon anything. Look at Lee or fuzzy eyebrows. He uses nothing but Taijutsu. that's all you character can use if he can't use chakra. Your sword uses a genjutsu but as stated all genjutsu whether activated by item or shinobi requires chakra from the user. I personally am bringing this up because you character is completely countered by this. A sharingan requires a very large well of chakra and complete control over a persons chakra. Especially if you try to us Susanoe (sp) Just to be active in the Sharingan mode requires a powerful use of chakra. Therefore if your character can't use his own chakra the Sharingan would kill him the instant it turns into sharingan mode.
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