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Sapphirianna

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 12:08 pm


I'm trying to get my writing back on track, so I've been brainstorming, and this came up.

"Delete: A World Inside a Word"

The life inside of a computer is boring if there's nothing to do, right? So what we have here are Programs: beings made entirely of codes that actually have feelings, personalities, and such.

The Master (owner of the computer and the person who created the Programs) vanished years ago, and his computer (to eliminate all stupid comments, we'll say that this computer is a super computer, okay?) is still running. While he's gone, the Programs begin building their own world that imitates the world outside. Soon, some of the Programs grow corrupted and seize the world.

Our main character is a Program who dreams of seeing the outside world. A dreamer girl who is just a simple Program with barely any talents and can't really see her use. And she sets out on a journey through the endless world the Programs have created for themselves. But she runs into a few Viruses that threaten to delete the entire outside world once they unlock the secret of becoming human. Our main character must act quickly if she wants to keep her Master's realm from being destroyed, thus obliterating their existence as well.



Any comments?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:54 pm


That sounds like a great idea! The plot might be difficult to write in a way where it's not completely confusing, but I like the concept.

k-k-k-kenna

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