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 Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 11:05 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 1:39 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 11:54 am
The promise of the future.
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 9:45 pm
|~*^.[Jay].^*~|
Thank you both. Now...can you guess which fairytale I've transformed? I know that's practically a trick question, but...
|~*^.[Shadow was here].^*~|
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 11:45 pm
OMFG! It's Sleeping Beauty!
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 12:05 am
[Shadow.Elven-mage] |~*^.[Jay].^*~|
Thank you both. Now...can you guess which fairytale I've transformed? I know that's practically a trick question, but...
|~*^.[Shadow was here].^*~| Well the spindle is from Sleeping Beauty and the fairies giving gifts I don't remember which fairie tale are from.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 7:01 pm
dramaartwriting [Shadow.Elven-mage] |~*^.[Jay].^*~|
Thank you both. Now...can you guess which fairytale I've transformed? I know that's practically a trick question, but...
|~*^.[Shadow was here].^*~| Well the spindle is from Sleeping Beauty and the fairies giving gifts I don't remember which fairie tale are from. |~*^.[Jay].^*~|
That's also Sleeping Beauty, as is the stone tower in the forest. Even the rest of the tale - the faeries bringing up the girl, her name, Aurora...some of the elements come from versions or transformations that not everybody would be familiar with, but everything except for the ending has been filched from another version of the same tale.
|~*^.[Shadow was here].^*~|
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:58 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:08 pm
lets see if I can creat a fairy tale one and if you can guess
lost forever
trapedinside
always truobblid
no place to hide
wickied people
at comand
always demanding
never asking lend me a hand
always wishing
lost in song
waiting forever
it seems so long
one day she'll find
a person who cares
some day she'll find
a person that dares
this person she has found
to help her on her way
it seems she finly found
something to brighten up her day
so now she dances in the clouds
happy as can be
dances with her prince
no where no one can see
then it does end
and her wish do now crumble
she goes down in a crash
her carage takes a fumble
yet some how she makes it back
to her dreams up in thy shy
her prince and her together
till the day the day they say good-bye
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:10 pm
that was fun and you know what yours is so much better then mine and you should give yourself credit... your work is a form of art. a great form indeed. for you have talints that you may not see
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 7:06 pm
It has a good setup and nice premise but it would've been better if you told a story of your own. Still, you probably did the story justice. Nice job, keep it up! I really like your style of writing.
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:08 pm
dramaartwriting [Shadow.Elven-mage] |~*^.[Jay].^*~|
Thank you both. Now...can you guess which fairytale I've transformed? I know that's practically a trick question, but...
|~*^.[Shadow was here].^*~| Well the spindle is from Sleeping Beauty and the fairies giving gifts I don't remember which fairie tale are from. You don't remember the faries?
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:29 pm
*^.[Jay].^*
dude dont call me dude: Cinderella? I like yours, actually. I'm glad you like mine, too.
darkblaze_16: That was the assignment - to transform a fairytale. I like my style of writing too. ^.^
...[Shadow was here]...
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:10 pm
[Shadow.Elven-mage] *^.[Jay].^*
dude dont call me dude: Cinderella? I like yours, actually. I'm glad you like mine, too.
darkblaze_16: That was the assignment - to transform a fairytale. I like my style of writing too. ^.^
...[Shadow was here]... Well I didn't know that, if I had I would have given you an eight instead of seven. Sorry if I came off as a fangirl, I just didn'y know what to say.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:15 pm
[Shadow.Elven-mage] *^.[Jay].^*
dude dont call me dude: Cinderella? I like yours, actually. I'm glad you like mine, too.
darkblaze_16: That was the assignment - to transform a fairytale. I like my style of writing too. ^.^
...[Shadow was here]... thankies
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