|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:01 pm
No one's here.
I'm on my own.
No one near.
Nothing known,
will rid me of this sorrow.
I am all alone.
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:06 pm
I like it.
It's short, sweet, and has a nice rhythm.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:09 pm
egoxromantic I like it. It's short, sweet, and has a nice rhythm. Thanks. That's actually one of my better ones. Blah.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:49 pm
Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually.
Someone hold me.
I can't go on like this,
With no one understanding.
My world is dark,
And no one tries,
To comfort or to help me.
Someone hold me.
Please.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:11 pm
Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. Hmmmm... I couldn't find the rhythm in that. Where is the beat?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:25 pm
egoxromantic Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. Hmmmm... I couldn't find the rhythm in that. Where is the beat? I think that the pattern in that one is that there's not really a steady rhythm. It just flows well.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:27 pm
Xxx Pocket Watch xxX egoxromantic Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. Hmmmm... I couldn't find the rhythm in that. Where is the beat? I think that the pattern in that one is that there's not really a steady rhythm. It just flows well. I guess if you read it really fast.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:29 pm
egoxromantic Xxx Pocket Watch xxX egoxromantic Xxx Pocket Watch xxX Here's another one, that I just came up with a few minutes ago, actually. Someone hold me. I can't go on like this, With no one understanding. My world is dark, And no one tries, To comfort or to help me. Someone hold me. Please. Hmmmm... I couldn't find the rhythm in that. Where is the beat? I think that the pattern in that one is that there's not really a steady rhythm. It just flows well. I guess if you read it really fast. …
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
