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 Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 12:46 pm
I have a song that I grew up before writing the rest of, and I wish I still had the youthful emotions that I had when I meant to write it but I'm 31 now and don't feel as powerful destiny-torn emotions, at least not in the same simple direct and true way, it's buried for my sanity by the experience with handling the emotions and keeping myself feeling "ok".
Anyway, if any of you want to take up this song lyric and make it into a song I give you permission as long as you put "co-written with Donald Anderson" if it ends up on any recordings.
It is meant to be a song about loving so much you would die for them, and the bittersweet sadness, and about the synchronicity of lives intertwined in a intuition of some future destiny that one wants to create more than anything. At the same time a Midieval romantic feeling of noblilty for someone who is worthy. Here goes...
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Fly with wings of an angel,
fly with wings of a dove,
fly with wings of an angel,
with your mind on heaven above...
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:51 pm
wow thats really perdy... wish I could write about sweeetness things like that.... wanna see me try? give me a title and I'll try...
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 7:37 am
Nice could be a chorus in the making.
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:26 am
Good. 3nodding Sounds like some sort of song I'd hear on a recording played at the beginning of each chorus class. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 2:40 pm
I can't remember the rest of it I created in a dream way back when I was 17
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 8:57 am
I hope someone takes you up on the offer. I would love to hear that
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 11:51 am
evil_twin_1975 I hope someone takes you up on the offer. I would love to hear that Thanks I hope so too!
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 6:56 pm
dramaartwriting I can't remember the rest of it I created in a dream way back when I was 17 how old are you now?
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Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 5:10 pm
I would love to help you. Hey I'm seventeen and still raving with wild emotions, although I doubt that'll ever change, it's kind of apart of my personality. So I will work on finishing you're lyrics and I'll PM them to see if you like them huh? Here I go to work!
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 2:24 am
Supergirl126 dramaartwriting I can't remember the rest of it I created in a dream way back when I was 17 how old are you now? 31 O.o I know, I'm in the minority here. Laharl shall you post it or me? The song you wrote from it is fine with me.
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:12 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:55 pm
Sorry I didn't post, I just read the message ^^;
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 12:48 pm
dramaartwriting Laharl Part Dux Here are the lyrics. I sincerely hope you like them I put my best writing effort into it. So without further ado:
I love the, yet I haven't a clue why
You're sweet tender touch,
Moves me to cry
With Joy and so much
More emotion than I could ever say
But I would feel selfish
For asking you to stay
This feeling I will Cherish
Forevermore
And nevermore
Will I love another
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Fly with wings of an angel,
fly with wings of a dove,
fly with wings of an angel,
with your mind on heaven above...
It is here that I'll remain
For your eventual return
While you go explore the vast terrain
About the world and life you learn
And in this long time
May I make me a better man
Wash my soul of life's crime
Thinking of you I know I can
Be a better I
For you I'm willing to die
So ?
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Fly with wings of an angel,
fly with wings of a dove,
fly with wings of an angel,
with your mind on heaven above...
In my heart I know
You'll come back to me
And so our love will flow
My muteness inspired by the sight of thee
The glorious day of you're return
A dream I often dream
Warmth within me burns
The memories of your face like a sunbeam
Alas the day has arrived
You now within my arms
Oh how long I've been deprived?
From your sweet and lovely charms
The long journey's crescending
Has come to our happy ending
And now
In my arms
I can tell
you have?
Flown with the wings of an Angel
Flown with the wings of a dove
Flown with the wings of an Angel
With your mind on heaven above?
Enjoy Thats so beautiful it made me tear up heart WOW O_O crying
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 3:07 pm
Wow that's really inspiring I love them! I really hope some one can write something for you with this and renesance would be beautiful with this!!
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:28 am
i can preform the bass, i think i have something good down so far. ill record a video and post it later.
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