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 Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 4:52 pm
Hello, my name is Dr. Brief. In this topic, I will be quoting all sorts of posts made by you, the guild members. This is not intended to insult anybody in any way. Ignore any insults that the saiyans might give to you, and think of this as a mere learning tool and something to be happy about.
I shall be searching for grammar and spelling errors then I shall teach you the proper spelling or grammar that you should be using.
Vegeta: I wonder how many people cannot spell in this guild. This should be worth a few laughs.
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 5:18 pm
Trunks: Grandpa! I found one! This notice came from the Battle Royale that Hercule is hosting.
Dr. Brief: Let me see... This one is from a crew member called G-Wing Gurl. Hmm, she needs to work on the spelling on the word "girl". Oh well. I am not here to nit-pick on user names.
Vegeta: they already found one, huh? And according to my scouter, this is what that note said:
sounds like fun anyone want to fight me
Dr Brief: Now pay attention, G - Wing.
First of all, whenever you start any sentence, you must use a capital letter.
And secondly, please refrain from using the emoticons as a substitute for proper punctuation.
Therefore, your sentence should read:
Sounds like fun anyone want to fight me?
Vegeta: Hang on a minute, doctor, you aren't done with this. There are more errors here. This is a perfect example of a run-on sentence.
G-Wing Gurl, you must listen to the Prince here. I will steer you on the proper path, unlike Geezer face who calls himself a doctor.
You sound like Goten when he was little with the first half of what you wrote here.
"Sounds like fun!" Heh, trying to quote him from Dragon Ball Z Budokai 2 World Tournament modes are you?
I don't blame you if you are answering Empress Dee. She's all about innocence and fun.
Anyway, if that's what you wanted, then fine. But, this second part sounds like the actual question. And, it should start with the word "does", otherwise it's an incomplete sentence.
Your post should actually read, "Sounds like fun!" Does anyone want to fight me?
Since you would be quoting someone from Dragon Ball Z, it's best to use quotation marks. That's why it's called quoting.
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